The Destiny Weaver at Hogwarts

You can't set up a character. Every chapter of an emotionally indifferent character requires all kinds of complaints, and complaints account for half of it. I don't know how you can be emotionally indifferent.

There is already a huge golden finger of a prophet or prophet who is probably the strongest in the history. Why add a system for no reason? If it is for jealous dumplings, that is, let the protagonist realize the wishes of others, just set him to find that doing so can improve the magic power. As for the various so-called draws that are needed, just go to the history and the future to find it yourself. The system setting is really useful in modern online novels. How to promote the plot? Send tasks. How do characters grow? Draws and Redemptions. Water word count? Data panel and baffling next to it. But does this book require a system? No.

Very nice. I just don't want the protagonist to have an emotional line, I just don't feel like it's suitable.

Why don't you just write the system as the protagonist? Now that Feiwu is just the outer packaging.

I hate this kind of introduction. Have you introduced me? I've created a bunch of non-embarrassing blowjobs and put them here, do you think it's interesting?

It's such a long introduction, but I don't know if it's good or not?

Copying the original is too much, right? Basically, post a section of the original work and what the protagonist thinks, and then post a section of the original work and what the protagonist thinks. Not even a rewrite, but a direct copy and paste 😅

This introduction to a Japanese light novel is too strong, and I really have no interest in reading it. I don't even know what the selling point of your book is.

The protagonist's language ability is very interesting, and the slave of fate is real when you see it, but the plot is very average and the system is a failure. A real experience at the beginning.

The protagonist is a newly admitted wizard with memories of past lives - this part gives him the fear of death; the system - currently seems to be used to issue some tasks in exchange for rewards for lottery, the background setting is quite natural; and the prophecy talent is almost like flipping through a catalog. Prediction is a supermodel's ability at any time and anywhere, so the author added some restrictions: The most important part is the protagonist himself. The long-term prophecy of unchangeable fate and his own abnormal psychological state make the protagonist seem a little indifferent to most things. He lacks motivation except for his obsession with immortality in his previous life, and rarely does anything proactively. Then Lao Dengtou was worried that the protagonist would be affected too much, so he asked the protagonist to use the prophecy as little as possible. This also suppressed the appeal of the teachers and students in the school for the prophecy of the protagonist to a certain extent, allowing the plot to deviate from the main perspective. If I remember correctly, the system also has a similar task of using less prophecy, but I haven't seen much impact so far, so I will only mention it. Finally, there is also the setting of linking prophecy and magic power, which is also rarely shown, so I currently understand it as a minimum measure to prevent the prophecy from happening for tens of millions of years. There are also controversial points. First, the inner activities of the protagonist can be called active, which is somewhat different from the image of the protagonist who is tortured to numbness by the irreversible future and who claims to be destined to work hard. Regarding this point, I understand that the protagonist's indifference is that he does not care about other people and has no emotional integration, so at least I can still agree with it. Secondly, even with so many restrictions, even if there is a gap in the hard power of magic that cannot be smoothed out by prophecy, this kind of almost costless and easy prophecy is still beyond cognition. Writing from the main perspective is bound to have errors and omissions, not to mention predicting the results of one's own thinking, predicting what one is going to do, and predicting interactions with other people to get other people's answers. This prophecy is basic. Limiting the protagonist's changes to the plot by not caring or taking it seriously is destined to be questioned more intensely when the protagonist shows his limits and shortcomings. Thirdly, part of the plot seems to be copied from the original work, which is actually okay. If other fans are like this, I would say I hate this kind of behavior, but with the character of the protagonist and the persuasion that fate cannot be violated, it does have a special meaning. To summarize, the quality is good and we can look forward to the follow-up, but the ability to be too free beyond imagination is still worrying.

The protagonist has too many internal os, right?

It's so well written. I really want to read the next chapter. It feels like there are ants crawling on me. Please write it quickly.

Come to Shennong 🙂

I always feel like there will be a sudden eunuch one day. Get a cover, don't be a eunuch.

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The writing is very interesting, looking forward to it! ! !

Hold on tight and don't drift away, you can at least reach lv4-lv5