She Is Good for Nothing but Cultivating Immortality

The sect expects the heroine to have the ability to make the sect's fortune take off, but at the same time, it also wants to provide special resources to train the heroine so that the heroine has a sense of belonging, and also sets up a battle for elixirs that puts the heroine in danger of death. Although it is right to go through hardships, it is undeniable that you need to pay a little pampering if you want the person who expects you to repay you. The resources the heroine currently obtains are earned by her own efforts, and they may be the same in the future. Therefore, I will blindly guess that the heroine has no deep affection for the sect and will only take action when necessary. She may also weigh the pros and cons when encountering special circumstances.

At present, it is quite remarkable and highly readable. Some shortcomings are that, first of all, the character descriptions are slightly labeled. For example, the shopkeeper must have "eyes shining", the enemy must have "eyes filled with shadows", etc. These are relatively low-level writing methods. It would be much better to change the method, such as "When you turn around, the dark light (light) in your eyes flashes away." Let me ask you, in reality, some of the "experts" and "second-rate people" are moody and angry, and most of them are old foxes in still waters. Maybe the author has little social experience. As for the plot, it is overall peaceful, and the dramatic conflicts are relaxed, but still a little unrestrained. In terms of characters, as a heroine who crawled out from the dead, she always felt that something was missing, and the overall character design was somewhat inconsistent with the description. For example, she was even able to retaliate with kindness for the Lu brothers and sisters who planned to frame her, and she also arranged an embarrassing point where the Lu brothers and sisters "serve her as the main character". It can only be said that the subjective vision is very good, but it does not conform to the logical narrative. Just like a woman in a boudoir, it is difficult to write Wu Song's style of gratification, revenge and murder. This requires the ability to jump out of God's perspective and use the character's own experience as the observation point. In terms of supporting roles, there are not many outstanding ones. Shen Lianqiao is a bright spot. The most incomprehensible thing is that in the world of immortality where the jungle is strong and the strong eat the strong, arranging a chestnut-haired foodie pure man is probably a female preference? As a debut novel, the author's writing skills and plot control are both excellent. Although it is a bit immature, if you stick to it, it will definitely bring us more and more surprises! ! !

Is he really a new author? I feel like the writing style is good😁😁

Has the author written on other platforms before? It really doesn't look like a newbie when you write so smoothly. If you continue to maintain this level, your results will definitely be very good in the future.

Updates are too unstable. It's tiring to follow such a long text about cultivating immortality. Normally, it's easy to catch up with the plot once a day, let alone if you spend three days fishing and two days surfing the Internet. It is still recommended to resume the normal update speed. Occasionally, if there is no update, please let me know in advance, otherwise readers will run away.

I'm quite interested in the introduction. The world of cultivating immortals is supposed to be a world where the weak eat the strong and the strong are respected. Monks fight against heaven and earth for fate and opportunities, and some are just about positions and enemies. They hate the labels and prejudices of "good, evil, evil and right". Give it a try first. I just hope that there won't be a bunch of boring love, hate, and stupid benevolence and morality.

Probably because the data is not good, I found an excuse to leave 😭 and let it go.

After reading the beginning, I feel that it is very authentic, a rare orthodox mortal stream where a female channel is a cultivator. You are a great newbie 👍I plan to support you, but I will insist on subscribing to support new authors. After all, there are too few complete stories about the female protagonist, so I hope the author will continue to do more. I'm looking forward to it a little bit (5 million words 🌹)

So pretty! It's just more painful to chase

It's good-looking, and the heroine's character and behavior are good 😍😍😍😍

Dear, my child has been in school for half a month. Is it time to come back and update? 😭

I suggest the author change the introduction. How can one cultivate immortality without talent, background, or luck?

Blindly guessing that the map may have to be changed after the secret realm is discovered. The mysterious person behind the seven sects appears, and there is also an expert behind the senior sister 🐷

Is it straight hair or inward haircut? Which editor is better?

It looks like a mortal who forgets his words. What's going on?

If there is no book club, then I can't be an old fan.

It's still very attractive to me so far. I hope the author will continue to work hard for more updates.

As soon as I came in, I read the introduction and thought it was very interesting. Save it to my bookshelf first.

Are books dead? I followed them from QQ Reading. I hate them.

Very nice. It's just that the author's updates are more stable😭😭

It's very well written. When will the author come back and update? The only disadvantage of the starting point is that there are a lot of updates.

Can only the female be killed, or none at all?