The Heretic's Handbook

After reading the introduction, I felt that it was an old thief, a guy, and Fengyue's gang of young people. After reading two chapters, I guessed it was you. I went back and took a look, and I just said that it was remade. Come on, I really like this feeling.

We all live in the past. One summer day 25 years ago, I felt exactly like this when I read "The Sherlock Holmes" for the first time in my life. Time passes on a macro scale, but it is symmetrical on a micro scale; there are gods in stories, but not in reality; the predecessors let society die, but future generations bear the price. We long for heroes, but unfortunately, this is no longer the age of heroes. Then, it is also satisfying to have the honor to watch the heroes in the book exit.

The style is very similar to the weather forecast, but the background is shown too slowly. At least part of the background needed for the current plot must be shown. The remaining background can be followed slowly. If too little is shown, it will become the Riddler, just like the first mate and captain. If they want to perform a ritual, they must at least tell the reader what the ritual is and at least part of it.

First of all, let me say that the author's writing style is excellent. But the shortcomings are very obvious. 1. The overall writing is very messy and fragmented. 2. The worldview has not been developed at all, and not all readers understand these myths and legends. You can't treat him as if you are enjoying yourself 3. The protagonist has no clear goals, like a cash puppet, he does what others say and does not have his own thinking. Many things came out of nowhere (for example, how those people on the ship became undead. I don't know if I missed it or if I didn't write it at all), and there is no explanation of the source. And it was inconsistent (for example, in the front, the water ghosts were afraid of him and wanted to hand over property to him, but in the back, the water ghosts wanted to kill him.) It was a bit more fun on the boat in the front, but when he got to the Duke's side in the back, he felt smelly and long. An event has not been completed for dozens of chapters. There is also forced amnesia, which is really unbearable. That's all.

It has the taste, but it lacks a little readability The protagonist looks like a stranger

1. The protagonist can lose his memory, but he cannot have no personality. Now he feels like he is indeed a good person. If the author needs him, he will be just. If he needs him, he will be righteous. If he needs him, he will be bloodthirsty. If he needs him, he will be bloodthirsty. If he needs him to be elegant, he will be elegant. His character can completely jump from left to right. Of course, if the author makes the next big move, just pretend that I didn't say it; 2. I feel like giving some supporting roles The lines are a bit unrefined, and many characters speak a lot, but they have no shaping effect, and instead squeeze the space for shaping the main characters; 3. The world view and power system are extremely lacking in description. On the one hand, it feels like the readers are very familiar with fantasy stories and myths, and on the other hand, it is difficult for people to get involved.

After reading seven chapters, I had the feeling that everyone was full of Riddlers and Loaders. The writing is very beautiful and epic, and basically all the descriptions are very graphic. However, it still feels a bit disconnected to see that the protagonist is very cold to Betty, whom he has known for many years, but directly touches the face of Anle, whom he has only known for less than an hour.

Who is Russell? In the entire volume, the protagonist is just a tool for the author to use the deus ex machina. It is even used to foreshadow the protagonist's life experience. The protagonist's life experience can be solved in a few chapters. It has to be presented with such a riddle and an overly rigid plot arrangement. The result is that the plot is very profound after reading, but the protagonist is covered up. The climax of the plot is also destroyed by the protagonist's deus ex machina, and the sense of satisfaction is gone. There are too many riddles buried in more than half of the new book issue, and new readers are not so patient to wait for you to solve the riddles bit by bit after it is released.

At first glance, it looks like the writing style of an old man. It doesn't look like the writing style of a newcomer.

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