My Days as a Detective at Hogwarts

I remember there were trace appearances and tracking spells in the wizarding world, and Newt used them in Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them

The author is serious about writing the reasoning, the process is rigorous, and the clues are fair. It is one of the better puzzle designs I have seen in HP reasoning fans so far. The only problem is that (for me personally) it is not interesting enough to read and the pace is too fast. Maybe it's because the design is more classical, and the protagonist is investigating the case as soon as he enters the game. The advantage is that the amount of information is very sufficient, and the word count is not high. The disadvantage is that it is a bit tiring to read, the description is dry, and there is no sense of immersion. But if you just like this kind of purely reasoning writing, just investigating cases, I think you can just close your eyes and enter. I still like the funnier type.

The setting is really good. It incorporates the map and settings of Hogwarts Legacy. It is not written around Harry Potter. It is very creative and the characters are not broken. The setting is that the protagonist is personable and elegant. This setting must be grasped well. If he becomes a heartthrob later, it will fall apart.

Many daily actions that should be replaced by magic are always done like Muggles. For example, house elves should be able to Apparate at Hogwarts.

The plot is coherent, but not magical enough

Compared with other Harry Potter protagonists, I feel that this work is very serious and down-to-earth in telling a good story, and there are no unnecessary jokes or plots that deliberately persecute the characters. Finally, I beg the author to update as soon as possible. Too little, not enough to see 😭

Liangcao, what can I say about the description of the heroine? In order to achieve the effect of multiple heroines, Fleur, Qiu Chang, and Hermione were all described in a weird way. Either they fell in love with it as soon as they started building it😓 or the descriptions were not in-depth enough. I don't feel that there are many female protagonists, but I feel that they are all female supporting characters, but generally their flaws are not hidden.

The story is good and the writing is okay. But too Muggle. The protagonist's detective process is like a Muggle

Update soon! 😭

How should I put it... A strange novel🙂

The tag is "There are so many female protagonists". At present, the potential female protagonists are Hermione, Fleur, Luna and Daphne, but I can only say that there are almost no emotional scenes. Except for Hermione and Fleur who have that tendency, the male protagonist is almost like a wooden figure.