American Comics: the Motherland's Child-Rearing Robot

The writing is quite good, and there are no obvious errors in the logic of the characters, but there is no sense of substitution. Whether it is Azu or Doraemon, it cannot be substituted. Because Azu is a naughty kid, a super hero, and the author's Doraemon does not look like a serious guardian. He never tells Azu what is right and wrong, but allows him to try and make mistakes. In fact, the character of Doraemon feels a bit like selling sheep over others, and does not play a role in guiding people to do good. At least so far (see Chapter 51), I have not seen him do anything in this regard. I feel that the character name Doraemon was purely written by the author to attract readers. If the character name Doraemon was replaced by Li Hua Zhang San with a fourth-dimensional abdominal bag, he would not feel that there would be any change in the plot of the book. Maybe it's because I haven't been a parent yet and I don't know what it's like to take care of a child.

It turns out to be a time traveler novel with Doraemon skin! ! The attractiveness has dropped by more than half! ! Gone! ! 😜😜

Another one that had to be written as a time traveler.

The writing in the early stage was very messy, especially in the case of Three-Body Problem. I had no idea what I was writing, and the description of the words was not very good. Fortunately, I didn't see any poop there, so it was rated as normal.

How can I put it, this theme setting is definitely very eye-catching. But it's actually not good to have a heavy theme like the Three-Body Problem at the beginning. I feel like it would be better to have some light and entertaining dungeons in the early stage.

"Father of the Motherland" is his title, but his real name is not this. Could it be that Clark's name is Superman?

A superman who has forgotten his origins and lost his wits, plus a stupid robot who looks like Doraemon and has a name from his previous life.

Hurry up and finish writing The Three-Body Problem so that I can skip it.

Um, the good Doraemon in American comics suddenly changed to three-body. The protagonist of the three-body is not Doraemon but a native of the motherland. I feel that the writing strategy is wrong... Maybe you can bring in the character of Doraemon instead of the naughty kid Azu...

Well, the three-body problem is not very good. Not interested. You can refer to Rotten Tomatoes adoption. People of the motherland

There is a problem with the introduction. The reason why Doraemon has world-destroying weapons is just because the civilization Doraemon belongs to is too stupid. The world in our eyes may be just an after-school homework in their eyes.

Thinking deeply, finally I am not a mentally retarded person writing about Three-Body Problem. The last time I read a book, the main character traveled through time and became the master of a trillion-dollar foundation. His idea was to make money by digging antiques in the deep sea of ​​the world.

I feel like this Doraemon doesn't have enough weight in the plot. He has no subjective initiative and is more like a supporting character.

The writing is okay, but there are too many humorous forensic insertions. It is embarrassing because it is too shallow and straightforward. Of course, someone should take advantage of this. It is a good thing to mention certain four words, but some people have been talking about Wenchuan Xiangjiang. In fact, her father Ya'an had just become a Kalami who had nothing to do with the yamen. He was doing business on the job and had inexplicable big orders for tourist attractions, and his family members were involved in business. But her grandparents' generation is more worthy of investigation. By the way, a certain man's four-character traffic is pretty good.

The plot in DC was pretty good, but when it came to Three-Body Problem, the writing dropped drastically and the writing was unclear. If the protagonist wants to teach a child, he shouldn't take him to the Three-Body Problem. What can be learned from going to Trisolaris? What is the difference between fighting and killing in Trisolaris and in DC? I remember that there was also a book about DC's Dad Flow (The Sorrowful Father). That book was well written, except for the emotional scenes and the extremely poisonous female characters. Others suggested that the author take a look. . .

The setting is actually pretty good, but the first world is about three-body. . . . Skip the Three-Body Problem will be on the shelves soon. . .

Why did you add three bodies here?

I can accept that the protagonist has less scenes, but I cannot accept that the protagonist is used as a backdrop

When I read the title, I thought it was a commander in the 2b world, but after reading the introduction, I remembered that it was a safe delivery type...

It's written with the energy of a child, but Doraemon is a little too unprincipled and feels a little heartless. He should know that his props will cause huge consequences if they are misused by ignorant people 😥

It's hard to defeat even if you try your best😭😭