From Blood Mage to Styx Ancestor

The protagonist often appears to be inexplicably righteous. The inexplicable justice looks very annoying. While highlighting the protagonist's cold and decisive character, he also engages in these inexplicable justices. Isn't it rude? It would be okay if the protagonist was a middle-aged and enthusiastic character. The author describes the protagonist as a decisive character with some inexplicable justice. I'm really speechless. There's a lot of conflict between the characters, okay?

I keep seeing the male and female protagonists of new dungeons recognize each other. I really can't stand it. It started to feel wrong in the middle of the Dragonborn arc. I originally thought that the protagonist helped the Dragonborn to solve the hidden dangers in the North. But it turned out that the heroine was given to the simulator player for free. If the dragon soul was given to the male protagonist, they would be a couple for the rest of their lives? Originally, I came here for the blood mage. I don't object to you taking the right path to kill evil people. They all use blood spells anyway. Later, they transform into mage, demons, and mad warriors. The most poisonous point is the female protagonist. After the first meeting, she helped the gang to form a bond. After all, she is a destiny dragon descendant and can get some ancient dragon materials. Then she inexplicably accepted the female protagonist and directly joined the team? Why do you always focus on writing "Sugar Smile" that you like the female protagonist??? The latest copy is, for you and I came to this world and met, ah! When you meet the right person, you become a sweet couple Without the heroine, the performance of this book can be improved even more

Have you ever been a blood mage? It's natural to write randomly

Before the last book was put on the shelves, I was able to write something by imitating my imagination, but after it was put on the shelves, my original creation was abandoned.

While the protagonist is killing people, he says that he is a good person and eliminates harm for the people. You are a blood mage and a necromancer. How do you think you are a good person? If you want to kill this one, you should kill the other one. If you want to write a heroic character, don't be a good person and do good deeds every day. And that woman is always in love with sugar. If you can't write about emotional relationships, you don't write. Do you think the readers of the book are fools?

There is also the protagonist who is practicing magic in the back, training his own magic weapon into two swords, and the names of the Styx ancestor's magic weapons automatically appear on them. It feels like the protagonist did not take this route by himself, but he is a clone or reincarnation or something.

All great deeds require sacrifice. Maybe other civilizations don't understand, but they must obey. 🐶

Also, if you want to write a decent protagonist, don't give it a villainous title. Some of the people attracted by this kind of title are just for the title. I am the one who likes to kill the master at the beginning. I was pleasantly surprised to find another book I liked through the title, and you wrote that the protagonist became a decent person. Aren't you looking for scolding? You are equivalent to force-feeding chili peppers to people who don't eat chili peppers. I can't scold you to death.

Blood Mage Arrives in the River Styx. It's really nonsense for you to take the path of justice. The person who was attracted by the title of your book didn't want to see an evil villain.

A female protagonist appears in chapter 40? A woman appears? Always sticking to the hero? ? ? You've already written a story about a mage. If you want a female protagonist, it should be in the middle and later stages. Don't you think it's boring to have a female protagonist in all the plots in the early stage? Can't find a girlfriend in real life? ? ?

Want to write something that you don't know what to call?

The writing is very good. I like this kind of research-oriented protagonist. He travels through different worlds and gets different skills, and then studies the suture film and improves himself. He mainly does funny jokes and sews a lot of things. It's very interesting to watch.

Constantly emphasizing the justice of one's actions, the protagonist's enemies are all evil-doers, which is quite boring. No wonder the first world is the world of Long Aotian! Such an Ancestor of Styx?

I don't really like this kind of book with confusing text descriptions. It feels messy when I read it, and the narrative is not clear. I feel like the protagonist is mentally ill, and the author feels like he is having fun with himself.

Chapter 30: The protagonist is too arrogant. He sneak-attacked a mage and didn't want to kill or incapacitate him. Instead, he used a notebook to record the mage's injuries!

There's no need to mess around anymore. Return to your true level. You kid, go back and practice again.

I can only say that the idea is very good. He died of poison before finishing the free chapter. Traveling across the world to do good people and good deeds is not fun at all.

The first one was okay, but this one has some weird stuff from time to time. I hope there won't be any romance scenes later 😅

The world I experienced was written too fast. It was clearly written that Pig's Foot was developing in the direction of a mage, but somehow he became a warrior? And the article clearly felt that the written article gave people the impression that Pig's Foot should be a decisive and decisive character, with a kind of darkness. It feels like a boss, but you have to add kindness and righteous behavior to the pig's feet, such as accepting a disciple, protecting a dragon-born traveler, etc. The writing is too divisive. These can be separated and become a pair of pig's feet, a dark boss and a messenger of justice. Worse than the previous one

What I want to see most is to refine all the souls of a world, and to refine all the creatures in a world. I don't know why modern novels are not interesting at all.

Why do I think it's okay to write?

This book has a female protagonist, so let's disperse

What a good second player. If you don't have an absolute advantage, you can just explain one, two, and three there.

Chaotic evil is now a very rare thing. Most of the sofa decisive patterns use evil law as a common method, but I just want to see mindless killing. I don't want to watch evil law

It's so confusing. Isn't the protagonist a blood god? The Kingdom of God or the Sea of ​​Blood, I don't even know who the protagonist is now. The power system is in a mess.

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