I Became a Tycoon by Collecting Fragments

He didn't even touch the hands of over 20 women, that's incredible! And since you're already rich, why are you still trying to seduce that woman? Why not just throw money at her? It's ridiculous. And why do you always play the simulation game of opening a shop? Why don't you try the simulation game of trading stocks, gold, or other commodities?

There's been far too much writing about the simulation industry. It could have been just briefly mentioned, but they insist on writing about it in every simulation. It's ridiculous; I can't read a single word of it.

Why describe someone who's just a working-class person, not a construction worker, as having such a greasy and disgusting appearance? Are you living in the Jurassic period? Secondly, you're already so rich, why would you desperately try to seduce a nurse who'd throw up at the mere sight of you? People should improve themselves. Trying to improve yourself to please a woman who's only interested in your wallet and finds you repulsive is just too low.

The writing is utterly devoid of any profound meaning or thought; it's all about sleeping with every woman and fawning over every "white moonlight" (idealized female character). Honestly, it lacks any emotional depth and makes it impossible to connect with the characters.

The author portrayed the protagonist as too ugly, making it impossible to empathize with him. 😭😭

How can a shop that doesn't require rent and has great food possibly compete with shops that require rent?

The last few chapters are poorly written; they're like children playing house.

There's some simp-like literature involved, but it feels like an old-fashioned novel stuck in the present day. At least in typical "Mary Sue" stories, the protagonist attracts women; this guy is just fawning over women, and he even has a system!

The awkward posting on social media to brag, coupled with the protagonist being a smoker, was off-putting from the very first three chapters.

The synopsis seemed quite appealing at first, but after a few chapters I couldn't continue. Just a quick rant: at the hospital, they say it's an investment, then later they say it's an IOU—is it an investment or a loan with an IOU? That's contradictory. Then it says the protagonist's father was in a car accident while chasing his partner, resulting in hospitalization.