I Am the Comic Savior

To be honest, the second part is not as good as the first one, fast and neat, no nonsense, and the second one starts to talk nonsense, especially after one change. The original protagonist was a calm, brave, and daring young man who dared to fight. From the second one, he became a fun-loving person with out-of-the-box thinking. I don't know what the author was thinking, but the difference between before and after is so outrageous that I really can't stand it.

In the second dungeon, I couldn't understand the logic of the protagonist. Why did he, a layman with the Speed ​​Force, have to fiddle around with a time ball? Even if Barry changed the position of a tomato can, the timeline was restarted. The protagonist also went to Krypton to cause trouble on the eve of its destruction. It was the author's blessing that he didn't create more timelines. If there are really many more timelines, not to mention how many lives there are in the universe, there are only seven billion people on the earth. If the timelines are to be eliminated to ensure overall stability, will the protagonist be considered killed? If we really want to save the world, shouldn't we morally kidnap Barry and let him come up with a solution? I don't understand what he is doing

It was good that way before... Now it feels too out of touch... Your original flaws all came from the fact that the first reward was too intense, and later upgrade rhythm and combat power control are prone to problems. In fact, you only need to fix that part, add some restrictions to the reward or cut off some functionality... Speaking of the big changes after being complained about, you don't have an outline, right? Now I don't like this version very much... There are other minor problems, which were originally easy to fix. The time when Carla's spaceship crashed was changed to the time when she was sent back a week after the spacecraft had crashed, and the protagonist is from the memory of the movie and the relationship with the surroundings. During the interaction, I realized that I was near the base in the movie, so I just fixed it... Originally, when I went back to the past, the main axis of the story was very clear and comfortable. I rescued Kara early so that she would be in a better state a few years later (by the way, the emotional heroine +1), go Find Batman to cheer him up (here you can create a plot and fight some villains), let Batman start preparing for Zod's invasion in advance (Batman is like DND Master, the more time and resources you give him to prepare before the war, the better he will be), go find the Barry of this world, correct him Correct his personality, let him not be so abstract in the future, and start training him early. In the end, quantity turned into qualitative change. A few years later, he destroyed Zod's legion without any casualties, successfully saved the universe, and the copy ended... Wouldn't it be nice to write it so smoothly...

You mean, the main character hasn't trained at all in a month? When I arrived, I was like a new recruit. I couldn't stand it.

The energy conversion ratio problem is huge 😵 If you want to output power in proportion, you have to know the total amount of energy. So where does an AI get the data to know the total amount of power of a star for the protagonist? It should be noted that the differences between stars are also very huge. If the protagonist controls the output power by himself, then it makes sense, an AI. . .

A boring, unmotivated protagonist. I died so many times the first time I saved the world, and the second time started a month later, but I didn't actively train myself and enrich myself, so I just muddle along and live peacefully. No one told him that the second rescue mission would be an infinite loop, right? Aren't you afraid that you will die once and be gone?

When you have no power, you are cautious and gain the best future at a relatively small price. With power, you can't even speak except for punching. In the second world, you are like a native who only realized it was DC when you saw Batman. Regardless of whether you have seen the Flash movie, you can always understand the character of The Flash, right? He didn't say a word when he came up and planned to kill Barry, DC's only conscience. If you kill him, will Batman, Supergirl and Flash let you go? Do we have to continue the cycle? The imagination is good, but the detail processing is terrible.

I just want to know why everyone knows that the nemesis of the Kryptonians is the Red Sun. Even if there has never been a nemesis on the earth, the first nemesis has just arrived on the earth, and everyone on earth knows about it.

The most exciting part is in the introduction. You can withdraw after reading it.

The second world is a mess (I didn't mean to say that the first world was well written)

What if you say that the stellar power in the body relies on system control? I really didn't hold back because of Tony's AI control. He was still a temporary armor that he made up in less than a month. Although he is a genius, he is not that outrageous. What do you think Tony is, Tinker Bell?

I can just move it out of the bookshelf

The writing has a sense of AI generation, and some descriptions no one likes to use except AI.

To be honest, I don't understand that the protagonist is just an ordinary person without superpowers. He only needs to know the information and give it to him. Why do you have to fight with superpowers to die? Agent's spy infiltration work What is the difference between your chances of winning the Mark Six lottery when you buy a lottery ticket when you are free? Your writing is indeed good, but you are,, do you know? Why don't you go find the sister of the imprisoned person? Obviously knowing that his fighting power is strong enough to solve the problem alone Go to Iron Man directly and notify Wanda, then some problems will be solved Do you have to seek death yourself? ps: After reading the first plot, I roughly understood that the protagonist is probably a personal heroic view of history Putting all the solutions to the problem on individuals. Well, how should I put it? To sum up, this novel is probably half written by AI, right? For example, let's say the protagonist beats the Wasp to death. But the shrinking and enlarging objects caused by his particles will not return to their original state due to the death of the individual. After the protagonist was beaten to death, the person turned back to his original size. This is abnormal.

Reminds me of that book "Multiverse of Madness". The first copy is also Marvel's and the second copy is also "The Flash". It's very good. Good luck to the author of this book. . . . . . The future is promising

It can be seen that the author used Deep seek V3 to polish his novel.

It is neither a poisonous weed nor a good grass, it is a weed.

The first world always felt guilty for hurting Quicksilver. Can World 2 kill The Flash without hesitation? The first world is pretty well written, but the second world is really a mess.

You can get Iron Man to help, why not let him go with Scarlet Witch?

The author has not updated for three days and may have become a eunuch.

The protagonist is not afraid. This is probably due to the sentinel potion. There is a negative personality who eats all negative emotions as food.

There has never been a savior, not a god or an emperor. Not those heroes, it's all up to you to save yourself!

I feel like the story is pretty good now, I'm looking forward to it