The Shan Hai Bestiary

The creativity is quite attractive But the author is not good at writing, and the first three golden chapters are very average. The author went to school and was caught as a mahout in a daze. There was no clear explanation for the reason, which made people feel confused. Then you fight with the villain later on. You obviously have to catch the villain, but if you don't kill him, let him go. What's going on, if you let him go, he will catch you. The villain's IQ is online, but the protagonist's fucking IQ is not. (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)

What is written here? Have you read it yourself? Don't you feel embarrassed?

I am Elder Wujiluo, Supreme Leader of the Shennong Sect. You can read this book, but it is by no means an enjoyable article. It is quite depressing to this day.

It's been a long time since I've experienced this feeling. The new book has started to be released and has started to be recommended. Every friend who reads it is a miraculous light that changes their destiny. This book has many wonderful ideas, and I hope to have the opportunity to show them all. Book friends, please work hard 🥺. Don't read books these few weeks. Be sure to read them every day, so that the book has a chance to go further. I will reward everyone when it is on the shelves. Thanks again.

What the villain is planning is a bit speculative.

I took a brief look at it today. To put it simply, the writing is a bit childish or naïve. It would be easy to dissuade people from seeing it in front of me. To sum up, it means that nothing can be done without polishing it. I was shocked at first. I felt that the author had a lot of imagination and the novel was good, especially the Rat Master had some ideas and the setting was very interesting. However, later on, the author seemed to be too passionate and lost his mind, and he got excited writing it. The protagonist is 18 years old and immature, but the author can't take it for granted. He keeps writing about the darkness of society and the passion of teenagers, which feels very boring. There is also the white goose heroine, who suddenly kept emphasizing. Your previous explanation did not pave the way. It is so sudden that they have a good relationship. She seems very uncomfortable and wants to complain. It is also unnecessary to explain justice all the time. Also, this alien beast system (combat power system) is actually very complicated and confusing. The evolutionary sequence can be simplified and clarified appropriately. Of course the novel is readable and the story is very creative and interesting, but it is very rough and I feel like I didn't write the outline very carefully. I hope the author will get better and better!

Is there any hangup? Is it a cool article? When did the first enemy die?

That pack is tung tung tung tung tung tung tung tung sahur and tralalero tralala, these two versions of powerful heroes.

I like interesting things, but there are too many martial arts upgrades at the beginning, so I'm not interested.

There are also those who want to be beasts 😰