
Douluo: Reborn Huo Yuhao, Your Holiness Please Show Restraint
斗罗:重生雨浩,教皇大人请自重
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- Light Novel
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- ACG Fanfiction
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- 8mo ago
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Xiao Yuhao in Bibi Dong's eyes
The rabbit itself has a high probability of being pitted. It is only cruel to leave the rabbit to Yakuza to torture. If you don't grab the Asura God and Poseidon God's thrones, you can give the fairy grass and the Vast Sea Universe Cover to Yakuza. If you don't torture them, it will be a lot less interesting. The Shura God God's seat can be stuck and given to you, it's okay. At worst, just dry it and give it to Qian Renxue and Bibi Dongti. Ascend to the divine position, alienate the Shrek Seven Devils in advance, engage in various minor incidents (not allowing the Yakuza to make money at the auction, Ning Fengzhi just ignores the Yakuza, enters the Tiandou Royal Academy and is beaten into a pig head by Dugu Bo and has his soul bone taken away to befriend Lao Huo, fights against the Yakuza combination in the spirit fighting arena), uses fairy grass to destroy half of the mouse, and then lets him The mouse hole and the mouse bite the mouse, and then come out to kill the mice and run away, use fairy grass to give Yakuza confidence, and then take out the mouse head and its whole body soul bones, as well as the soul bones of Fuck and Fuck (this can be reserved for Yakuza) as prizes in the soul fighting competition, so that Yakusan cannot even enter the top three, and attack Gangzi after merging Shrek Academy , bringing together Flanders and Liu Erlong, the fake brothers turned against each other and the Yakuza were defeated and the Mouse Head couldn't be brought back. Wouldn't it be more fun? The country-stealing plan brought Lao Huo and Xue Ke into contact and directly replaced Tiandou with his own people so that the old emperor could see the situation clearly. Yakuza had one hand or foot. During the fight, he got the Vast Sea Universe Cover and escaped. Prince Xue Xin died. Xue Beng escaped and became the emperor and split Tiandou (in order to better clean up the reactionary people). Yakuza escaped to Star Dou to find rabbits and met Wuhun Hall to catch rabbits. The rabbits and two licking beasts sacrificed to restore their legs or hands and escaped successfully. He found Gangzi and The other two obscene beasts were preparing to go to Poseidon Island. They first followed Tai Tai to conquer the other three single-attribute families to develop their power. They found that they were extremely hostile to Yasan and had not succeeded in challenging them. Hou Xu took Gangzi, the two obscene beasts orangutans and some random people to Poseidon Island to go sailing on Poseidon Island. Gangzi and his group were raped by that one on the island. In the end, a few people who arrived at Poseidon Island were blocked or allowed to enter the more core areas 😏, which made Yakuza dare not go to the mainland before he became a god. All the soul rings could only rely on sea spirit beasts. He recruited the Demon Whale King and other ocean overlord beasts in advance to erase their sense of existence, leaving some weaker races, so that Yakuza could not find the assessment. The goal is to let Poseidon himself destroy his own faith, let Poseidon and Shura violate the rules and allow Yakuza to become a god and resurrect Rabbit, and come up with an alternative version of Qiankun Qingqing Valley, directly destroying the two gods in one, without Ning Rongrong and Oscar, they cannot be resurrected, and then force Poseidon and Shura to resurrect Yakuza against regulations, and we are ready to start a team battle and start the siege.
Heroine
Can the heroine accept the snake woman and the prison anus 😆
Qiu'er is Qiu'er, and Qiu'er will never be a part of Tang Wutong's spiritual consciousness. What Huo Yuhao owes is Wang Dong'er and Wang Qiu'er, not Tang Wutong. The moment Tang Wutong wakes up, Wang Dong'er has disappeared forever. Tang Wutong is not Wang Dong'er who loves Huo Yuhao to the bone, nor Wang Qiu'er who is willing to sacrifice in exchange for Huo Yuhao's life. She is just the daughter of the Tang Shenwang.
Leaving aside everything else, author, can you clarify the issue of combat power first? Is Qian Daoliu better than Mu En? It's not such nonsense First of all, the angelic power of Qiandaoliu cannot be used anytime and anywhere. He can only use the angelic power in the Wuhun Hall. Secondly, Mu En can also use the light of the sea god Also, Dou Yi does not have a soul core. Without divine power, not to mention Muen, Xuanzi can beat Qiandaoliu to death.
I'm convinced, Yu Hao's rebirth is a good subject, but you insist on blackmailing the characters. I wonder if you have an outline. You wouldn't write a book with full-screen black characters without even an outline. The Douluo fandom in Lao Nia relies on promoting the plot to let those abstract characters expose their abstract points, instead of laboriously blackmailing. You Yu Xiaogang is like a different person. 😅😅😅 I still suggest you read more about what Lao Nia's fans write, and then look at your own. Aren't you embarrassed?
Don't be too hard on the black people, learn more from Douluo colleagues in Lao Nia. There is no reason why people have good grades. Just show the abstract inadvertently, instead of using too much pen and ink to criticize the black people.
It is recommended to accept the following characters as a harem. It will definitely be a masterpiece if you write it.
Yu Xiaogang, Tang San, Tang Hao, Dai Mubai, Ma Hongjun, Oscar, Flanders, Zhao Wuji, Li Yusong, Shao Xin, Meng Shenji, Bai Baoshan, Zhilin, Xueye Emperor, Meng Shu, Yueguan, Ghost, Snake Spear, Ayurveda, Ning Fengzhi, Gu Rong, Chen Xin, Wang Sheng, Old Jack, Xiao Chenyu, Shi Nian, Dugu Bo, Yu Tianxin, Yu Tianheng, Hu Yanli, Hu Yanzhen, Sea Spear Douluo, Sea Horse Douluo, Sea Horse Douluo, Qian Daoliu, Tang Chen, Salas, Bu Le, Li Yu Min Po, the four clan leaders, Su Yuntao, Tang Xiao, Tang Lie, well, not many, that's all, I don't want the rest 🙂
The more I watch it, the more ridiculous it becomes. A harem is just a harem, and the story about a stallion who accepts all comers is boring. The plot basically has a name, except for the Ice Emperor who gave it to Tianmeng, and basically took away the rest. Except for the part about upgrading yourself, the plot is basically all about picking up girls and upgrading them. Qian Renxue's level 60 absorption of 200,000 years is barely acceptable. His god-level martial soul is innate at level 20, and it's not stressful to seal it a little. When I saw Ning Rongrong at level 30, ready to absorb a hundred thousand years, I really couldn't hold back. Even the little witch's trashy physique would be enough to absorb it for a few thousand years. And you are just like cabbage for a hundred thousand year old soul beast. Just give it away so casually. That's too ridiculous. Well, it's really up to you to write whatever you want. Do you really think that everyone is Huo Gua?
After a rough scan, it's 5, 3.0 Or above. The following are some controversial/poisonous points (in my personal opinion)
It's more sexy 1. There are too many scenes in Tianmeng. In the original work, except for the time when he went to the Dragon Gate, I didn't see how much Ice Emperor likes Tianmeng. 2. To forcefully increase the combat power, Electrolux is really not that exaggeratedly strong, and there are also Tang Chen and so on. 3. Since there are many female protagonists, some female protagonists have relatively few roles (such as Dugu Yan and the Shui sisters), and some of the female protagonists' personalities are a bit occ.