Bright Sword: Starting from a Small Soldier to Fight the War

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Author introduction, not clear. , I thought it was a time traveler who wasted my time to come in and take a look. Leave

Two or three strokes of the master's introduction are enough to let readers know that he is a time traveler. There is no need to say anything else. If you say more, you will be wrong. Now I am writing with too much force and it is not rounded. There are loopholes everywhere. It is recommended to delete it.

Don't you want to go to the division headquarters to ask for it? Are you always thinking about what I wrote about the autumn wind?

There is no sense of immersion at all, and the protagonist's performance is too poor.

This story about civilian militia is too long, it took me about 10 days to write it 😒

When should the contents of a certain letter be exposed to the Eighth Route Army/Jinsui Army? For example, Chu Yunfei learned that he had a junior brother, Brigadier Chen saw the teacher's photo, etc...

Sentinel, go to bed. Is it a problem of lack of guns? Is it a problem of the enemy touching you?

If you want to combine the invincible flow and the reality flow, you need to control the rhythm. I guess you are not at this level~~~