Ascending to Immortality, Starting as an Alchemy Apprentice

Is the author a long-time fan of Mortal? Some settings are relatively consistent with the original work, Ness

Something I will consider when I have no choice but to read it - I have read Chapter 248 so far There are too many repetitive plots, and the protagonist's character growth cannot be seen after so many years of practice. When the author said that it will be renovated, it feels like it has not been changed, and the pace is very slow.

I don't like to read panel streams at first. Some books really make me want to read them every once in a while. However, I found that the author didn't mention the number of words in the panels in the text. Instead, he posted a free single chapter, which can be said to be a breath of fresh air.

Double at the end of the month, will the author add more updates?

To be honest, I'm tired of reading alchemy novels. That one started with the alchemy master and took this subject a hundred years later. I patiently flipped through it, and only persisted because there was other content at the end. Surprisingly, it was okay.

Why do immortal writers like to change maps?

The writing is quite good, but the biggest problem is that there are too many branches of the protagonist's practice. There are 12 volumes in total. There are all kinds of messes, including refining weapons, alchemy, and talismans. It makes my scalp numb when I read it. But the number of words is up. If you can't finish writing this one, you can write another one.

The author is still awesome, but the number of subscriptions is even lower than eunuchs.

It is a mortal-style novel with good writing style and rhythm, and has the flavor of a classical fairy tale. One advantage is that it does not compromise the realm. Several retreats are used in the middle to pass through the repetitive practice time, and it is very smooth to read in one sitting. That's right. There are no immortal cultivators who have something different to do every day. Han Li has been in seclusion for fifty or sixty years. In addition, the character arc of the protagonist is not obvious at the beginning, but after the foundation is established and the map is changed, the writing becomes better and better. What is rare is that there is no life-and-death hostility, and the reactions to others are also very realistic. If you are a little poor, you will be alone, and if you are good, you will support the younger generations. Personally, I think it is on the same level as books like Tianhai Immortal Clan, Asking the Immortal Way, and High-Grade Golden Elixir, and is better than the Immortality Drawing Talisman.

Finally I came across a well-written novel. Most of the novels written by ordinary people are either nonsense or nonsense. Although there are traces of Dao Zheng Zheng, how many books do not have traces of others? Although it is not in the middle and late stages, in the early stage it can be ranked in the top ten of Xianxia personal rankings (a 13-year-old bookworm). I read the free chapters word by word and subscribed to one to post comments. But the author is very sorry. I don't follow books. I know everything I know. I've added it to my bookshelf and I'll see you in a year. (Do you have any recommendations for similar novels with 2 million words?)

The face is handsome and the spirit is restrained.

I have read more than 100 chapters. There are quite a few characters, but I have no impression after reading them. The female characters were lost halfway through the writing. The framework is quite large and there is a lot of content, but it does not advance the main plot. How many scenes have been written for the story of several monks? The author is wondering but he has been making various appearances. It is difficult to say what kind of person the protagonist is. After all, the personality is not distinctive. Hay +

I started reading the book from Chu Sheng, and I am following it with tens of thousands of words. I have read Chapter 68 so far. Slow-burning, with huge settings and lots of foreshadowing, it is a standard three-piece set for mortals. Let's talk about the advantages first: the writing is smooth, there is no forced pretentious plot, and it has a bit of a mortal flavor, with a sense of difference between immortals and mortals. It's just that the protagonist cultivates a little too fast. The essence of the mortal style is that when you are low-status in the early stage, you can easily become an invincible style if you level up too quickly. Let's talk about the shortcomings: the plug-in is a bit complicated, and you need to be proficient in many things. It still needs to be questioned whether the writing power is enough to write in the Mahayana period. In addition, there are too many female characters, but they all pass by briefly without any outstanding memories. Conclusion: The shortcomings do not hide the good points, you can keep watching it as food and fodder. I hope that the combat power will not collapse in the later period, and there will not be a plot where the protagonist is alone and pretends to be cool, and everyone else is mentally retarded. I hope that there will be other talented disciples who can interact with the protagonist, and even cheat the protagonist to create a sense of group portrait.

A simple title, a masterpiece of traditional immortality cultivation, a good pace, and the combat power is not broken. The protagonist's personality is a bit like Han Li, the villain does not talk too much nonsense, and there is not much plot to force his wits. It is a rare good book.

Not bad, I took the time to read it in the past two days. Maybe it's been too long since I've seen this kind of fairy tale. Although I always feel that something is wrong, it may be that the shadow of a mortal is deeper. But for a new author, the rhythm is well grasped.

After looking at it, there are no big or obvious poisonous points. It is just too "classic" and a very standard template for the protagonist. Wherever he goes with his disaster star physique, he will be forced to be involved in troubles, not once or twice, but basically every time. He can't escape, and then he almost turns the bad luck into good luck. It is really exhausting to watch. It is true that there is basically no peaceful life, and you can get involved in a lot of troubles when you go to a remote corner 😅

Shen Nong has tried it and can give him food and grass +. If you like the mortal stream to be more classical, you can give it a try. The essence is still a process of starting from a small character and slowly becoming stronger. That is, the plug-in may be much stronger than the ancient mortal stream, but it can be gradually developed without compromising the combat power. This is a more attractive point for me. I am looking forward to the complete form in the future! ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧

The writing is good, but it always feels like it keeps advancing the plot, the climax points are too closely connected, and there is no good break. It would be better if the connection was more perfect ~

The plot is good, and I accidentally tied it. In terms of setting, the author will not mess around for the sake of innovation, and it is generally reasonable. I am just a reader and have no right to demand anything from the author. However, I feel that the author may not like a certain religion due to certain factors. For example, even the image of the Demon Sect in it is probably not as bad as the image of that sect. I would like to say that it is a little different from my perception. Maybe if the author has the opportunity, he can try to look at it from a different angle. At least it can add a different perspective, which may help to make the novel more exciting. Anyway, thank the author for his hard work.

Just out of curiosity, is it the majority who are silent, or who is the louder one?

The fairy grass was pretty good in the front, but where does the problem start? Where does it start from Fenbao Cliff? Every time you go to Fenbao Cliff, the plot problems become more serious. From the beginning, you join as a guest, and you can chat with a steward about interstate teleportation (100,000 spirit stones level) and then the other party can still make the decision. Don't you think it's weird? You must know that 1,000 low-grade spirit stones is a lot of money. According to the price in the article, you can buy a top-quality magic weapon. However, it is unreasonable for the manager to make the decision; and then contact Fenbaoya to go to the secret realm to activate time acceleration to practice. Seeing this, it is basically over. Time acceleration is a pure failure. This writing method was more useful when the Internet article first emerged, but now it is 2026. After countless iterations, time acceleration this way Settings full of loopholes have never been successful, even worse than Zhe Shou's practice. It has a huge damage to the world background setting. You can't explain many things. The original depth is completely lost, and it can't withstand scrutiny at all. It is a failure; in order to complete the task of Fenbaoya, I created my own spiritual root and mixed it into other sects to steal the skills 🔨. According to logic, can a sect that has been around for so many years be able to rip it off? Fenbaoya's character is so high, and then he asked the protagonist to do it, and the protagonist agreed, but he couldn't see that there were too many unreasonable things. The plot of Fenbaoya is too abrupt. It is just a meal of dumplings stuffed with vinegar. The priorities are reversed, which ultimately leads to loopholes and set destruction. Some people think it doesn't matter, but after the emotion fades, can you continue watching? People can't slap themselves in the face and still be happy. The other is that if you want everything, everything will be difficult to achieve in the end. The reason why I say this is not a setting problem, but that creation has priorities and people have limits. It is impossible to cover everything. It doesn't matter if the protagonist cultivates immortality, but you, the author, are not machines that cannot run multi-threads. , It is inevitable to focus on one thing and lose the other. For example, Fenbaoya concentrates on doing business and does whatever he wants within his circle, but don't go beyond this circle. Keqing can still make alchemy, cross-state teleportation is still understandable, and the secret realm cultivation business has been separated from the settings of the shop given before.

The rhythm is well controlled, and the protagonist is finally no longer being targeted, hunted, and made enemies.

It should be a big world of immortal cultivation, the kind of world where immortality is prosperous. There are four small families under the jurisdiction of a small sect, and there are 40,000 to 50,000 Qi-training and foundation-building monks in one family. It's indeed quite impressive. Other immortality novels are just dregs compared to this one. The families in other books only have three to five hundred monks at most. If there are thousands of monks, they are all big families. It's impossible to compare!

Xuan Qi takes shape, holding the Seven Wish Treasure Tree

To be honest, author, your writing style and smooth writing are among the best in the mortal genre of fairy tales, and your cultural knowledge reserve is also good. However, the plot setting is too long, the plot development is not good and not attractive, and the protagonist's character is unattractive. The biggest problem with your poor grades and low monthly votes is that the plot is too poor, which is a pity.

Sure enough, I read you right. Ancient Fa Immortal🙂

I feel that at present, the plot of the God Transformation Realm has probably been confirmed to take place in Tianyuan Continent. It is probably the opportunity to break through the God Transformation Realm in Tianyuan Continent. It is not clear where the breakthrough will be. Then we will recover the foreshadowing and puzzles of this world, such as what the Sea Eclipse God's heir is, such as the depths of the Qing Emperor's Cave, etc. Then the protagonist will probably stay in this world for a while after breaking through the realm of divine transformation. He should ascend to the upper realm before the middle stage of divine transformation, which should be a certain realm. After looking at the current difficulty of ascension, I wonder if I will have contact with some people in the upper realm first. If I do, it should have some relationship with the master of the Eight Views Palace (for now). In short, from the current point of view, the Earth and Land chapter is already in the late stage, and I have not read the Tianyuan Continent. Considering that the protagonist is already at a very high level, Tianyuan Continent will not write too much content (because some cultivation content must be left to write in the upper realm). Tianyuan Continent should focus on exploration and will not be involved in power struggles, otherwise it will be very lengthy. That's pretty much it for the Earth and Land chapter, and then we'll move on to the World and Heaven chapter. The main plot of the Realm of Heaven chapter is unlikely to focus on cultivation. To be honest, the subsequent realms are not well set up and it is easy to get repetitive. Therefore, either focus on the cultivation of the Ascension Scroll and develop the various arts of cultivation, such as the one true elixir mentioned in the introduction of the first edition of this book. The Taihuan Alchemy Master of Kyushu and the Green Gourd Sword Immortal of Nineteen Continents were highly anticipated at that time; either they would participate in the battle between the top forces, and the protagonist might create a force, or join a big force, such as the war between the worlds, etc. It depends on whether the author has the strength to grasp this part. At present, the Jietian chapter needs to recycle a lot of high-end settings, such as the mystery of the true spirit such as the Dongxuan Spirit Fox, the treasures such as the Tongtian Spirit Treasure, and should include the Ascension Scroll and so on. As for the realms of cultivation, they should be more classic: the realm of returning to the void, the realm of integration, the realm of Mahayana, and finally transcending tribulations and ascending. It shouldn't be a big problem if you don't write too outrageously. Finally, I hope the author will work hard to update and try to write this story as completely as possible. It is so difficult to find a novel that is not bad these days.

The first level monster is equivalent to the late stage of Qi training, and the sixth level is equivalent to the middle stage of pill formation. I don't know what the author is comparing. Are the subsequent gods equivalent to more than ten levels of monsters?

It's been a long time since I've seen such a fairy-tale novel that has a solid outlook, a compact plot, and grand scenes, and it gets better and better the more it's written! Although the author was somewhat influenced by "The Legend of Shushan Swordsman" and used some magic weapon names and character names, he did not just imitate it blindly. He wrote it with his own characteristics in setting the world view and plot direction. I watched it for four days and caught up to the latest. I like it very much and hope the author will continue to work hard! Come on!

I have been a bookworm for 20 years. I read it in more than half a month. I won't go into details about the advantages. Anyway, I personally think that it is a mortal Liuliangcao. Its writing style is much better than that of many old authors. I have fully subscribed and supported it. Let me talk about a few dissatisfaction points. This novel has too few plots about cultivation, except for the formation of the elixir Yuanying. , It's best to also write about other small bottlenecks in the middle. The other book next door, Alchemy, can be written in 1,000 words. Although it is very watery, it can be considered a balance between work and rest. I don't know how other people's experience of reading it is. Anyway, after I saw the plot after returning home, I felt that it was advancing too fast. Other books are watery. If you count too many, you are completely incompetent. It is too compact. It would be better if you add a few chapters of farming plots between the dungeon, the sect and the border, such as helping to rebuild the mountain gate, and the classic auctions and sororities. These are the best to write. If you don't write when others write, it will feel like something is missing. Yes, don't put too many words in a chapter, preferably less than 4,000, everyone knows the reason why The best part of the writing is when I was on the island, running through the foundation-building Dan Yuanying, the rhythm is very comfortable, and it also expands the world view. I hope the author can write more similar plots in the future