The Family Master Gui Guzi Was a Man Who Dominated the World During the Qin Dynasty.

If you don't practice martial arts, all you rely on is your mouth, and your speech is also very simple. Everything you say can be seen by those in high positions, but the people around the protagonist are as if they have no brains, and regard the protagonist's words as treasures.

The protagonist is very talented, but if he doesn't practice hard, he drinks and has fun every day, and is speechless. From now on, he can just rely on his words to defend himself.

Guiguzi's lineage grew up with two apprentices fighting against each other, and it's not very logical to have a third apprentice!

The entry point is wrong. Guigu's rules dictate that the two disciples, Zongheng and Heng, will die. Whoever wins will be the next Guiguzi. The whole Lao San is still a drunken womanizer and not diligent in martial arts. Does he deserve to sit at the same table as Gai Nie Weizhuang? Not to mention how bright and upright the protagonist is, but he must at least be an ordinary person with normal views, right? The author likes to write about lazy drunkards. If you don't cheat, you can make great progress by drinking and being lazy in martial arts. I would suggest not writing a fanfic about Qin Shi Mingyue where warriors fly around. Writing an alternate history is quite suitable for such a messy protagonist. Otherwise, the character of the protagonist talks too much and is weak. If he is not chopped into pieces by the villain, and if he does not see it on the shelves, he will know that the IQ of other people has been reduced to a level that is even more stupid than mentally retarded.

To be honest, this is no longer the time to celebrate more than one year. A time traveler with high IQ will serve as a "minister" to the natives in troubled times?

Another one to take over the giant salamander, never seen again

It's too fantasy, not a fantasy about military power, but a protagonist who says a few words and is followed by others. It's unclear and illogical. Basic logical errors are the most taboo in writing novels.

It's so well written. If you dare to be a eunuch, I'll go to your house to c. If you put it on the shelf, I'll order it all and support it.

Ask the protagonist if he will take the offer of Amazing Salamander. If he takes the offer, it won't be a waste of time.

You don't have to use martial arts, but you can't have highlights. You've created a world of high-level martial arts and you can win by talking.

Isn't this a time traveler? In modern society, there are not many people who are addicted to alcohol, right? Why after time travel, he became a drunkard.

Is it the book about licking Yingzheng or the book about Qin after Qin destroyed the six kingdoms? Please tell me early to avoid waste

This writing style, which author is so good at it? It doesn't look like a newcomer.

It's not required that the writing be excellent, but this writing is like that of a primary school student, it's poisonous

Good-looking, more updated, better-looking than most of the Qin Dynasty colleagues, not the kind of person who starts unparalleled killing but doesn't know which country the protagonist wants to choose, like the newbie who comes to prove the truth from the demon from outside the territory? ?

Write less about women, too much is not enough.

The writing is indeed quite good. The plot of the protagonist is indeed much more powerful than that of the original Gai Nie Weizhuang, but there is no need to add some emotional drama to every female character who appears.

This novel is almost finished. If I continue to write it, it will be full of watermarks and not interesting, which makes the rating of this novel very low.

At the beginning, the protagonist talks about the unification of Qin, but later on he wants to unify.

What's going on now? Didn't you say that the Lady of the Pearl was received?

After seeing the latest chapter, Luo Wang was directly crushed to death. The top combat power is all on your side, so what else can you say? It's just a matter of whether you win or not.

I would like to recommend a new book Become an immortal through waste Thank you

The first chapter contains too many points of dissuasion. . .