Noble Villain Self-Rescue System

I felt something was wrong with the one I read recently, so I went back and read the chapters before I realized it. In 110,000 words and 48 chapters, you only wrote two things! Oh my god, no wonder it doesn't always seem that smooth. I counted it carefully. You wrote more than twenty chapters just about going to school, brother Di! After reading it, I almost forgot what this book was about.

The writing is good. I suggest you go to the factory for further study.

Investigation object: "Aristocratic Villain Self-Saving System" - Male Protagonist - [Lian Vick] Investigation Result: [Reincarnation (Awakening Su Hui)] Judgment Basis: Time Travel Investigator, as the name suggests, investigates the time travel situation of time travellers. The profession of recording and recording aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know in advance the time travel status of travelers in this world, and volunteers to provide observers with fast travel information query services If there are any mistakes, Wan Wang can correct me ——Feast of All Souls Zhenjun Stay on April 27, 2025

From 22 to 29, I wrote a cliche plot - a dandy aristocratic boy starts to change due to time travel, and then goes back to school to pretend to be a slap in the face. 😅😅😅

A copy of Goblin only introduced the demons and the conflicts within the Goblins in more than ten chapters.

I went back and took a quick look at it. The author probably divided the realm of strength into seven levels, SABCDEF. There are two in the system, knights, magicians, and a swordsman. I can barely add a swordsman, maybe three. Then that's all the information is gone. How should the level be assessed? What are the conditions for level improvement? What levels should be able to accomplish? What level the protagonist is currently at? What changes will the entry changes have on the protagonist's level strength? And most importantly, the reference system for level strength. I didn't write any of this, just one sentence: "I have great talent but I don't work hard enough to defeat goblins." I said why I saw something so strange.

She is a maid specially trained for the protagonist, and she has been specially trained, but the protagonist always talks back to her no matter what she says. She really doesn't understand this character. The tsundere has already withdrawn from the environment, and she will only feel aggrieved.

There is some novelty. The routine is so clichéd that the heroine has not yet been established, but she has started to fall behind. There is also a bit of a delay in the narrative, some of which can be covered in one or two chapters, there is no need to write more than ten chapters.

You wrote so much in one copy, I lost all desire to read it.

There should be someone like Lai Yue 😉

This is too bad. It's been several days and it's still here. Could it take so many days to write about just a palace banquet?

The front is fine, but the back is so watery that I can't stand it at all. What the hell is this writing about?

It looks good, no need to say more 🙂

Too slow. How to define water? It's not as clear as day But do you think the plot is too slow? Everything needs to be described a lot. Just write one thing in one chapter, even a small matter How many readers do you think will wait for you to write slowly? Read the comments. Compared to the previous one, it's too slow and watery.

What did you write about jb? It's so watery.

It looks good, write more, and write more about the author.

And some parts are written too deliberately, as if they must create what kind of person the protagonist is. These are okay. After all, I have eaten a lot of history. Is it really necessary to write more than ten or twenty chapters about this goblin? Isn't it to show the conspiracy of the nobles behind it?

I think if chapters 23 and 24 were deleted, more people might read it.

It's beautiful, I must keep making more, come on

The popularity is so low, I'm a bit afraid of dying.