
I Transmigrated as the Overlord and Became the Final Boss by Laying Low
穿越圣主,苟成最终BOSS
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 172k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Original ACG Fantasy
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
84Chapters
0Votes
319Recs
9Fans
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I don't understand, I don't understand what is written. Are you going to write an original novel using the framework of Jackie Chan's Adventures?
Damn it, it's all cut
At the beginning, you will cut off all the sheep spells 6666
I remember that the Golden Rooster King was actually a translation error, so the Golden Rooster King should be Qin Shi Huang
The Adventures of Jackie Chan: The Balance of Good and Evil
In Jackie Chan's Adventures, good and evil are always in a state of balance. I'm afraid the Eight Immortals won't be resurrected by then.
How many things does the Holy Lord have?
Twelve talismans, dragon teeth, fire energy, magic encyclopedia...
Have you ever traveled through time? Just write it down and take it for granted.
The start is too slow
The pace is too slow, there is a lot of plot water, the protagonist of the plot has disappeared in several chapters, and I don't know when the plot will be introduced.
The previous chapters give people a very good impression. You can consider speeding up the pace and focus on the main characters. Don't delay the pace for the so-called "one chapter summarizes an event and leads to the next chapter". After all, people are impetuous now. If the three golden chapters are written very slowly, the retention rate will be very low. You can consider reducing the description of supporting characters to speed up the progress 🙂
Have you ever fought a dragon? Then write about it? Scribbling on this pass 😜
After reading nine or ten, I didn't see any particular focus. I still don't know what the focus is on, and I feel completely confused.