He Is Just Playing Games, Not Composing Myths

The first book was really good, I hope this one will be the same! Another thing is, Dihua Guidihua, don't write the protagonist like a fool. There are a lot of Dihualiu novels that just don't know how to round things up, so they forcibly reduce the intelligence of the protagonist. I hope the author can write better!

This novel is not as good as Jindan Xingxing, and the rhythm is not good. The author has not learned from the experience of the previous one. The novel you write should focus on describing the story that happened in the main world. The sub-world can only serve as a foil, especially in the early stage. Don't put the cart before the horse. This is good for you. The plot of the main world has not been promoted very much, and the sub-world is endless to write. In the early stage of the previous book Jindan Xingxiang, at least the stories of the main world and sub-world were intertwined, and in the middle and late stages, a long-lasting copy will be opened.

The last book was awesome. I loved reading the copies of Blood Beads and No Food.

I will update after the last book and say that I have opened a new book.

The author's strength is still writing unlimited streams! As for the side stories, the author has a strong story shaping ability. The previous book was very interesting every time he went to the side lines, but the killings and fights were not good at all. Therefore, I still take a bath. The author can always bring short world stories and slightly feed back the main world, then the infinite flow will be completed! However, the beginning is not attractive, unlike the previous one, which makes it very difficult to follow! Not popular

When I open a new book, I don't promote it in the old book. Fortunately, I am suspicious by nature and I like to check the author's homepage when I have nothing to do.

Actually secretly opened a new book😡

The last book, Golden Elixir, was really well written.

This kind of subject matter is too niche. Without a main thread and slow updates, it is easy to lose readers.

The author is too lazy and started again before it was published.

If you don't update it, I will delete it from the bookshelf.

If the author wants to continue writing, please update on time every day, okay? If you really can't continue writing, just stop it. After all, you haven't put it on the shelves, and no one has spent any money. If you stop it, no one will scold you. But you keep going off and on, it's just torture.

No publicity for new books? If I hadn't come in with my magical power, I wouldn't have seen any new books.

Is the data in the book "Who Still Seriously Cultivates Immortality" too poor?

This author can even write "be" when writing about the harem, and he doesn't even know what the picture is about.

Isn't this really trying to assassinate Jin Ke's trumpet?