Dayin Wu Sheng

I actually don't understand why there is a scout war in the book when there is no war! Even in ancient times, even in troubled times like the Three Kingdoms period, the two sides often had trade exchanges. You were among me, and you were among me. Several wars were made to take advantage of the situation! The protagonist lives in a border town but not a front-line border town, and he always resorts to scouting when there is no war? Even if they were to attack Grass Valley, no one would be foolish enough to go to the other side's city to attack them, right? After writing for so long, there seems to be no village outside the city? Do everyone in the city eat takeout? Also, there is no need to write about the protagonist's growth in such detail. Now that it is written in such detail, the protagonist's growth will be cut off quickly. The unattainable feeling in his heart will collapse quickly. The protagonist's mother also feels very strange. He panics and cries at every turn. How can he still be a loving mother? In fact, the protagonist is only 13 years old, and the protagonist's mother was probably not even 30 in ancient times.

You can see, this article is for abuse. There is a system, but there is no way to make tricks. To learn swordsmanship, you have to really get serious martial arts and practice it seriously, but it can't help break the limit. Being bullied and targeted, but still unable to suppress the opponent when counterattacking, is full of dangers, and it is absolutely not a happy story. The problem is, I don't have any fun at all once, and I get suppressed every time I want to highlight it, which seems like a form of abuse. Forget it, give up.

After watching it, I think it's okay, but some aspects are not logical. For example, my first conclusion is that the border troops must be elite. If the border army is not elite, it will be balanced to the elite, because it is not the elite who cannot defend it. If it is an important pass, there must be smuggling and trade. If you have an economy, you will definitely have interests. If you have interests, you will definitely have to protect these interests, so you must have strong troops. If there is no economy, it means there is no oil and water, and there is no need to defend. Of course, to put it another way, if there is no pure border between oil and water, there will basically be no troops stationed. In ancient times, the construction of cities and garrisoning basically had the element of geographical advantage. Therefore, no matter what time, the frontier army and the pass are connected together. The pass is connected with oil and water smuggling, and smuggling is basically connected with strong soldiers. Therefore, the border army must have elites, whether they are regular soldiers or private soldiers. If you have elites, you will definitely have to be well-off and have a follow-up supply of troops, so I personally understand that military households may have a much easier life. Of course, if the frontier army is simply willing to die, then it won't be long before the military households are all dead and cannot be replaced, then there is no need to hold on to this place, and the hundreds of households above are not that stupid. The second is that the rangers stay up all night and fight each other. Isn't this basically the case when there are large armies to conquer each other? At this time, life would be better if they didn't have a meal, but it doesn't seem to reflect this. It feels a little awkward that the military in the book is so bad and yet it doesn't die. It's just a bit awkward to simply fight each other without asking the reason.

The writing is too childish, and minors can barely read it. Others should forget it. Pig's Foot is like an old lady, and she often writes as if she is about to die! I didn't make any efforts to improve it even though I was holding it, I basically just waited for the critical moment to improve it again! Don't know what the meaning of cheating is? Return to the Martial Saint? I have been living in this world for several months. It's like living in a prison cell. I know nothing about the outside world.

I really wanted to write this well, but I tried too hard. After reading more than ten chapters, I felt like it was just two words, exaggerated.

After reading dozens of chapters, tell me your feelings. Let's talk about Golden Finger first. Archery training is obviously the most difficult. It is several times more difficult than practicing swordsmanship and so on. The protagonist's archery practice improves rapidly, and then it is very slow when it comes to other training. It is difficult not to suspect that it is suppressing the protagonist's strength. Secondly, the author may want to suppress first and then rise from the beginning, but it seems that he does not see the rise and only sees the depression. Furthermore, the title of the book also makes it unclear whether the scholar wants to become the patron saint of this court, right? Funny

It has nothing to do with whether or not this hook is present. Just keep focusing on the plot of the protagonist. What's the charm? If you feel aggrieved after reading the novel, why not read the novel. Rubbish

What are you writing about? You haven't even sorted out the outline. If you travel through time and become a 13-year-old, is your thinking also a 13-year-old? Can only bows and arrows be used? Hunting is divided into traces, tracking, eyesight, and strength. Can you be considered good just by picking up a bow? Is it a waste to get started? I went into the mountains and hunted wild boars. Since they were only in the growth stage, why didn't they take them home separately? Since I asked Uncle Zhang to come back together, why didn't I use the relationship line? Since I didn't have the strength to protect them, why did I need to let people know that I hunted wild boars? I wanted to pretend to be B, but I couldn't keep a low profile. I thought like a child. What should I write? Cut it out.

I have finished reading it now, and even if I become Xiaoqi, I still feel panicked.

How should I put it, risking your life to survive is more frustrating than being an ox or a horse. It seems that you are constantly improving, but you are always struggling to survive on the edge of life and death.

This mother is simply sick. The military merit she earned by taking risks is just for two ounces of dried meat and half a pound of wine, right? It's better to go hunting and sneaking in fish. Even if you don't get military merit, at least you can get some silver reward.

Don't make the protagonist so emotional and righteous. The protagonist will starve to death and write about such a passionate young man.

This book has too few words. Are there other books?

When I write a book, I don't care about the details at all, because a web article is not a historical document, so it just needs to be roughly the same. I only care about the development logic of the story structure in the book and whether the characters' emotions are normal. The reality is very basic. In the starting point, such requirements have become high-standard requirements. Really very few! Basically, they are all nonsense, pretentiousness, persecution and a collection of various symptoms from the Encyclopedia of Mental Illness.

The plot is a bit delayed and there are too many flowery words.

After reading the previous chapters, the author described that there were several skinny dogs digging in the garbage on the street. This was completely inconsistent with the social conditions at that time. Could it be that no one eats dog meat, or is it disgusting?

This is the first time I saw a shield and a spear being used together. What did the author think? ?

Change your over-exaggeration problem, author. It's hard to read a lot of modifiers in one sentence.

It was a masterpiece before the military camp, but after entering the military camp, it was pulled down all the way.

It was too chaotic after it was released. The current plot difficulty does not require the protagonist to change his participation and force him to participate in cheating. As soon as you think about it, it comes out

In fact, the author's plot is not bad. The current fantasy is quite good, but the unnecessary embellishments are too uncomfortable, so I can only abandon the book.

A lot of long sentences, redundant rhetoric, very tiring to read

Let me start by saying that it's not my fault, but the word Yin means heir, descendant, so Dayin sounds very embarrassing, but just like an ATM machine turned into an automatic teller machine, Dayin Wu Sheng turned into a descendant Wu Sheng, ennn I think it's quite interesting

It's a rubbish plug-in. The proficiency system has no use other than showing progress. Why do you need it?

The bloody emperor has thick soil, and the society is prosperous. The bloody shield grows long, and the road is bathed in blood and snow. He should be a strong man and brave, and he should not regret a thousand kills.

Just write something random, modern people don't know how to use the general trend? Do you know what public opinion means?

This is a soldier. I feel like an adventurer. Not a soldier

The writing is okay and worth reading, but the logic in the article is confusing and contradictory. I suggest you sort out the outline and ideas.

Is there anyone who starts the game as an orphan? I don't want to see someone with a family. Can you recommend one?