MC Exploration Lord: Start by Building a Floating City

I have read Chapter 19 so far, Liangcao. Although I haven't played MC (I know 3D dizziness), I like to read MC articles. Come on.

I don't understand what the main character is doing out there. Development! ! You don't level up by killing monsters?

I hope that the golden finger will not be suppressed and I will be healthy

I think about it, the components of the automatic furnace are the feed port, the fuel port, the outlet, the outlet funnel and the box. There is nothing much to say. The import has the track equalization based on the hopper minecart and the constant locking hopper chain. However, the hopper chain requires redstone, which may not be obtained by the protagonist at the beginning, so it is not bad to use existing materials to make a track type. In fact, there is not much difference between the two solutions. The hopper chain has more consumables but is quieter, and there are more options for the fuel part. Now, copy the carpet, coal, lava bucket, kelp block, bamboo board. The protagonist has no slime block in his hand now. Copy pass. The coal is connected to the withered countryside. Pass. The lava bucket is too low-cost and cannot be made. Pass. Kelp is feasible but the protagonist is in the Northland pass. The same goes for bamboo, but maybe you can import it. Pass it temporarily. Let's talk about it in the future. There is no fully automatic fuel now, right? No, no, no, this doesn't bother us electricity generation players. Let's return to the first fuel, carpet. Come to think of it, with the protagonist's current resources, he can completely raise sheep, and then make an automatic wool machine. The protagonist just needs wool in the North. With the output of MC, There will be a surplus of wool very quickly. As for why I know this, because at the beginning of the super giant desert, there is no choice. However, considering that the protagonist cannot make an iron brushing machine, it is a bit too expensive (scissors). It is not that fully automatic cannot be used, but semi-automatic is more cost-effective.

The classic farming protagonist must go on an adventure The minor characters and supporting characters struggle to survive, and they immediately become wise when they meet the protagonist.

The writing is quite nonsense. In the early stage, I knew I didn't have the strength and still built an empty island. Isn't it normal that I should have developed underground and then come out to cause trouble?

If there were no content in chapters 35 to 44, I think it would be okay, but it's a pity that the author cut himself a knife. It used to be food and grass, but now it is useless. Spending a lot of space writing these contents does not improve the book at all. Only so far.

The other poison points are not too bad to watch, but the guy in Blackstone Castle keeps jumping and outputting. I looked at the chapter name and it seems that he is probably not dead. The lord is coming. If you don't surrender first and see what the means are, you just jump and output in the face. It affects the perception. The identity of the veteran introduced is not reflected at all. As a lord, the name of righteousness lies with you. You don't punish him but you still have to prove your ability to him? What about killing chickens to scare monkeys? Are you giving this company an interview? There are no rules at all. If you don't know, you would think you are in a peaceful era. Whether you can fight or not is another matter. The protagonist has no temper at all when he is ridiculed. This is someone who has just killed someone, and is on the same level as the guy who was killed. How dare you? If you can tolerate this, the follow-up should enter normal development. I will not watch it. If there is a follow-up, I will be kicked.

For items in MC, this book follows the apparent mass, that is, the mass of the item corresponding to its size in reality, rather than the mass deduced from the actual mass of the basic blocks in MC. My goal is to try to maintain the interesting characteristics of MC while maintaining the authenticity of the fantasy world. The main plot is still about the protagonist farming and developing his power, rather than personal combat power. Let the protagonist, the electricity-generating player, own more indigenous black slaves. And additional explanation, the current original MC combat power, in my setting, dragon, wither, ancient guardian, etc. Are all below level five. Without the addition of these BOSS-level creatures, the highest level of machines such as electricity generation is around level three, with some exceptions that can accelerate to the speed of light. At the same time, the MC block not only has the material properties, but also has the MC properties and can be destroyed by the natives, unless it has the indestructible property. If you think you have any questions, you can ask them, but in the end, what I wrote will prevail. I want to present a fantasy world that is as real as possible and write a good story, rather than a background board with MC functions and mindlessly boasting MC settings derived from the second creation of MC. Please do not bring in other second-generation settings. Please refer to the MC original version and the settings written by me. If you don't like it or feel unhappy, you can go to my post and scold me, but please don't affect other readers and my possible readers. This is for the readers' experience and my job. At the same time, I apologize for the previous digression and the excessive description of useless supporting characters. Sorry.

Too watery, too wordy. When the protagonist is around, a lot of descriptions are made of the psychological actions of the supporting characters, causing the main plot to drag on and there is no content even after reading three chapters.

It's not bad at all, it's just a bit long-winded and procrastinating. Moreover, the writing style is not good. It is obviously a very pretentious plot, but the writing is very low.

Starting from the protagonist, there are all kinds of things. There is no content. The protagonist's strength has not yet developed. It deviates from the main line. This kind of writing is purely to screen readers.

If the lower level cannot rely on numerical superiority to surround and kill high-level professionals, then the development of the army will be meaningless. Two second-level professionals actually need hundreds of iron men to surround and kill them. Is it still meaningful for you to recruit soldiers like this? Rather than wasting so many resources, it would be better to train professionals specifically.

Have you ever been a lord? Just write it all out, take it for granted

After reading Chapter 26, I felt it was bland. MC abilities demonstrated by the protagonist so far: digging soil, filling soil, growing wheat using a floating semi-automatic farm, furnace, semi-automatic killing of chickens. What the protagonist is currently doing with MC points: asking his cronies to open the box. To be honest, it feels very unnecessary. The efficiency of the farm and chicken farm is not very high (compared to the MC characteristics). Since the MC point allows people to use MC items and blocks, and the controllable range is very specific, why not just put the villagers into production? Rely on manpower and original MC to quickly obtain materials for upgrading to increase influence; then use MC points harvested through influence to enrich modules to improve production efficiency or reduce territory shortcomings to gain a foothold in this area. I feel that there are too many descriptions of the supporting characters. I can just summarize them in a few words: distrust, suspicion, speculation, and shock. Don't put any dirt. Wow, I'm so surprised. Burn an ore, oh my god, incredible. If the frequency is too high, it will make people feel uncomfortable. It feels like the module they most want to see has never been seen.

Here's a suggestion: Don't write too detailed about the development of the power. The protagonist should not end up personally, just grasp the general direction. The main job of the protagonist is to use existing resources to build MC and use MC to develop power. What readers want to see is people's shock and thinking after seeing MC items and buildings, as well as the manifestation of MC cubes in the real world. For example, how much does a 1×1×1 cube weigh in the real world? Who can pick it up and who can't pick it up?

It is recommended that the author add the tag "Group Portrait" in the introduction

There is a minor problem with this novel. That is, the differences between different identities are not written. I don't feel any dignity or inferiority.

One question, you are not writing a group portrait article. The visual focus is on the protagonist at the end. Try to compress the ink of other supporting characters into a few chapters and try not to put them together. It is recommended to intersperse a chapter of description after the highlight of the protagonist. I really have no interest in reading the previous chapters. I read a chapter within ten seconds. I don't want to put the content into my mind at all. I just know that it is a subordinate who colluded with foreign enemies to rebel. I don't remember who specifically did what. I didn't pay attention. I just don't want to know. With this kind of mentality, I saw someone said before that you want to describe vivid images of everyone. The idea is good, but this is not a group portrait article, and I feel that you are not able to write it well now. It may be that the number of words is not enough to express it, but even if it is still short, don't think about writing vivid images of any group. You should focus on writing the important roles you have decided now, and other supporting roles should be presented to let readers know that there is such a person.

I feel that this territory is so chaotic. After experiencing the food problem, it should be normal, but it is not. Then there are child trafficking, encountering new lords, food crises, and creations from the sky. In the end, this guy seems to have his head caught in the door. When I ask you where people have gone, how do you respond? If you say that all those people ran away, you obviously have a problem.

I just read Chapter 18. The author's Chinese is very good, but he is probably a novice in writing. The description of the character's performance is too laborious, resulting in the writing being very wordy and sparse. Regardless of whether it is the protagonist, supporting role or background person, their eyes, faces, private discussions and even taking a step must be described.

Brothers, I know I was wrong and I will never write like that again! I have repented of my past mistakes and changed my ways. I will never write a bunch of useless supporting characters again, and I will no longer be so watery.

In fact, it is best for the protagonist of an MC story not to have some local blood ties. MC stories in which the protagonist, as an outside force, breaks the original pattern, can usually arouse readers' expectations. From the introduction, the protagonist is an abandoned bloodline. When the time comes to fight for territory, the bloodline will inevitably be labeled with the previous bloodline. It is easy for local MCs to be written as simple farming and development, and natural disaster MCs are the right way to go.

I have read "Going to Middle-earth with the MC System" before. It was very well written. What do you think of this?

If the new book is still for MC, I suggest you follow the Zhutianwudi stream and write some fan stories such as Swallowing Starry Sky. This may be easier.

The real world is more outrageous than in novels, but readers may not adapt to it