
Pirate: a Pair of Sharingan Eyes Flash Out at the Beginning!
海贼:开局瞪出一双写轮眼!
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- Completed
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- 308k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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You don't need to look at this, you're sure to hit the streets.
You are not staring at fruit, but at concept. You can get whatever you want.
It is recommended to add some essence and "mother-child eyes to glare at whoever is pregnant".
One second, he was talking about how bad the fruit's predecessor was and how he was burying the fruit, and he was talking about a person with no waste fruit, only waste. The next second, he was using the system's krypton gold to create the Sharingan...
It's too complex. There are too many eye abilities and systems. It's better to specialize in one interesting thing.
As soon as you see krypton gold, you will know that after writing it, either the combat power will collapse, or the protagonist's combat power will be forcibly suppressed 🥱 Originally, the idea of staring at the fruit was quite good, but in the end, you insisted on the entire system, which was unnecessary and it was difficult to grasp the combat power update╮(╯_╰)╭
After reading a few chapters, I'm sure I'm going to commit. It's too complex and confusing, and I'm not sure about the combat effectiveness.
When I read the introduction, I felt like it was a street story written by AI.
The combination of the Haki of Insight and the Staring Fruit can always see the future, which is more reasonable than the introduction. That is not something that can be done by just one fruit. 🤣
Another novel that uses Devil Fruit as the power of my thoughts
No, you don't know anything about Naruto. I wrote it in the summer, and also wrote a lot of Naruto content.
The entire East China Sea
There are only 100 reward orders in the entire East China Sea, and it would take 100 billion reincarnation eyes to become a powerful pirate. Do you want to read what you wrote?
No need to read, just a few pictures and I'll jump on the street
The basic settings are off. .
From the introduction, you can tell that the author is reading One Piece. The basic setting of the Devil Fruit has been eaten up. It is not a novel ten years ago. I will not pick on you about the Xuanyuan Sword or the Pangu Fruit. In 2025, the Sharingan is still being developed. . Come in, curse and leave 🤫
No, no, no, you have illusion hypnosis, why don't you go directly to hypnotize the king to make money, and harvest the king and nobles of the East China Sea, there must be 100 billion.
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Judging from the introduction, there are a lot of pupil techniques arranged, and it feels like a refreshing pace! As a result, I couldn't stand watching the second chapter. To advance the pupil technique, you only need to charge money. The reincarnation eye costs 100 billion, and the bounty of the four emperors is only 4 or 5 billion. You can't get a samsara eye even if you surround the four emperors, let alone other pupil techniques. You are not only afraid of the suffering of the protagonist, but also afraid of the protagonist driving a Land Rover. Also, I feel that the protagonist only relies on a pair of Sharingan. In Naruto, Uchiha does not rely solely on Sharingan. If you are a pirate and you don't follow the Romans to practice physical skills and domineering, Sharingan can be used as a means to win, but you don't have to be a little minion to rely on Sharingan! Then what else can you do besides Sharingan? The Dragon Ball Saiyans next door came and the pirates did not stop learning Haki just because they were overwhelmed by their fighting power.
To the author
You might as well do a second time travel. The first time you travel to Uchiha on the night of the genocide (prenatal transmigration, awakening past life memories), you are killed by a weasel, the second time you travel to the (Uchiha) pirate world. Get the Yamata no Orochi fruit and eat it to become a nine-headed dragon. Each head has a pair of kaleidoscopes. Its abilities are: wind, fire, thunder, water, earth, yin, yang, and poison. It can be controlled by one eye and enhanced by the other. In addition to the protagonist's natal dragon head, there are nine heads. As for the ability of the natal dragon head, you can think about it yourself. Note: There can be no system, no ninjutsu, and chakra is changed to internal power without attributes, just like the ability of armed colors.
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High EQ: The same method used by Mr. Oda to develop the Nika fruit Low EQ: Violet is too good, how can she be compared to the Magatama Sharingan, a self-contained illusion magic weapon "developed" by the protagonist, who spends millions of dollars to develop it?
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A magatama has three abilities to copy hypnotic hallucinations. All day long, I want to be someone else's hunting dog. Obtain Bailey, the clown king's top thug. A reincarnation eye. It's impossible to work as a dog for 100 billion in a lifetime. He also accepts the pirate Ajinga. His pirate group has gold in the sky. At least 1.7 Trillion a year. The gold of a city in the sky. YY novels. I can't even think of it. I'm destined to be a bust.
Anyway, I think it's quite poisonous, a magatama has the ability to perform illusions.
The main character's ability is to take off his pants and fart
Once you see that the Samsara Eye is worth 100 billion, you can run away.
Another system puppet protagonist
At the beginning, I was belittling the original characters. As a result, almost all the skills I developed were original skills. Others were obtained through system classes. I feel that if the protagonist does not have a system, no matter how much inspiration he has as a time traveler, it will be useless. It is useless for him. He cannot develop it on his own. He is still so loud. If you eat the fruit of the breath, you will awaken directly and be poisoned. It is useless to make money and take lessons. Playing with your brain is not suitable for you.
Will recharging Bailey make you stronger? The logic doesn't make sense. What's the use of a pile of paper in the system? You go directly to the coinage workshop. I feel like I cleared the level very quickly. This will make you directly invincible, okay? It is reliable to use gold or various materials to become stronger. Because Bailey is unlimited♾️materials and materials are limited.
It is not written around the logical thinking that recharging Pele will make you stronger✍️. If I were to deal with businessmen with no background first, I would go to the bank later. After becoming stronger and running away. Preparing for a surprise attack on the mint. Just control it for 3 minutes and instantly recharge the invincible pirate world. Dominate the world and conquer the multiverse
The cover actually shows a dutiful son 😐
Can the most awesome person develop it when he or she is pregnant?
The creativity is OK, but the processing is not good, and the writing is poor.
First of all, in terms of the treatment of the main storyline, there is either a school that improves local Devil Fruits with knowledge, or a school of krypton gold pirates. This is a bit inconsistent with readers of both sides. Secondly, the writing style is poor, and many descriptions are a bit nonsense, but there are still some things that are not handled well. For example, the Blood Wheel Eye itself is an ability without illusion. It can be said that it is replaced by the krypton gold system. If it is not written, it will give people the feeling that something is omitted. , It makes people uncomfortable, and the thinking is very strange. A second ago, they said that Cyclops was too destructive to experiment, but in the next moment, they were used in experiments on the street. For example, whether to use tricks or not, the first reaction should be that he would fake his own death and cheat the bounty. The perspective should not be too rigid. Don't bother to describe the perspective of soldiers and the like. It can be said that when you open your eyes and see the pirates ambushing at the door, just kill them.
It feels good to see it now, and I hope to continue to work hard.
Big guys, Kangkang me 😭