
Yitian: Starting from the Top of the Guangming Peak
倚天:从独上光明顶开始
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- Completed
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- 711k Words
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- Martial Arts
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- Male
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- Wuxia Fan Fiction
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- 10mo ago
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- Qidian
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Many people who watch Yitian's TV series don't have a correct understanding of Zhao Min because of Alyssa Chia's beauty. From the time Zhang Wuji returned to the Central Plains and was caught by Xiao Zhao Min, it has been proven that Zhao Min had already begun to massacre the anti-invasion heroes in the land, without any cover-up, Zhang Wuji was on the top of the light in order to save the Mingjiao. It is about the provocation conspiracy of the pseudo-Yuan invaders to the Wan'an Temple in the back. Let the six major sects experience it personally. The leader of the invaders was Zhao Min. Then when Zhang Wuji got married, Zhao Min came to steal the bride! In the view of the six major sects, what is this other than singing a double act? In the eyes of Mingjiao believers, is the life-saving grace in times of crisis a design or a life-saving grace? Everybody is doing it for the nation and the country. He abandoned his personal grievances and feelings, just to expel the Tartars and restore China. As a result, you went and fell in love with the most ruthless executioner who killed us, the aggressive executioner. Even if the person really saves his life, the worst he can do is give his life back to you.
The characters you created are so wise.
Like a romance novel, not a martial arts novel
I can't see the Wu in martial arts novels, nor the Xia!
I don't understand why the protagonist has to be in the Mingjiao and its headquarters. Doesn't Zaohui need to cultivate his core strength himself? How could there be a shortcut? Zhang Wuji just didn't have his own die-hard core strength. Otherwise, how could Zhu Yuanzhang steal power so easily?
It's okay if you insist on joining the Mingjiao, but you must cleanse the original forces of the Mingjiao like Zhu Yuanzhang along the way. Otherwise, do you really plan to worship the Holy Fire instead of worshiping heaven and earth?
I've read 10 chapters of "Selling Dog Meat on Sheep's Head", and the label of "Dare to Love and Hot Blood" is "The Heat is on the Second Brother". How can any martial arts novel have more than 20 chapters in which women account for more than 20 chapters? It's completely a romance novel.
Let's change the heroine!
To be honest, I really dislike the heroine Dai Yisi. This woman is too selfish and has bad views. It's okay to take her in to meet her physiological needs, but forget about the rest.
Everyone in it seems to be acting without any logic, mechanically sluggish, and a bit awkward, as if the author designed the desired plot direction in advance and then kneaded a few people together regardless.
The original forces of Mingjiao must be cleaned up later, otherwise if you want to conquer the world, you will have to follow Mingjiao's way of worshiping the holy fire instead of offering sacrifices to heaven and earth. You must govern the country according to the teachings of Mingjiao. As an emperor, you are no different from a puppet. Because your method of conquering the world through backdoor listing does not have enough prestige by nature. You started by borrowing other people's power, so you must However, it has to be restricted by others. Historically, Zhu Yuanzhang also left his father-in-law's camp and went it alone to achieve his success. A counter-example is Liu Bang's rebellion. The Lu family only invested in shares, but Queen Lu could become extremely powerful. After Liu Bang's death, he spent a lot of effort to eliminate the influence of the Lu family. For someone like the protagonist who is a small shareholder himself, the situation will be even more serious! {"NickName":"Book Friends 161012201306071","UserId":224262484}
It's not like it was written by a real person, it's either a studio or AI.
If you rub this IQ on the ground, Wang Shunchen can kill 3,000 of you. Practicing magical skills is in vain. If you practice "Thirteen Taibao" with this configuration, you can kill thousands of armies with a knife. The Nine Sun Magic Skills are endless and Jin Yong's perpetual motion machine does not kill people. Do you want to learn from Asan Gandhi? Your level is not as good as that of Obai. You have lost your time travel quota in vain 😁😁😁
I feel that the protagonist has learned the Nine Yang Divine Skill and the Great Shift of the Universe for nothing. The normal attack of the Nine Sun Divine Skill is equivalent to the general high-level martial arts. The ordinary light kung fu is not worse than the upper level, just worse than Wei Yixiao. The Great Shift of the Universe has developed potential and has a strength of more than 10,000 kilograms. It is so strenuous to fight a tiger. On the battlefield, he can only defend himself against fifty people. Gai Nie killed three hundred cavalry by himself and protected Tianming from any injuries. You might as well learn the Guigu Zongheng sword technique.
Have you never read the original work when reading the fanfic?
Haven't you ever read the original work of Yitian? Don't you even know who Han Qianye is? That's the real husband of the Purple Shirt Dragon King. How is Xiao Zhao's biological father?
The Nine-Yang Magic Power is immune to all poisons. You were bitten by a poisonous snake, and you still have so many operations. It seems that I really have to give up on you.
The protagonist loses his wits at the beginning
With the author's adjustments, it is expected to become a good book
The author should not lower his intelligence, or he should not set up the plot of capturing Chahan Timur. Since he has captured Chahan Timur, he should not lower his intelligence and let him go. This is rubbing the reader's intelligence to the ground.
To be honest, in recent chapters, the protagonist has been written as too weak and has very little combat experience. And I don't know why the more he describes it, the more it feels like Zhang Wuji is not decisive at all in his killings, and he doesn't know how to hit others' weaknesses when attacking. He just tries to imitate others. Just knowing that others' martial arts are strange and unfamiliar, he should find the right opportunity to kill them with one strike. With the protagonist's internal strength, he should be able to kill one with one palm. And even though he knew his own shortcomings, he actually didn't ask others for advice on martial arts when he was in the Mingjiao. Moreover, a big religion like the Mingjiao should have advanced melee martial arts for the protagonist to see. Wei Yixiao, who is such a good student in Qinggong, doesn't want to learn from others Meet the author here. After experiencing the Holy Fire Order incident, please make a decisive move and write in the direction of Qiao Feng Is the protagonist in the author's novel now simply a weakened version of Zhang Wuji?
Correct an error
There is a high probability that Mie Mie and Gu Hongzi are lovers. Mie Mie probably became a monk in anger after the death of his lover and brother.
The second one just ran away, the friendship with Xie Xun was written too stupidly.
Can you watch it if you change it into a game?
You have internal strength but no moves at the beginning, so you go to challenge Yitian Sword? Just read it after being swiped twice to write "disabled people". Slid away.
A brainless piece of writing. In the beginning, he makes friends with Xie Xun and rubs Gu Hongzi on the ground. He is a bitch and a pig at the same time, and at the same time, he degrades the Yitian Sword to be worthless! Little did they know that this sword carried the hopes of those who guarded the Xiangyang martial arts community together with Guo Daxia! Why is it not called Legend of Master Zhang? Acting like this is no different from Yang Xiao. Do you want to be the leader of the Ming Cult? If virtue is not worthy of your place, will Mingjiao's subordinates obey you? This group of people are really not afraid of death, and you can't subdue them just by being good at martial arts.
The protagonist is this time traveler, but he doesn't look like a time traveler at all, more like an aborigine
Well written
As far as the first book is concerned, it is really good. The martial arts circuit is too cold. I have always wanted to read a well-written martial arts novel. Tomato's Jiuding Ji is a good one.
What did you study in your nine years of compulsory education? Xie Xun was already blind when he besieged Guangmingding. How could a man from the Emei Sect use the Yitian Sword?
Brother, the writing is very good, come on.
The idea is great, but the writing is not exciting enough! Mr. Han has no charm at all in your writing
How should I put it, misplaced expectations?
I feel like there haven't been any martial arts plots since the Western Regions.
If it had been written twenty years ago, it would have become a hit. It's a pity that it's just average now.
In fact, Jiuyang still feels inferior to Jiuyin. Jiuyang Dacheng is indeed nb, but for experts, it is not as good as Jiuyin.