Earth Ancestor

Have you ever been a dragon? Take some things for granted and write them randomly 😏

First of all, I really want to thank you all for your recognition and love of this book. I will also work hard to write the follow-up content and live up to everyone's expectations. Then, the new book sets sail. Now Qidian attaches great importance to the follow-up data, which is related to the subsequent development of the book. If possible, I hope that the big guys can follow up and read it. The author would like to thank you here.

Why not use plant elves as agents? Later, the perspective is switched to humans. Isn't the theme about non-human beings cultivating immortals?

Author, since the protagonist is a divine spirit transformed from the mountains and rivers between heaven and earth, why not enlighten and teach some other wonders of heaven and earth, spirits transformed from rivers, mountains and rivers, or spirits transformed from rare plants and trees? Then, turn your whole body into a holy place for spiritual practice by the spirits of heaven and earth and the spirits of plants and trees.

This onomatopoeia is really not tight, can you not write it? The phrase "wow" comes out of nowhere. Do you, the author, find it difficult or embarrassing when you see it?

Keep throwing settings, keep throwing settings

Have you ever been a Dragon Vein? Just scribble here.

The author would like to give you a suggestion. Reading your book is very tiring. Many words are long-winded and I always emphasize that writing novels should be concise and clear. You will know what you want to express at a glance. This is the basic skill for writing a good book. Obviously, the author, your basic skill is worse than other first-class authors. I'm not nitpicking, but this is a fact, and you, the author, need to pay attention to this issue. Otherwise, I have seen a book with a decent story disappear into the vast sea of ​​books. At least it is very tiring for me, a 6-year-old bookworm.

The dragon must be majestic and terrifying, not the foul-mouthed and funny one written by other authors.

Overall, this book is not bad, but how can I put it? There is no need for the author to be so "joyful" when writing about these "big people". After practicing immortality for so many years, it is unnecessary to be shocked one after another. There is no big poison. Please update it.