Tokyo: Infinite Super Powers

I always find it difficult to be the protagonist, having so many superpowers just for the sake of falling in love.

In fact, the author can write more calmly and use his abilities as needed. It's like going to the murderer's neighborhood in Chapter 6. Why does the protagonist want to observe secretly? You also hide in a secret place to observe, where is your God's perspective? And from your perspective, the previous description is still conceptual, so why not use it?

Shennong My evaluation of this book is: "Tokyo: My Super Power Weekly Refresh" (hereinafter referred to as Weekly Refresh) is not intended to be derogatory, but there are many places in this book that can indeed be seen as references to "Weekly Refresh": including but not limited to the rich lady, super powers to stir up the situation, punishing evildoers with super powers at will, etc. Of course, the author also wrote his own new novel I mean, the author of "Weekly Refresh" describes the plot of political figures having various thoughts due to their super powers. It can be ranked second among the behind-the-scenes novels I have read so far, but I don't know how the author considered it. By the end, it was just a taste of it. The author of this book did a very good job in this regard, boldly allowing the protagonist's power to affect the development of the real world (the U. S. Military developed a supernatural Power results), this is a very good and refreshing point, but once it is not controlled well, you may not be able to control the plot in the future. Let's look at this later; after talking about the advantages, let's also talk about the shortcomings. There are big problems with the emotional line of this book. Like this kind of pseudo-aura recovery story, the positioning of the heroine or female character largely determines whether the book will become a fairy grass or a poisonous weed, or whether it will be a fairy grass or a poisonous weed. "Weekly Refresh" is an example. In that novel, the role of the heroine is to a large extent a "limiter", allowing the protagonist to restrain herself even after she can single-handedly overturn the world (or to give readers a reason to accept the protagonist and not turn the world upside down). It also uses the perspectives of different female characters to reflect the changes that different people see after the protagonist changes the world. It is worth mentioning that this aspect of "Weekly Refresh" is very difficult to learn, because it requires the cooperation of writing power and outline. Unlike the traditional behind-the-scenes Naruto stream where the female character is basically a flower vase, "Weekly Refresh" allows the female character to have more plots and also greatly increases the difficulty of writing. If it weren't for the author's powerful writing style and writing style that is comparable to that of a certain site's top pornographic writers, and who occasionally gives out great benefits, readers would probably have given up reading the book long ago. This is also the reason why most of the ambitious authors in the current Tokyo behind-the-scenes series intentionally make female characters into vases, trying to avoid letting them interfere with the plot and offend readers as much as possible. From this point of view, the character of Yukinoshita actually has a big problem (in terms of outline and setting) because the author cannot give this character a reasonable motive for her to participate in the plot (I have seen many readers complain about Yukinoshita giving people the feeling of opening their eyes). In fact, this is because the character positioning is not clear. As a daughter of a daughter, Yukinoshita is actually more suitable. The cooperation is a camera that observes how the upper class reacts to the protagonist's impact, rather than a character who participates in the protagonist's daily operations (such a rich character cannot let go, and can only make the protagonist compromise without changing the character, but from the author's point of view, this is basically a suicide operation, and there is a high probability that readers will be furious and lose their subscription)

I don't think it's necessary for high school students to pretend to be college students. Wouldn't it be better to just write about college students?

Another novel that I have to jump to decide on. I just want to say that there will be more fights and killings and less love and sorrow.

A whole chapter can be written from the moment the protagonist decides to burn the paper until the paper is burned. There are also the ten chapters before and on the shelves. If you read them later or if they are released, you will definitely be scolded.

How dare you seek sacrifice from the darkness? Let me see how many days you can live 🙂

The current rhythm is similar to that of Tokyo Hokage. It starts with a light novel rhythm, describing the male and female protagonists, and then enters the group portrait, where the extraordinary rises and conflicts with society. Most people who read this type of novel like the plot behind it, and they are all bloodthirsty viewers. The biggest problem with this novel so far is that the text is not concise enough, resulting in a very slow plot that needs fattening up. . .

Unfortunately, this book is too long-winded at the beginning, and the plot is not advanced, resulting in a serious loss of readers. The writing at the end is obviously not bad.

Brother, it's a pity that you went to find someone else. It's a pity.

At present, it is food Two shortcomings 1. The two major directions of this article are: one is the entanglement with women, and the other is the protagonist's development of abilities and execution of justice. However, the protagonist in the book has no thoughts about women, only physical influence, which makes people confused whether it is a love story or a single behind-the-scenes affair. This book seems to want both, so the description is It's a bit like being both a cousin and a memorial arch. She has super powers. You can do whatever you want, either alone, or simply face your desires. The author shouldn't be like Xiao Chunan, be more mature 2. There are some content issues in some places, such as how Yukinoshita discovered the protagonist. I was really speechless. I spent two or three chapters describing the process in detail. What's the use? At most, it can play a little role in shaping the character, but it is only a little bit, but the price is very affecting the senses In general, it can be seen, the food level, come on.

It's good, but there are too many detailed descriptions and irrelevant science. For example, I wrote half a page to popularize the effects of hormones on the body, or popularize Japanese police levels, or a detailed description of the heroine's (probably?) Investigation process, and even the content of the Kusano group can be condensed into one chapter. It feels completely unnecessary.) Others are okay.

It feels like there are too many popular science descriptions. I think the following idea can help the protagonist slowly discover traces, and then slowly upgrade his abilities to form a confrontation, or a cat and mouse game. Of course, if you can write a battle of wits like Death Note, that would be an idea, but the writing requirements are quite high.

The author's control over coolness still needs to be improved. Part of the coolness of this kind of behind-the-scenes invincible article is that the person behind the scenes does not show up to control the situation, and part of it is to see the story of the person being manipulated. But on this basis, the invincible protagonist behind the scenes must be often mentioned from a third-party perspective. It will bring a sense of pretentiousness. For example, the author can set up a top genius to deduce the existence of a certain person behind the scenes. Then various third-party organizations gradually discover the existence of the protagonist, but do not know that it is the protagonist, and finally define the existence of the protagonist as "Creator" and "God". Then use various third-party performances to highlight the protagonist's brilliance, which can not only prevent the protagonist from being in front of the scene, but also highlight the brilliance and create dramatic conflicts. Otherwise, if you just let the protagonist control the scene without a third party to support the protagonist, it will lose the sense of fun.

No, this seedling is also in a hurry to sacrifice?

There are too many explanations and it feels unnecessary.

Can things created by imagination be withdrawn? Isn't it considered solipsistic?

It's well written, the protagonist is good, and the plot is smooth. After reading it, I haven't found any bad points yet. He lives up to the name of Chief Tiandao.

The space of gods and demons is not limited to the United States. It is best to choose this kind of infinite space from all over the world. China can also do it as long as it does not involve sensitive topics.

I've read dozens of chapters, and it's not bad, but it's really too watery. For example, it took a whole chapter to burn a file.

Come on, author, you must persevere. Now that I have seen the scene between the protagonist and Yukinoue Amusement Park, I specially ordered a chapter to share my personal views. Overall, the story is very interesting, but the plot is too redundant, filled with too many words, and the heart and expressions are described from various angles. It is too tiring to watch. Maybe the author had an artistic conception or emotion that he wanted to convey, but felt that he was using too much force. Sorry for any offense.

I remember that there were protagonists or characters who did not have extraordinary abilities, but only psychological suggestions, etc., To achieve an effect similar to a reminder, thinking that they were geniuses or something, and then they actually became It seemed that there was a protagonist who used reminders to psychologically suggest that he was a genius, improving his memory and learning ability.

Is prostitution so serious?

The biggest problem with the behind-the-scenes BOSS is that he has no subordinates, so he always has to downgrade himself to do things personally. . . . . . And there are no comparable opponents,,,, such as the Four Little Gods of Subspace, the Gods of Another World You see, the boss behind the scenes has a bunch of awesome subordinates, and there is no grand war story.

What does it mean to write about Conan? Extra?

It's too big, it's no different from God

The boss gave me 2 monthly passes today

Why did you suddenly kill all the demon hunters and throw away the Chaos Orb?