Pirates: a Late Bloomer? I Am the Supreme Emperor of Beasts

I wrote a story about collecting corpses using three pieces. The first chapter talks about what to do, the second chapter talks about collecting corpses, and the third chapter talks about collecting corpses on the island. It was said that another year has passed and things can be obtained again, but this one is not written, and the second one is still not written, God.

Now is the time to conquer Barrett. Barrett, who has not been betrayed, is very loyal, has qualified weapons, and has great potential. The 15-year-old Rayleigh is tied with the 30-year-old Rayleigh. The original book also writes that he comes from the country of Jalzburg in the New World.

Gua! The engine roared and the earth shook! The general of Universiade is furious, and the national highway appears! The absolute killer move suddenly appeared—! It's just his luck! Hey! 😡 Immortal Haji was completely blown away by this secret 😡😡😡

There are just two poison points He gave the Pegasus fruit to a subordinate who was not as powerful as the Major General, and then said that it could move the entire sky island. It is also said that all the sky islands are connected by ladders, so pulling one sky island is equivalent to pulling all the sky islands. This entire Sky Island Group also includes the White Sea and Baibai Sea connected to it, which are equivalent to a small continental plate. This is more than one level better than Oz the Devil. Then he said that for those who have eaten the devil fruit, the sea tower stone chain can be easily broken. Many readers complained about it, so another setting was added. The strong men who were imprisoned in Impel Down City were also given medicine to suppress their domineering power. Writing about fan fiction is inevitable. But you have to add it more subtly, because it is a cheating novel in the first place. If we continue to forcefully open the Pegasus Fruit, wouldn't everyone, including the readers, become clowns? The original basic settings were changed at the drop of a hat. Hailoushi turned into a clown, and I felt like I had become a clown too.

Why are there so many old things lately?

The last few chapters have been too abstract, from the blackmail of fruit to the reward of dragon blood rice, did you lose your mind to write these?

It's okay to just hang out with other people, but still hang out with a reckless man who has no brains and no power. Isn't this pure cerebral palsy? If something goes wrong, can Kaido escape? Can the protagonist escape? Before becoming invincible, why can't we wait for two years to realize the newly acquired power?

It suddenly occurred to me that with the age of the protagonist, Charlotte Lingling can conquer the young Charlotte Lingling. She is not strong enough but can let the navy protect him. You can also search for her in advance. Find her before she is abandoned by her family. When her family does not want her, the connection will be seamless. As long as she is educated well from a young age, she has unlimited potential, and is very loyal and beautiful.

Although it is a system, the presence of the system is very small, which is good, but can there be less private goods involved? You still want to modify things that are clearly included in the original work, and you won't change them even after you say so. Why are you being arrogant? Level 5? Or a great god? Or platinum?

This book is amazing, its ability to do so many messy things is almost useless.

That horse fruit is really a mess. It already has a system. Why not spend more time on what abilities the system should give? What's the purpose of setting up a bunch of messy things on top of the original fruit? Moreover, a newcomer who has just started training can do it so well.

I don't even watch this kind of subject matter.

The 70-year-old protagonist looks 30-40 years old at most, so he can't be too old.

The protagonist's growth rate might as well be changed to once every ten years, when Luffy goes to sea

It's the same old thing, but what you wrote is much worse. . . There is huge room for improvement, come on

I don't really like pirate stories about hanging out with others, so it's better to be the boss yourself.

Tmd asks for leave every day, get out of my bookshelf 😡

The water is endless. I have to fight with the admiral for 5 or 6 days. I don't know, I thought I was participating in the war on the top. One chapter talks about collecting the corpses, and the second chapter is all about how to collect the corpses. Collecting a corpse can kill two people.

How can I put it, there are no major flaws, but it also makes the protagonist less qualified and less enjoyable. The chapters after it is released are relatively watery and have no feeling.

According to the timeline, is the former empress Torito an empress when she is only ten years old at most? Still lovesick, I figured out that Gu Luoliosa is only a little over 30 and Xia Qi is only 20.

So the protagonist, a time traveler with a cheat, has been living for 70 years just to become a pirate and Kaido's nanny? Are you disgusted?

The writing is okay, but it's a bit slow and a bit watered down.

No Digimon have appeared so far

It feels weird to join Kaido's pirate group. After waiting for 70 years for the system to wake up and not hide and develop, I can't wait to be Kaido's bully. It's just crazy.

Why don't you write it and throw it to AI to remove the typos?

Only to become a cow and horse for Kaido?

I've read Chapter 21, and so far the pace is good, and it's my favorite type. The author continues to work hard