My Forbidden Bonfire

Everything else is fine, but the author is obsessed with broken shoes, which is very problematic.

Author, I found a small problem, is your control of human nature not so good? As long as you write about the interaction between the protagonist and other characters, it will make people uncomfortable to read, but everything else is good, so I guess ~ you want to write about the evil of human nature, but the control is not good, which makes people uncomfortable ~ small suggestions, for reference only

The plot is blunt, like a running account

To be honest, the protagonist's fire was already very strong from the beginning, but the author just went the extra mile and added multiple weapon refiners to increase other abilities. The more abilities you have, the harder it is to write and the easier it is to forget. It is also easy to suppress and collapse. You must know that it can be milked and strengthened. It is already enough. You have to add other things. The key is to add so much in the early stage. This situation is the easiest to write down.

Even though it was recommended in the eunuch book, I didn't realize it until halfway through, and I was speechless.

You write a book like this and it is often recommended...

It's really ink. It's ten pictures. I haven't figured out the breaking power yet. And the protagonist's character is so bad. When you write about the apocalypse, you still go through this kind of character transformation process. Forget it. Even this, you did such ink. According to the comment section, the way of writing the apocalypse in 15 years is still that kind of ink.

Again and again, we entered the palace. Really

I don't quite understand why you don't just put the fire in the middle of the garbage pile and let it burn. Isn't it just setting it casually?

My personal opinion is to continue writing old works and move on to new ones. The old works already have more than 100,000 words. If you continue to work hard, the number of words will increase, and the number of updates every day will increase, the results will naturally be better. Look at the many rubbish works on the ranking list, which are more than 2 million words. If the number of words is more, it will not be bad. What's more, your writing is okay, far better than ordinary rubbish works. You just don't have the word count, and another thing is that you are very easy to break down and can't write long.

We are already at the fifth level. Why don't I, the emperor, rule over the others? A beautiful woman takes a fancy to all kinds of delicacies and enjoys them?

I thought it was an immortal when I saw the title

The protagonist is a bitch and I don't like it 😥

I like Wudi Wen very much. I actually want to write a novel. I have thought about the background of the world. The wasteland is weird. It is a world similar to the earth. The technology is 20 to 50 years more advanced than now. Controlled nuclear fusion, solid metal hydrogen, superconductivity, quantum computers or optical computers, factory automation, driving automation. Then the world changes, gray fog appears, and spreads on the earth. Nuclear bombs and missile bonfires can dispel part of the gray fog, but once it stops The gray fog immediately fills up, and zombies appear in the gray fog. The weakest ones are the zombie time war type, and they will multiply and form a zombie tide to attack humans (the denser the human life breath or life source, the more dense it is, the more monsters will be attracted) No matter how many ordinary zombies are, it is just a waste of ammunition for humans, but in the gray fog, the zombies begin to evolve into the first level ordinary people, the second level human limit, and the third level superman general 6.8 Full power rifle bullets are difficult to kill and require 12.7 Only heavy firearms above level 1 can effectively kill. Level 4 zombies start to have the wisdom to carry 12.7 From the front. 14.7 Can suppress 20 cannons to effectively kill. Level 5 requires 3040 armor-piercing projectiles. In the early stage, zombies only reach level 5 and mainly rely on the sea of corpses. Warriors, none of these can defeat the human defense line. What defeats humans is the appearance of ghosts in the gray fog. The ghosts are at least level three and can ignore certain physical attacks. They can pass through walls. Flames and laser weapons with heavy firepower can cause damage to them. It is difficult for humans to detect ghosts with the naked eye. Ghosts are close to them. A certain range of human beings can cause hallucinations in humans, and those with high mental strength can be immune. The appearance of ghosts caught humans off guard, defeated human defenses, and lost a large number of mines and production factories. Humans only had time to move and build some million-level cities with 2 billion people. There are only 50 million people left, and the whole world is even less based on this ratio. In order to prevent humans from gathering too much and attracting monsters, the official does not build tens of millions of cities, with a maximum of one million. Generally, there are 200,000 to 51 large cities. Only three 001 cities are reserved for million cities. 002 003 (001 Focuses on artificial intelligence, energy technology, the technology of the original world, 002 biotechnology (genetically modified people have a high failure rate of going crazy at about level 3, and a very small chance of perfect bodies at level 4) Awakening technology of superpowers (the failure rate of power awakening potions is about two out of ten, and they are still screened, and of course, powers can be awakened naturally) mainly combined with gray fog, 003 military war fortress defense line) a large population is dispersed, To build villages and towns, by the way, humans sent people to explore the depths of the gray fog. After paying a lot of casualties, they discovered the runes in the ruins. The runes can effectively restrain ghosts. The runes require the infusion of human spirit. Machines cannot be mass-produced and need to generate fog. Then rune bullets and rune boards have become a kind of currency. The villages use runes to exchange for materials and food for urban survival, such as protein blocks, dried earthworms, dried rats, various materials and weapons, The protagonist's soul traveled to a corpse killed by a ghost, and then was rescued by a disfigured girl in the town, an intermediate rune master. The protagonist awakened the power of solidification (relying on mental power to change the shape of materials, compressing materials, and compressing soil to change it into another material. The strength is comparable to concrete and steel. It mainly depends on the consumption. Solidification can also extract pure enhancers from the zombie crystal nuclei. The official refinement is not pure enough and will cause pollution after use. It is easy not to die. This kind of potion is relatively rare and has a high failure rate of refining). The protagonist may attract monsters because of the crowd gathering, and he also keeps his own powers secret, so he takes the initiative to move to an abandoned mine in a nearby hill. The town where the protagonist is located, can become a town mainly because of the rune mine, which is mainly the best material for carving runes, which can bring out the power of runes. Other materials will be less good at carving runes. The protagonist still has so many ideas that I can't finish writing.

That's about 20,000 words a day, so little is not enough.

Fun, flames, fire making, dead fire. In the past, it was mainly cheating by Yggdrasil and killing people.