404 Utopia

It looks like a cyber road novel. The protagonist's character is too weak and does not have the sense of excitement of a doomsday maniac. There is too little description of NPCs and it is almost boring to say that the group portraits are realistic. It feels neither good nor bad 🙂

Nowadays, humans can modify the environment on a large scale, and sandstorms and the like can be eliminated, not to mention that the climate can be predicted. This setting is not pleasing. You can only set an ancient environment and cannot substitute it into a modern environment. Otherwise, I would look very awkward.

It's mediocre, it starts the escape before it even starts, it doesn't fit with the theme, and it's useless with Goldfinger, and it gets on the highway before the plot even starts, and it's going to be a mess.

The setting is good, with a futuristic apocalyptic style and punk. It should be based on a movie (it seems to be a foreign name, I forgot), but it is obvious that the author's writing is not strong enough, the story plot is too compact, and the middle storyline is not smooth enough. The events come one after another without giving the protagonist time to recover and develop. From the plot, the protagonist should be given at least three or five days after the beginning to understand what happened, the role of Goldfinger, and the two supporting characters? , Camp situation, it is impossible for everyone to go to the fort. The remaining people always have their own cars, right? If the protective ability is not that strong, at least it can keep up with the large army? , Can you also introduce the world view? Why did it become like this? Introduce some simple mutated animals and plants around the camp? It is impossible for animals and plants to be completely extinct, otherwise humans will soon become extinct. There is so much to write about, but as soon as I woke up, there was a violent chase in the sand city. Was it because I was afraid that the protagonist would live too comfortably?

I looked at a few pictures and I didn't understand what they meant 🙂🙂🙂

Change the title of the book to Escape. You are really tricking people into killing them.

The general idea of ​​the plot is obvious without even reading it.

A random picture showing the current situation of the protagonist.

I have the weekend off, so I can only change my status next week.

In Chapter 10, the pig's foot broke off the arm, and the plug-in only gave a weather forecast. This is to prepare for mechanical ascension, only using the brain, and replacing everything else with machinery

It's hard to explain this at the beginning, it's better to be hit 🙂

Man, there is no need for a doomsday story to be so fast-paced. No matter how awesome a person is, it is impossible for him to be calm after encountering so many things like the protagonist. Even if he is a super elite, it is impossible. Even if he is like the super hero I mentioned in the title, he is also going crazy. It is impossible to be so calm. , As well as the injuries you wrote about, which made it impossible to survive several times, and the burning of the legs. No matter how awesome a person is, it is impossible for him to still walk. Even the fighting hero back then could only endure without making a sound when he was burned. I don't understand, that's the fucking limit of human beings. I think instead of setting him up to be a human elite, you might as well design him into a genetically modified human being. I think it's more reasonable. And those prosthetics and stuff, these are fucking prosthetics from Warhammer. You're good at understanding what you're trying to write about. But we can't deviate from reality, is it too outrageous?