Shrouding the Heavens: The Peerless Demon Emperor

Choosing a non-human protagonist for a harem novel seems to imply you have too many readers. The author of *Swallowing Heaven* also chose a non-human protagonist for his new book, and it barely reached 36 chapters in 24 hours. I don't think you can surpass that.

Your so-called "powerful being" is far too weak! His ultimate attack only covers a few dozen miles. I seriously doubt whether this "powerful being" you've described can even compare to a Dragon Transformation cultivator in the original work.

So far, it's not bad, at least watchable. However, it's worth noting that if the protagonist obtains the Immortal Ascension Cauldron fragment, and Ye Fan loses it, future plot developments might be difficult to reconcile. If they ignore it, Ye Fan can still follow the original story's trajectory, which is illogical.

Ruthless characters are overpowered in fan fiction. Most of the settings related to Ye Fan's opportunities were deliberately given to him by ruthless people.

It uses the original work as a cover, but includes various self-invented settings. Putting aside everything else, the Ji family isn't some expendable, lowly force like the descendants of the Azure Emperor. The Ji family's imperial weapon has always been present, and their high-level combat power consists of Imperial Princes and Great Saints. Why would they kill a divine body and then immediately unleash their imperial weapon without even reviving some of their resources?

Here are my thoughts after reading the author's latest chapter. First, the protagonist wasn't well-chosen. He's just an ordinary, unremarkable character, neither here nor there. I don't understand the point of transmigrating into a descendant of the Azure Emperor. Is he trying to reap the benefits of the Azure Emperor's bloodline? The problem is, the protagonist isn't an imperial prince.

Why did you take Qin Yao? Can't you take Yan Ruyu instead? She's so beautiful, it's such a waste not to take her!

As expected, I already said you shouldn't have chosen the old demon as the protagonist from the start. After all, a thousand years has passed and he still hasn't broken through to sainthood, which is enough to prove everything: the old demon has no chance of becoming a Great Emperor. I just don't understand what you were thinking when you chose someone who can't become a Great Emperor as the protagonist.

You really did become a eunuch again!!!

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