Douluo: Kill the Game Before Tang San Rises

The writing is quite strange, which doesn't mean it's not well written. The author's synopsis of the plot and the ideas he introduced are quite good. However, there are a lot of problems in the plot: 1. There is no protagonist. On the surface, the author's protagonists are Cheng Yu and his family, but with the introduction of dozens of original characters, readers cannot remember so many characters. Moreover, each of these characters has many one-man shows. It seems that Cheng Yu and his family do not have a strong sense of protagonists, like a background board. 2. There is no main plot. Judging from the name and introduction of the book, the main plot is to kill the competition before Tang San rises. However, the author has just started beating level 99 and various ferocious beasts. Hasn't this already killed the competition? (1) If the author wants to discuss a topic, he should start writing when the protagonist is a child. He should focus on how the protagonist develops, how to gradually build his own power, and how to study the spirit of the soul guide. (2) If the author wants to write about what happens after the protagonist establishes his own power, and uses the invincible flow to fuck the protagonist of the original work, he should describe the process in detail, instead of the reader still not knowing what the author's main plot is? In summary, the author's language skills are still fluent, and the idea of ​​this book is not bad, but the writing is very strange.

The introduction screens readers.

Chapter 53 There are so many characters and there's an original heroine. Don't just send it yourself before signing the contract 🙂

The writing is okay, but you are all henpecked here. The underlying code of Douluo Continent, right?

The writing is okay, brother, but the protagonist's faction seems to have too many geniuses. I'm kidding, there's a golden generation per capita.

The protagonist has not been released for 30 photos. Who is the protagonist? What are you doing?

Thirty years in advance, as long as the plot is not terrible, even if you write a snake woman as the heroine, I can still watch it with gritted teeth. Creating an original heroine by a fan is just a matter of screening and purification.

Save money: create your own heroine + raise your ears

The writing is quite strange, the protagonist is like a skewer, he doesn't know what he is doing, it's inexplicable and very weird 😜😜😜

So far, the protagonist is more like a background. The protagonist's son, the fairy master who first met him, and the ultimate talent are all more similar to the protagonist. I still don't know what kind of soul ring the protagonist's first martial soul has. I don't know the specific contents of the more than 30 gifts from the protagonist's golden finger.

Crazy, how can there be so much originality? Just write your own original book.

Originality is of course an advantage, and the original characters are unattractive. It's just that the world setting is simple and clear, so there are many readers. Therefore, there is a setting but no original characters. Isn't this perfect?

Do you write fan fiction or original heroines? Then you might as well write a book yourself. The world of martial arts is not exclusive to Douluo Continent. There are also many novels about martial arts. Might as well create an original novel. Let's learn from the background of other novels, so far in advance. You should write an original plot. This is to filter out a wave of readers. Another original heroine has screened another wave of readers. It's better to write something original, so you don't have to share money with others. Maybe there will be dreams in the future.

Bibi Dong sent someone to seduce the male protagonist's daughter. The male protagonist didn't strike hard and taught Bibi Dong a lesson.

It's quite interesting to watch, but there are too many original characters. After watching it for a long time, there were only a few original characters, and I couldn't remember their names at all.

Bold. You write an original female protagonist. Still in love with the mainland. Readers, how can you feel the sense of empathy? You don't join them. Leave them to the natives. You deserve to die

What the hell 🙂 has nothing to do with Douluo

Did Super Douluo help the protagonist when he killed Xiao Wu's family? No, it means that a group of level 70 or 80 people can kill three hundred thousand year old soul beasts, and the Ming Dynasty and the Ming Dynasty are not ordinary soul beasts. These two are the masters of ten thousand years old soul beasts. Normally, it takes at least a ninety-seventh level or above titled Douluo to defeat that in the original work. Because Ju Gui Douluo's martial soul fusion skill is in the static field, the injuries he received from more than three Douluo like Bibi Dong were not serious injuries. Why are you stronger than a lineup that may have three Douluo besides Ju Gui Douluo? Moreover, Bibi Dong has twin martial souls and is obviously not an ordinary Douluo.

Is it funny to wear Douluo and have a single female protagonist?

It feels very much like a female porn novel. If you can't stand it, don't read it. The audience for each novel is different.

Even if you have a single heroine, it won't affect your love debt! It makes sense that this person would like to spread love debt before or after marriage, not to mention that the protagonist is a modern time traveler. 😏

I wrote about Tang San at the beginning, but after reading more than a hundred chapters, I haven't seen any mention of it, and there are many extra things added. I feel that there is no need to write a fanfic.

Qian Renxue is the leader and Tang San is the deputy. Without these two people, Douluo would have no soul.

The first 4 chapters are really endlessly sweet. It's the same as not reading them. There's no point at all. They're all descriptions of sweet people.

Endless Shennong, come out! ! ! !

There are so many original characters that I can't remember who is who.

Qibao Glazed Sect starts with the grandson of Kendo Chenxin

It should be the Douluo fanfic with the most profound portrayal of family affection.

What happened to the author and why he stopped writing?

There are too many original characters, and the plot is very slow. Now I know that the main plot is God.