Shrouding the Heavens: The Peerless Demon Emperor

It seems that there are too many readers to choose someone who is not a human being to be exiled from the harem. The author of the new book "Tian Tian" chooses a non-human protagonist to start a harem. After reading it for 24 hours, I can't read it until thirty-six. I don't think you can be better than him.

Is your power too weak? It only takes tens of miles to use the ultimate move. I really doubt whether the powerful one you described can be compared to the dragon in the original work. After all, Zhandao is at least the surface level. As a result, the protagonist can only reach dozens of miles with one ultimate move at the level of almighty power. He can't even move a larger city. He is so weak.

So far it looks pretty good, at least it's at a level that can be seen. But it needs to be pointed out that the protagonist gets the fragment of the Immortal Cauldron, and without Ye Fan, the plot may not be smooth in the future. If you turn a blind eye, Ye Fan can still follow the trajectory of the original work, which is very unscientific. If the protagonist makes up for Ye Fan's shortcomings, the plot will focus on the nanny flow, which may also cause many new problems. So I think if you don't want to be too close to Ye Fan, or follow the nanny style, it's best to exchange the fragments of the Immortal Cauldron with the Dao Sutra Sea Scroll to Ye Fan. The protagonist of the original work Jie Hu has a chance, but if the protagonist of the original work needs to fight the thunder, someone has to fight for him. Otherwise, the plot may change drastically and there will be more and more problems, affecting the quality of the work. Currently, the protagonist has no plug-ins. The plot arrangement of this setting is very difficult. I hope the work will get better and better, this is a win-win situation.

The ruthlessness has been strengthened too much in fan fiction. Most of the settings have become relevant opportunities for Ye Fan, which were specially given by ruthless people.

The original story is adapted, with various settings that I take for granted. If nothing else, let's just say that the Ji family is not a miscellaneous force that is about to be wiped out like the descendants of the Qing Emperor. The Ji family's imperial soldiers have always been there, and their high-end combat power is the emperor's son, the great sage. Killed the divine body and directly mobilized the imperial soldiers to kill you without reviving some of the secrets?

Let me share my thoughts after reading the author's latest chapter First, the protagonist was not chosen well. He is ordinary and has no characteristics, neither good nor bad. I don't understand the use of traveling through time to become a descendant of the Qing Emperor. Do you want to reap the dividends of the Qing Emperor's bloodline? The problem is that the protagonist is not the emperor's son. The bloodline of the nineteenth generation grandson is useless and will become a shackle. Want to master the Qing Emperor's soldiers? If you hook up with Yan Ruyu, won't you automatically get the Qing Emperor soldiers? And in the end, even if the enlightenment is nothing more than the second green lotus, there is no sense of expectation or freshness at all with the Qing Emperor in front, and there are no plug-ins. This configuration is incomparable with the Qing Emperor. Secondly, I think the writing of the battle is very average. It's nothing more than using Demon Emperor Nine Slashes to fire long-range cannons. It's a bit boring🥱, and Demon Emperor Nine Slashes itself is not very popular, and the effect is quite abstract.

Why accept Qin Yao? Can you accept Yan Ruyu? It would be a pity to be so beautiful!

Unsurprisingly, I have said that you should not choose the old demon as the protagonist from the beginning. After all, it has taken so long for a thousand years to break through and become a saint, which is enough to explain everything, that is, there is no possibility of the old demon becoming the emperor. I don't understand why you take a person who can't become the emperor as the protagonist.

You are indeed a eunuch again! ! !

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