People Are Fighting to Keep a Diary! the Female Characters Are Broken

It took me more than 20 years to read it in one breath. It is indeed well written, especially the early and middle parts. The concept is novel and it does not repeat the clichéd plots in the original work. The author's positioning and evaluation of each female character are basically consistent with the original work, and he does a good job, unlike some fans who follow the trend of anime and are biased. It's just that the current later part lacks the freshness and character polishing of the previous part, and is becoming more and more average, which can be regarded as a common problem in fan fiction.

Very good

I'm really convinced.

I've already written more than 300,000 words and still don't accept girls. How long will I continue to have ambiguities?

I can only talk about the issue of breaking off the engagement. No one is right or wrong. The protagonist is more biased towards Xiao Yan and puts all the mistakes on Nalan Yanran. After all, double standards are the essence and everyone will have double standards. It doesn't matter, but I hate that sentence written by the author. , Nalan Yanran enjoys family welfare, so he must marry to sacrifice happiness. I would like to ask Nalan Yanran, if he is in the Yunnan Sect, can't he strive for welfare for his family? To bring his family to a higher level, he must marry and get married. Answer: There are many kinds of families. After I become a strong person, I will support you to a higher level, or I will give you this life. And do you think Nalan Yanran broke through the Dou Zhi in the family, or Nalan Yanran broke through the Dou Zong in the Yunnan Sect. Facts It proves that Nalan Yanran may have gone to the Yunnan Sect when he was a child, and was accepted as a disciple by Yunju after he showed his talent. So, does he enjoy a lot? In addition to the benefits he received a few years ago, how many other benefits does he have? It does not mean that he has enjoyed family benefits since he was a child.

The wonderful book review section 🙂 is already written by the same author, and I still want to leave the heroine to Xiao Yan. I suggest reading more original books 😁

According to the corresponding analysis of Wangba's combat power system and the performance of the original work Dou Po Cang Qiong, the physical damage levels and special abilities of each realm are transformed as follows: 1. Basic combat power level (physical damage level) 1. Fighting Spirit (1-9 levels) - Level: Brick Explosion Level - Corresponding Standard: Standard Brick Explosion (2000 Joules) - Performance: Can destroy large trees or small obstacles, similar to the power of a grenade. - Typical characters: Xiao Yan (early stage), ordinary tribesman in Wutan City. 2. Fighter (1-9 stars) - Level: Wall blast level (Weak wall blast - Standard wall blast) - Corresponding standards: Weak wall blast (30 grams of TNT) to Standard wall blast (120 grams of TNT) - Performance: Break a single red brick wall or a small concrete structure, and can withstand the impact of armored vehicles. - Typical characters: Xiao Yan (after the third stage of fighting spirit is lifted), Nalan Yanran (early stage). 3. Dou Shi (1-9 stars) - Level: Explosive Wall Level (Super Explosive Wall) - Corresponding Standard: Super Explosive Wall (300 grams of TNT) - Performance: Destroy multiple red brick walls or small houses with one blow, Douqi Shayi can defend against conventional weapons. - Typical characters: Xiao Zhan, Yun Yun (early stage). 4. Great Fighter (1-9 stars) - Level: Explosion Level (Weak Explosion-Standard Explosion) - Corresponding standards: Weak Explosion (20kg TNT) to Standard Explosion (40kg TNT) - Performance: Destroy ordinary houses or small concrete buildings, Douqi armor can withstand heavy weapons. - Typical characters: Xiao Yan (three-year appointment), Yao Lao (in a weak state). 5. Dou Ling (1-9 stars) - Level: Explosion Level (Weak Explosion-Standard Explosion) - Corresponding standards: Weak Explosion (300kg TNT) to Standard Explosion (500-1000kg TNT) - Performance: Destroy multi-story residential buildings or small office buildings, Dou Qi condensation can form long-range attacks. - Typical characters: Medusa (early stage), Zi Yan (infancy stage). 6. King of Fighters (1-9 stars) - Level: Explosion Level (Weak Explosion - Standard Explosion) - Corresponding standards: Weak Explosion (35 tons of TNT) to Standard Explosion (100 tons of TNT) - Performance: Destroy 100,000-200,000 square meters of blocks, equivalent to a small meteorite impact or a magnitude 7 earthquake. -Typical characters: Hai Bodong, Jia Xingtian. 7. Dou Huang (1-9 stars) - Level: Explosive City Level (Weak Explosive City) - Corresponding Standard: Weak Explosive City (1 million tons of TNT) - Performance: Destroy half of the city (about 105 square kilometers), close to the power of a small hydrogen bomb. - Typical roles: Yun Yun (after breakthrough), Bird Protector. 8. Douzong (1-9 stars) - Level: City explosion level (standard city explosion) - Corresponding standard: Standard city explosion (7.25 Million tons of TNT) - Performance: Destroy an entire city (such as Paris level 437 square kilometers), and the space lock can block enemy actions. - Typical characters: Furukawa, Xiao Xun'er (early stage). 9. Douzun (1-9 stars) - Level: Bakugo level (weak Bakugo) - Corresponding standard: Weak Bakugo (15 billion tons of TNT) - Performance: Destroy provincial areas (about 40,000 square kilometers), space shuttle capability can affect continental plates. - Typical characters: Master Feng, Master Huangquan. 10. Semi-Saint - Level: Bakugo level (standard Bakugo) - Corresponding standard: Standard Bakugo (500 billion tons of TNT) - Performance: Destroy medium-sized countries (such as Japan-level 378,000 square kilometers), greatly improve the ability to construct space wormholes. -Typical characters: Demon Flower Evil Lord, Lord Lei. 11. Fighting Saint (1-9 stars) - Level: Explosion Star (Weak Explosion Star) - Corresponding Standard: Weak Explosion Star (2.24×10³² Joules) - Performance: Blast the surface of the earth or small planets (such as Mars), and cause continent-level disasters with every move. -Typical characters: Gu Yuan, Soul Emperor (late stage of Nine Star Fighting Saint). 12. Dou Di - Level: Explosion Star (Standard Explosion Star) - Corresponding standard: Standard Explosion Star (2.24×10³² Joules) - Performance: Completely destroy the earth (overcoming gravitational binding energy), the aftermath of the battle can form a hundred thousand miles abyss. - Typical characters: Xiao Yan, Tuoshe Ancient Emperor. 4. Verification of the core logic of level division 1. Magnitude priority: The division of realms in Fighting to Break the Sky strictly follows the increasing destructive power, forming a complete chain from brick-explosion level to star-explosion level. 2. Mathematical rigor: Dou Di's "Explosion of the Earth" meets the definition of gravitational binding energy of Wangba's standard explosion star (2.24×10³² Joules). 3. Anti-rhetorical principle: Ignore literary descriptions such as "the color of the sky and the earth changes", and only adopt quantifiable expressions (such as the diameter of the abyss of Dou Di, the broken continent of Dou Sheng).

I'm a bit speechless, it's quite hypocritical. If you had traveled through time, wouldn't you have opened a harem to seize Xiao Yan's opportunity? I didn't say anything about the cuckold's obsession with giving away girls.

I have read several Dou Po fanfics Author, your early writing is very good I hope you won't be like others in the future For example, the female protagonist will not be exposed to any dangers Flowers in the greenhouse will never grow I hope those female protagonists are not decorations At critical moments, they can help the male protagonist

The first part is okay, but the second part is a bit boring to be honest. Although there are so many women written about, the style seems to be an ambiguous eunuch style, which is not interesting... It is better to write more about the highlight moments brought by the diary women because of their diaries.

God among gods, I finally saw a different kind of Dou Po. As long as he does not collapse, he will definitely become a god 😎😎😎

I personally feel that there is nothing wrong with Nalan Yanran. 1. Breaking off the engagement within the family will give the Xiao family face. It may even be that the Xiao patriarch has a higher prestige and stronger family cohesion. The news may not even get out at all. 2. Xiao Zhan had already realized what he was going to say before the news came out, but he still suppressed his anger and asked Ge Ye to talk about breaking off the engagement. After saying that, he turned against Nalan Yanran. If you are not afraid of being embarrassed yourself and still expect others to give you face, maybe others think you have high prestige and courage and don't care about this. Even if you take the initiative to talk about breaking off the engagement, the impact can be minimized. 3. The gap between two people is like the modern woman who passed the 985 entrance exam, but the man couldn't even pass the technical secondary school. The gap is even wider than this. There is a problem with breaking off the engagement. If I were Nalan Yanran, I would think you are a loser and let me do it by myself. You don't know what to do and you can break off the engagement yourself. 4. In the original work, breaking off the engagement is actually a hook. Xiao Yan has been humiliated for several years and the psychological pressure has been increasing until he breaks off the engagement. 5. This is because when you first read novels, everyone is more resistant to drugs. Nowadays, if you put it into a male novel from the perspective of the heroine Nalan Yanran, there is no problem. Isn't it a normal operation in fantasy novels to leave some resources for the fiancée who can't keep up with her cultivation speed and then go out and change the map by herself? 6. In the final analysis, the power of the Dou Qi Continent is respected, that is, the little girl Nalan Yanran is bullied and ignorant. Change the male protagonist. Breaking off the engagement and giving you compensation is to give you face. You have to continue. If you don't accept it, you won't give me face. What is the strength of the Xiao family? The most powerful fighting master on the surface is not as high as Nalan's follower. Nalan's direct disciple, basically the next sect leader will bother to transfer a few big fighting masters? Promising some future benefits, Dou Ling Dou Wang might be transferred here. What qualifications do you, Xiao Yan, have to mate with me? Do you have the qualifications to make a three-year agreement with me?

I am really speechless, the pure love god of war fell to the ground. I really hate the situation of being bullied by others, or being bullied by others. Can the tauren die? I can't even accept some fan fiction about Niu Tang San😅

Stop trying to patch things up, it's no different from lowering your intelligence.

Shengliu: Very interesting, but the heroine has Ya Fei, a vase, but no Dan Chen.

It's better to read this book. This one is too embarrassing. Have you gone to the furnace to study?

Tang San's successor, right? I didn't want to go in and read the introduction.

Xiao Yan named Medusa Cai Lin, the name is too earthy (White Lady named herself Bai Suzhen, literary talent) 🤫 Among the Dou Po fandoms I have read so far, only a small number of authors have changed their names

This kind of book title is usually written by a low-level writer.

When is it not the protagonist, when do we have a showdown with them, otherwise we have to keep pretending to be smart, which makes me feel aggrieved 😅

After reading Chapter 100, the pacing was too slow and I kept putting it aside. After Chapter 100, I am still a three-star fighting master. I will not accept women at all costs. Is it pure Wai Wai, a eunuch? Even if you don't accept girls, you won't even have close contact? Who can stand to watch this horse riding?

All the Dou Po characters are all played by Tian, ​​and Huo Huo is almost beaten by Tian Tupi.

The big questions are all good, but the ending is a bit too watery. I feel the ending is too hasty.

You have whatever strength you have, why do you have to add one that is comparable to it? If you add a lot, you will add a lot. Use these two words to calculate the number of words.

I was pushed 4 times for no apparent reason. I came in today and read 5 chapters. I can guess the plot even with my eyes closed. I want to grab the Yan woman, grab the opportunity, and walk the road of Dou Di again. Did you write it by Cao Pi, or is it an emotional drama that catches people? Spend money to buy recommendations. These are not enough to write and stare at this 13-year-old novel every day.

Also, Chapter 126 talks about helping Yao Chen obtain quasi-heaven-level skills. I just want to say that even if Yao Chen was only at the ninth-level Douzun peak before his resurrection, as an eighth-level peak alchemist, he would not be short of heaven-level skills. It is even very likely that he would practice heaven-level skills. In the original book, Yao Chen and Xiao Yan could trade eighth-level elixirs for heaven-level skills and fighting skills when they participated in the space trade fair and obtained the residual map of the demon fire. The reason why Xiao Yan was not told that there were heaven-level exercises at the beginning and that the highest level he could choose was only the low-level earth level was because he had thoughts of resurrection.

Well, Chapter 89 said that Ling Ying was the peak Dou Huang, and now in Chapter 139, it became the Eight Star Dou Huang, not to mention that in the original book, he was the Nine Star Dou King.

Isn't this just to see Xiao Yan's Shura Field? As for the protagonist, who cares about the protagonist? I've wanted to see Xiao Yan's Shura Field for a long time. After all, the original Xiao Yan only needs to be tilted a little to create a big harem. There are still more than a dozen Xiao Yan, and there will definitely not be just two.

There is a problem in Chapter 160. Some book friends pointed it out, but you didn't seem to care. Also, in the original book, a pure Emperor Realm soul can match the Eight Star Fighting Saint and can instantly kill the Seven Star Fighting Saint, but this chapter says that the Emperor Realm soul can fight the Seven Star Fighting Saint?

It's okay to honestly write about the Great Thousand Worlds. Shi Hao's quasi-immortal emperor's establishment of the Heavenly Palace was robbed. I don't know how many pieces the Immortal Realm was broken into, let alone the small corner of the Great Thousand Worlds😅