Casting Spells Permanently Increases Attributes, I Just Want to Quietly Farm Monsters

After reading the previous point, it is still the most common mistake for newcomers. They like to throw away settings. Half of the content of more than ten chapters is settings. Always remember that settings serve the plot, not that the plot is driven by the settings. In other words, I feel that the author still pays too much attention to readers' opinions. He basically replies to every article. It is good to respond to feedback, but I hope not to be affected by feedback.

I have read a lot of books with a similar setting. Only the protagonist knows that there is a crisis of annihilation in rebirth. Rapid development. Various pretense. The fault is ahead of others. Rebirth is already a big hangup. Add an awesome golden finger. If you develop slowly, you will be called useless. If you develop quickly, others are completely supporting roles. A roadside, not on the same level. The protagonist is outstanding. It is not fun at all. In the mid-term, only the map is changed and super villains appear. Only the protagonist can defeat it. Data landslide Also, the survival of a world cannot only rely on the protagonist to cheat and save lives. Without the protagonist, the earth would not be the same. I hope the author can write a different and exciting story.

If Qi Ming was really the disciple of the protagonist before he was reborn, he wouldn't be so naive. Now he has directly transformed into the protagonist's little fanboy. There is no need for other passers-by to say that the protagonist is awesome. The main reason is that your writing skills are not so strong, and it will be a bit embarrassing to watch. Moreover, the protagonist's ability does not require joining the official. You have not described this official well. After taking control of the situation, the protagonist must be willing to join them. It is best to balance the relationship between the protagonist and the official.

To be honest, if the protagonist's talent is just like that, it can't be called supreme.

Everyone knows that this kind of ruthless G needs to restrict the protagonist, and everyone understands it. But yours is based on numerical values. You add numerical values ​​when you kill monsters. If you limit the protagonist's value by using card values, it will make the protagonist lose the sense of substitution. The map has been changed and the numerical value is only over 1,000. Is this normal? ? Isn't it crazy to hoard values ​​with this kind of hang-up?

1. In the book, the structure of the state apparatus, the intensity of decision-making and mobilization, and the speed of emergency response are significantly underestimated, so much so that it seems like child's play. The emergence of such obvious supernatural abilities in such a large area (5 million people worldwide) only requires the selected people to report to the police within three days, and those who do not report are threatened with "illegality." Doesn't this directly drive away people's hearts? At this time, in addition to the official organizations established by the candidates within the organizational system, for the private candidates, it is obvious that "cooperation and absorption" should be the core of the action, rather than "preparation" as the core. In addition, the main point where the protagonist has the biggest lead over the official is "information", and even bug-level talents are secondary. This is also the core element of the cooperation between the protagonist and the state machine. In this regard, you can refer to the interaction between the protagonist and the official in the book "Will the World Be Destroyed Today?", P. S. The plot of using a "deputy officer" to bribe the protagonist really made me laugh, it is too small-scale peasant 2. Regarding the words and deeds of the protagonist, especially after the first "defense", he threatened other players not to do whatever they want in the real world. Of course, the original intention is good, but the content of the post is full of the feeling of a middle-aged boy. It is completely impossible to tell that the protagonist has been one of the few people who have stood at the pinnacle of mankind in his previous life. He is completely like a high school kid who is very good at playing games, and has no sense of authority. 3. The first selection is for talents with outstanding merits in human society and whose four-dimensional attributes are beyond ordinary people. However, among the powerful people in the novel's past lives, it is not obvious that a few have obvious official backgrounds. But at least in "Mid-Xia", the absolute number of talents absorbed by the system must be the largest, and the resources that can be integrated are far beyond those of the private sector. It is difficult to imagine past lives. After so many years of development, most of the talents and masters who have emerged are "savages" like the protagonist 4. The above three points are combined with the author's writing. It is a more self-consistent beginning to start from an ordinary online game and gradually affect reality after several version updates. It not only provides a reason to weaken the official presence in the game, but also explains why so many masters in the previous life were from private backgrounds. 5. The main attraction of game novels is that the main sense of satisfaction comes from the rich combination of various data, attributes, occupations, skills, and characteristics, the power of the system and the reasonable deduction of the plot. This requires the author to have a long-term, systematic setting structure, and a small amount of patches is fine. However, it is necessary to preset the core mechanism and gameplay that are as self-consistent as possible. Judging from the author's few words so far, the author has few manuscripts. I don't know if the setting and plot outline are complete. 6. The numerical expansion brought by the early talent is indeed very satisfying, but how to avoid the collapse of the combat power system after the mid-term requires the author's ingenuity

At least where I see it, the data is considered normal. I just don't know if it will expand later.

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Seeing Qi Min shouting for help and then giving up, and not liking the nanny article, the author was rude and even more indifferent.

Qin Feng

Reading the introduction gives me a taste of ancient literature from 20 years ago

Is the introduction carefully written? The highest level of this writing is that of a junior high school student. The author is just a hobby. If he wants to make a living in this industry, he should improve his writing more.

Although it's not a good thing to say, but based on the current update status and achievements, this book seems to have little future. The author should be in the internship now, and should finish it as soon as possible, and then go to settle down for a while, practice the skills well, and then come back and continue writing!

The game doesn't want to see rebirth. Normal is better. It's disgusting to have to add a rebirth setting.

The time setting is so weird, an academy is only 300 years old! It's still on a cosmic level, and it's still famous in multiple ways. It's so nonsense. Any other settings added later will be against the rules.

The introduction is a bit poor. I can't tell much, only the genre. If this genre just came out, this introduction would be OK, but now... There is something really attractive. After all, it is no longer the time to rely on genre alone to attract popularity.

Start playing as soon as it's released? Three chapters for a promotion?

I had an inspiration for a game theme. The protagonist has no active skills, and the only way to attack is to slash, but what? He has many passive skills, such as Huang Gai's skill [Volcano Eruption] in Dream of the Three Kingdoms 2. When someone attacks the protagonist, magma will be automatically sputtered, and it will be splashed by multiple people. There is also equipment rebound. When the enemy attacks the protagonist, he does not need to take action. The enemy will be hurt by the rebound, lose health, or even be killed by the rebound. ...... I searched on the Internet for similar topics, and found that there were no brilliant and successful ones. I have already thought of the title of the book: [I Have Passive Skills]

This kind of book has a lot of rotten tomatoes, and I can't get interested in reading it.

In this way, readers are screened to see if there are too many bad money coming into the factory to drive screws.

Alas, there are a series of chapters that can be skipped, and I have no desire to follow them.

The protagonist's talent is so awesome, so don't be like the protagonist in other books. Others are improving at the same speed as the protagonist, and their levels may be higher than the protagonist's. At the last moment, there are still a group of people who have the same level as the protagonist. Many other similar books are written like this. No matter how talented the protagonist is, they just make others upgrade faster than the protagonist.

There is a contradiction in the first chapter. If someone goes back in time in the future to detect the protagonist's problem, will the future protagonist allow this to happen?

It has the flavor of monster killing, but the author's ability to write stories is still poor, maybe because the copy is too short. In other aspects, it can be seen that it has been improving. It is a pity that it has ended like this.

As the title states, if you add mana and damage directly, as we all know, ten thousand layers of magic cannot beat ten thousand layers of Thresh. And the protagonist is still a thin-skinned mage. No matter how high the damage is but can't hit anyone, isn't it still useless? The assassin took him away directly with his stealth skills? 😅

Write more, accumulate more experience, and make progress quickly.

Delete all the paragraphs that refer to me and the reading experience will be half as good

I don't like books that overtly suppress the protagonist. If the author has read a certain science's electromagnetic gun and the Magical Index. You will know the memories of those years before your rebirth. Doesn't put any pressure on the brain.

At least add a mechanism to ignore magic immunity