Naruto Dream Master!

I really want to see the protagonist. The title of the book is Konoha Dream Master. Now that the protagonist is gone, I can only say it is Konoha Dream Master. But when it comes to realizing the dream, the number of goals and visits to realize the dream is always difficult to increase because the acquisition of emotional value is tied to the protagonist's upgrade and the items purchased in the store at the beginning. The emotional value required for each level is too high, the upgrade is too slow, and it can never keep up with the expansion of the character. Moreover, the goal of realizing the dream is limited, and the number of people who can improve the character's strength is also limited. This has always been a limitation. I thought the protagonist would end up personally, or join in the dream. But I didn't expect... When it came to the Ninja World War, I was used to seeing only those few high-end combat powers fighting around, and it was too lacking. Of course, according to the way the author of this article writes it, it is possible that after the misunderstanding is resolved, people will turn around and stop the monthly reading plan. The best way to realize your dream is to be harmonious and beautiful. And after the protagonist is suddenly removed, the emotional value is increased by hundreds and thousands, which will make people feel a bit baffled. Although it can help understand their mood swings, it feels quite unnecessary. Finally, I was attracted by the writing, and I wanted to see the protagonist's journey from observer to personal experiencer to creator. I am also looking forward to the moment when the text finally redeems the Otsutsuki bloodline, but as of now, the emotional value of the plot is already in the millions, which is enough. The Sharingan and other things the author gave at the beginning seem to be high-end redemption thresholds at the beginning. But I never saw the main character come out, which felt weird. Maybe I read the book late, but it's actually quite heartbreaking to see so many people saying that the protagonist doesn't need to exist, and there are so many people who like it. But I have always wanted the protagonist to appear. Even if he appears less, he must exist. If he must appear, he is equivalent to an incarnation of us readers in the text, witnessing, experiencing, and creating together. But now that I have reached this stage of writing, the author's writing style has been roughly determined, and the reader base is almost the same. I don't know how many people want to see the protagonist like me. But I feel sorry for the author's original intention. From the surprise when I first read the book, to the joy that the protagonist's strength has gradually increased, to the admiration for the ingenuity of the copy and the delicate reactions of the characters, and then to the panic of discovering that the protagonist has gradually disappeared, the dismay of seeing the author's confusion and frantic search for comments in the article, and the efforts to like the comments that speak for the protagonist... And then to the loneliness of skipping directly to the second half of the article and subscribing to the second half of the article but unable to find any clues. To be honest, the author's writing is really good. But I don't know why, I just can't stand it anymore. There may be later articles. The articles mentioned in the comments should be read continuously. It may be because the updates are slow and inconsistent, or the dungeon is opened too slowly, the target number is too small, the linkage is insufficient, the big scenes are not enough, etc. But I feel that these authors actually handled it well enough... Maybe I am the protagonist? Or maybe he saw Haruno Sakura in the previous article and blamed himself that he might not be able to catch up with the duo? I always feel like I am watching a fairy tale, but this fairy tale only belongs to a few people... And the creation of this fairy tale disappeared without knowing where it started. Well, it's a pity that I've read this. Maybe it's because as a Chinese, I see common prosperity and hope for common progress in this article, but the hope is elusive, which makes me unable to stand it. In short, this article is a good article that makes people can't help but think and ponder. It also makes up for many of the regrets you had when watching Naruto. The future in the article will gradually get better. At the end of the writing, I don't know what I am talking about. In short, I will stop here. But I wish the author a good flow of literary thoughts, the more he writes, the better he writes, and the more he writes, the happier he is 😆

The author listened very much to Duan Ping's advice The protagonist was in the way of the story, but he changed it later Three generations could not be cleansed, so the choice was definitely the third generation's useless logic Other works were shocking all day long, very annoying, and very x, this article is all reflected in emotional values The characters in the book followed, originally The characters will reflect the state when they see things, rather than being uniformly mindless and shocked The characters in the book are not just regretful and resentful after seeing some truths There are almost no shortcomings from the beginning to the middle period The writing in this type of novel is unprecedentedly good.

This type of article probably requires the protagonist to appear less often, otherwise he would be scolded if he was so strengthened and only half a chapter wasted after it was published. It feels like a behind-the-scenes story about Tokyo Naruto. What you're looking at is the reaction and development of various characters, and the performance of the "protagonist" is unimportant.

Come, the author reads with me, and I solemnly swear: Starting today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, steel made by a hundred times, worthy of readers, worthy of youth, worthy of the future, as an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Codewriting is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night. ! Hey hey hey! Author

So far, the biggest advantage of this book is the integration and changes brought about by the contact of characters from multiple worlds, but the biggest problem is also this. It is easy to shift the focus, causing the main line of the story to be blurred, the pace to be slow, and the different events compiled to not overlap into a climax. The focus character in the early stage has become invisible, and now the main characters have no highlight moments. The plot conflicts are not intense enough, and the evolution is too trivial and not subversive. According to the current writing method, it is possible to have 1000 chapters. If it is done this way, it is better to forget it.

There is no protagonist, it's similar to an inventory article and it's too boring. Daily unlimited inventory has no content

I love watching the interaction between Naruto and Sakura

Killing your father and mother is unfilial! Killing relatives is unjust! Killing young and old is unkind! To favor one's younger brother is to be disloyal! Uchiha Itachi can be said to have taken advantage of them all, being unfaithful, unfilial, and unkind! The most important thing is that Uchiha Itachi is extremely double-standard! The village and the family chose the village and destroyed the family; the village and Sasuke chose Sasuke and protected his brother to the death. The ideas and values ​​conveyed by Naruto are completely distorted by human nature, often exaggerating the goodness of villains and whitewashing the sins of murderers! The distorted values ​​​​of Xiaoli have always been like this, and comics are the hardest hit areas affected by this idea! Cartoons with correct values, such as Hayao Miyazaki animation, Akira Toriyama, and Doraemon, are extremely rare.

Really deleting all the protagonist's scenes has no impact, but the reading experience is better. Since the protagonist knows the plot of Naruto, he will know that after graduating from Class 7, he will perform a D-level mission for a period of time. After leaving the plot of Murunami Country, he will take the Chunin Exam after returning. Before the third Chunin Exam begins. There is one month to repair. It will take at least one month from graduation to Konoha's collapse plan. During this period, you, a civilian who has no legal chakra, will care about you. According to the author's own numerical design, you can earn nearly 50,000 points in two nights. Then let me ask you, looking My eyes, at least one month before the Konoha collapse plan, can I save 1 million points to exchange for the Mangekyo Sharingan? A pair of Mangekyo Sharingan will not be a problem to protect myself after Konoha collapses, so why write a protagonist who is so jumpy? He exchanges chakra on the first day, changes to Kirigakure ninjutsu on the second day, and then runs to test his own abilities. Does he really not care at all about the sentient ninjas and Byakugan in the village? You, a normal civilian, suddenly have chakra, and you don't redeem your hidden abilities. You are really giving your life to others, waiting to be investigated, and you will be sure of it. I really don't understand the point of writing this protagonist.

After reading the author's reasons for hiding Naruto's life experience from the third generation, I can't help but sigh that it's really hard to find a Naruto fanfic that respects the original work. The reason the author wrote is the explanation of the original work. The Sandaime is not a villain from the beginning to the end, because Kishimoto is behind the scenes. For example, Naruto is the son of the Hokage, and Uchiha Itachi is an undercover agent. These are all settings that were not available in the early stage, which makes it appear that the three generations are inconsistent. Most of the old fans of Naruto from many years ago knew about this, but now the trend may be that conspiracy theories are more popular. Then again, the author insists on creating a completely useless protagonist in this book, is it because the word count is too low haha ​​(this is a conspiracy theory 🤓)

The movie-watching mode is highly destructive to the plot of the original work, which is its major flaw. This dream-fulfilling essay, or the Infinite Moon Reading Essay, avoids this flaw. Because it is relatively secretive and the number of people watching the movie is small, the impact on the entire ninja world is controlled. And using dreams as a carrier, there is also a reason to give less spoilers to the characters.

It's just behind the scenes, why does the protagonist always come out to show his presence? And the current protagonist, how should I put it, has begun to be of the same quality as other Naruto fan protagonists. As soon as he has the ability, he can't wait to jump out and show off. Will he just follow the fan's routine and be targeted by Danzo?

In fact, if you follow the original manga, the plot of the formula book, and the plot designed by Kishimoto, there will not be much room for conspiracy theories. However, the original animation and the influence of various clouds have led to the prevalence of conspiracy theories.

I still look forward to the second version of this theme. Personally, I prefer Dream Realization. It doesn't matter whether the protagonist is there or not.

Yes, it feels like the so-called dreaming is the self representing many possible parallel universes that are most desired deep in the heart.

If this book didn't have this protagonist, the perception would be improved to a higher level.

When I was young, I hated Sasuke and thought he was pretending. Now I think he is normal. After going through all those things, he has become very kind.

Sakura is really a stereotype

To be honest, the protagonist is dispensable. Just concentrate on writing the dream.

Author, you can read my comments and my suggestions. The so-called dreaming is the possible parallel universe world that the protagonist makes the dreamer desire deep in his heart! In fact, if you believe in your writing style, you can expand the multi-person dream link scene plot. The protagonist, who is a time traveler, can reasonably plan to add this multi-person dream plot. The skills cultivated in this dream can be used in reality. In this case, the operation plot can be infinitely expanded, which is very exciting. Dreaming People think it is a dream, but it is a real parallel world. The protagonist can come to practice immortality, etc. Other styles of parallel universes can pull people into the parallel world of the protagonist, and dead people can do it!, Or travel to this parallel world of ninja before Kaguya comes, develop or reveal a new training system. Before chakra, the world itself had other training systems! You can also write about the wandering ninja world in the Naruto mobile game, or the martial arts world, etc.!

The protagonist is kicking with his feet and holding Kaguya in his arms. When the spring breeze is triumphant, little does he know that a pair of eyes are staring at him coldly outside the screen. [Ding! The emotional fluctuations from Shigure were captured! Emotional value +2000!!] [Ding! Shigure's deep obsession/dream "Traveling through another world and pretending to be slapped in the face" was detected and was successfully realized in the dream copy!] [Congratulations to the host, touching Send a special reward and get a one-time emotional value of 10,000 points! "Holy shit!! Ten thousand points?!" The mysterious man hiding in the darkness was so excited that he almost bit his own tongue when he saw the numbers on the system panel that skyrocketed instantly. "I've made a fortune! I really made a fortune this time!" "It seems... This kind of obsession that touches the deepest part of the character's heart is the best way to obtain a large amount of emotional value. I will have to study the psychological needs of each 'client' in the future. My major in psychological counseling has finally been paid off." The mysterious man watched his total emotional value soar to nearly 20,000 in an instant, and felt that he was a big step closer to the redemption goal.

The protagonist is as funny as a buffoon. There is no difference with or without him. As soon as he gets points, he buys, buys, buys a lot of meaningless things.

It is estimated that the author was influenced by the original animation and various fan conspiracy theories. In fact, Itachi had no choice at all, because the Sharingan of the Nine-Tailed Rebellion in the original manga was impossible to avoid and could only be wary of Uchiha. And the Uchiha family is in rebellion. Yes, Fugaku is not a dove in fan fiction in the comic setting, but a typical radical. Under his leadership, the entire Uchiha family rebels. He does not have the original kaleidoscope in the animation, and the comics just use the ordinary Sharingan. (If Fugaku does not take the lead, there is a high probability that some Uchiha tribe members will rebel) Your whole tribe rebels. If you fail, the whole tribe will suffer. Itachi, on the other hand, is equivalent to choosing the side where Guo Jia and his younger brother will survive among Guo Jia and the family. In fact, there is nothing wrong with whichever side he chooses. If the Uchiha clan wants to get rid of doubts, they can only accept the method of exploring memory through ninjutsu. It's just that the dignity of a clan lies here. If you don't give up, you can only be vigilant. In the end, under the leadership of the radical Fugaku, the entire clan rebelled and was eventually exterminated.

I would like to suggest that the protagonist's role can be reduced. This kind of behind-the-scenes article only mentions the protagonist a little bit. The key is the portrayal of other characters in the original work, and the details of the teaching of ninjutsu in the current plot. Do you really need other people to see clearly? Also about Naruto shouldn't he lay a solid foundation? After all, in the world in the dream where four generations are still alive, shouldn't we pay more attention to the foundation of our children? In the original book, Naruto learned the Rasengan mainly because he was too close to the Chunin Exam and lacked time. Shouldn't he pay more attention to the basics now to show a different Naruto? After all, the early Hokage was looking at this fire.

I really don't blame everyone for their stereotypes

This book is one of the few Naruto fanfics that doesn't play conspiracy theories. Although there are still some bugs in some places, it has been written according to the logic of the original work, and I still like it very much. What I hate is those people who re-read the conspiracy theories in the comment area. They don't talk about the comics. They probably don't read the anime. Maybe they just watch a short video of speedrunning Naruto. They don't even watch the video. After reading a few fan books, they claim to know Naruto very well and start to give advice. And what these people have in common is that they are extremely confident. Anyone who refutes him is someone's filial son. I don't understand them. Anyone who thinks about it will know the huge bugs in those conspiracy theories, but they don't use it, and it's even funnier to substitute the conspiracy theory into the original work, because the logic of the conspiracy theory directly conflicts with the original work, and then it will immediately become Kishimoto, a broken comic who knows what Hokage is. The conspiracy theory is the truth, and the original work is pure nonsense. This is why I hate conspiracy theories more and more. I was also addicted to conspiracy theories when I was in school, because it was really cool and gave me a sense of satisfaction in seeing through the world. Later, I don't know when I stopped liking it because it was really meaningless. Now Naruto's conspiracy theory is almost the same. It can cover thousands of years of history. From Kaguya Six Paths to ordinary passers-by, almost everyone can fall into conspiracy theories. Unfortunately, the flaw is that all these conspiracy theories have logical bugs, and when explaining the bugs, they announced that the original work is temporarily valid, making these people sit at the same table as Black Zetsu Danzo. The consequence of having conspiracy theories in your mind is that you look at everything from the perspective of conspiracy theories, and everything, no matter how upright, will become cold and distorted. Even works like Naruto with big bugs in the original work, the conspiracy theories of Journey to the West are becoming more and more popular, and the most popular one has even become a spectacle. I am very curious, in the eyes of these people, when will conspiracy theories be used to consider the founding heroes of the country? It is only a matter of time. I have absolute confidence in their brains.

As the title says, this kind of police officer joke has no benefits other than disgusting people. What you are writing is a Naruto fanfic, not the original Naruto novel. Just be logically consistent. Nine out of ten books from the starting point are all conspiracy theories. They are just readers who want to read them. The Naruto fanfic that ranks first in the monthly ticket sales is a conspiracy theory. Who cares about it? It does not conform to the original work. What he does is like making a short video about Hakimi the kitten and then leaving it in the comment area to say that Hakimi means bee in Japanese, not kitten or cute. Your video will make people feel troubled. In fact, no one cares what Hakimi means in Japanese, as long as the content is interesting. The so-called chaos is just something that people in a small circle like him can't stand. The author's choice and grades cannot deceive anyone. As long as you write according to your own writing, you will definitely get better and better. On the contrary, if you listen to his temporary changes, the grades will most likely get worse. After all, many of the readers who have written so much and followed the reading must be conspiracy theory audiences.

The protagonist is very transparent, I can accept it and it doesn't matter. I think this book has one of the better descriptions of the original characters, and there is nothing that seriously ruins the characters. Advantages, character copies are good Disadvantages, updates are too slow

The development of the plot is purely based on forcing Uchiha Madara to hang up, and Uchiha Madara has been exposed. How could he not do anything except train Sasuke? Nagato is an adult. Normally, as soon as the Hokage and Madara leave, Madara should control Nagato to resurrect him and capture the tailed beast himself. Now, let Tenten play house with Sasuke, it's amazing.

What the hell is this a book without a main character? Why don't you write your review here?