Family Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from the Inheritance of Golden Elixir

Not bad

The fighting scenes are sophisticated and have a strong sense of graphics, which can be compared to fairy grass.

Personally, I think the good thing about this book is that the writing is smooth and the plot transitions are natural and not too abrupt. Although the plot has its ups and downs, it feels like it lacks some twists and turns. Secondly, the fighting scenes and details are too simple. The author can polish this aspect more carefully. Overall, it's very good. I look forward to better performance in the future. Come on!

The highlights at the beginning are outstanding, the writing is natural and smooth, and the number of updates is maintained. It will be a high-quality product when it is put on the shelf 🤓

It's quite good. For family-type stories, the characters of each character should be shaped more to make the characters more three-dimensional. More family development decisions can be made. The growth of the protagonist should be told with the family development as the center. The two should complement each other and promote each other.

Sir, is this book inward-posted or straight-posted?

Compared to others of the same type, the writing is really good. The names can be changed, but they are unattractive. There are too many names of the same type, and most of them are of low quality, which makes readers lose the desire to click in.

Good 👍, recommended by the family cultivating immortality group

Monthly ticket support

I feel so sorry for my parents, I didn't write a very good book.

A pretty good book to follow

Want to see more 👍

The celebration is well written and feels grand and solemn.

Is the protagonist a local or a lucky outsider?

Where did the author's bacteria go? It's not updated anymore.

Even if the protagonist doesn't want to practice alchemy! You can't help but practice alchemy! It depends on everyone! The backer collapsed! You can't just learn a side job, right? ? ?