Earth Ancestor

Have you ever been a dragon? Take some things for granted and write them randomly 😏

First of all, I really want to thank you all for your recognition and love of this book. I will also work hard to write the follow-up content and live up to everyone's expectations. Then, the new book sets sail. Now Qidian attaches great importance to the follow-up data, which is related to the subsequent development of the book. If possible, I hope that the big guys can follow up and read it. The author would like to thank you here.

Why not use plant elves as agents? Later, the perspective is switched to humans. Isn't the theme about non-human beings cultivating immortals?

Author, since the protagonist is a divine spirit transformed from the mountains and rivers between heaven and earth, why not enlighten and teach some other wonders of heaven and earth, spirits transformed from rivers, mountains and rivers, or spirits transformed from rare plants and trees? Then, turn your whole body into a holy place for spiritual practice by the spirits of heaven and earth and the spirits of plants and trees.

This onomatopoeia is really not tight, can you not write it? The phrase "wow" comes out of nowhere. Do you, the author, find it difficult or embarrassing when you see it?

Keep throwing settings, keep throwing settings

Have you ever been a Dragon Vein? Just scribble here.

The author would like to give you a suggestion. Reading your book is very tiring. Many words are long-winded and I always emphasize that writing novels should be concise and clear. You will know what you want to express at a glance. This is the basic skill for writing a good book. Obviously, the author, your basic skill is worse than other first-class authors. I'm not nitpicking, but this is a fact, and you, the author, need to pay attention to this issue. Otherwise, I have seen a book with a decent story disappear into the vast sea of ​​books. At least it is very tiring for me, a 6-year-old bookworm.

Overall, this book is not bad, but how can I put it? There is no need for the author to be so "joyful" when writing about these "big people". After practicing immortality for so many years, it is unnecessary to be shocked one after another. There is no big poison. Please update it.

The dragon must be majestic and terrifying, not the foul-mouthed and funny one written by other authors.

They are all nurtured by heaven and earth, and gods take form.

Another world town Yuanzi? Now the combat power is a bit low. Will it promote world upgrading in the future?

There were too many inner psychological activities in the past. I was either guessing this or that. It was all my own conjecture and affected my perception. No wonder this result

The ceiling of combat power is revealed at the beginning, and the map is opened smaller. If you want to write, you can only play behind the scenes and engage in proxy wars. For example, Zifu should take less action and maintain the B grid.

When will you come back and write the Shroud of Heaven trilogy, my friend?

Go back and write fanfics, my friend, the one you started with Emperor Zun is very good.

Let's talk about the advantages first: the characters with names and surnames are all well-shaped, the author's writing skills are still good, and the plot content is not bad Let's talk about the disadvantages: the amount of updates and the number of words in a single chapter are too few. According to the current progress, the possibility of publishing within 100 chapters is not high.

As mentioned above, I feel that they are the worst batch of people to fight at Qidian 🤐

Finally a new book, come on!

Go back and write fanfics. If you want to write a perfect story, write that the protagonist travels through time and becomes the descendant of He Wushuang or Wushang and Pu Demon King. The descendants of the Four Dark Emperors can also be used.

It was interesting at first, but became more and more unbearable. Later, the background of the blockbusters was explained.

The pace is too slow, and it's all background introduction, but the writing style is quite comfortable, because the protagonists are basically bystanders.

What is written behind this?

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