America's Wild West: Redemption with Guns and Fire

Qidian probably has few books that are so well written and anchored by the background of Chinese workers on major American railroads. However, I am uneducated and can only evaluate him as awesome.

I saw the latest chapter 111 one day, and now I'm giving my thoughts and suggestions. First of all, I personally think this is a book with a rare starting point. There are no brainless golden fingers, and there is no inconsistent halo of the protagonist (if you don't count the countless bullets that passed near the door). There are no clichés in the writing. You can see a lot of foreshadowing and foreshadowing. You can also see some traces of the main line from the latest chapters. The character creation is very careful and full. However, I personally think that there are some writing and description problems in the first dozens of chapters of this book. There are too many names that readers are not familiar with doing different actions in the same scene, and sometimes these actions do not allow people to clearly understand what the characters are doing, making it difficult for readers to form a sense of picture. This will greatly discourage new readers who are not interested in the subject matter of this book. Personally, what should be explained in the first dozens of chapters is a bit unclear due to confusing descriptions. Therefore, I suggest that the author can check the actions and language descriptions of the characters in the big scenes in the first dozens of chapters, try to make the arrangement of the characters' actions more logical and graphic, and add some supplementary narratives to connect the characters' action language. The description in the latest chapter is clearer and more vivid, making people feel like they are actually there. If it is written at the current pace, this book will undoubtedly become a good book. The author's design of the plot is very good and attentive. The Western World he describes always makes me, a Red Dead player, smile knowingly. It not only pays tribute to Red Dead but also has something new, which is good. Finally, I hope the author will persist until the end and use this post to predict the future success of this book.

1899 The road for gunmen and outlaws has come to an end

There are a few points that I may need to tell you 1. This article is indeed relatively niche and may not allow you to experience the direct and refreshing feeling. 2. The creation was born out of Red Dead Redemption, with redemption as the core, between races, between humans and nature, and between humans. 3. The results are not ideal, but I will still persist in completing it. If I can increase subscriptions in the future, it will be even better. 4. It is not easy for the author, and my mind is buzzing with the plot every day. I personally think that the later content is better than the previous one. 5. I am a newbie, so I jumped right into the starting point. It turns out that I record audio books. The initial starting point was that I wanted to write and record myself, because many of the articles were high-end and low-end, and it was very difficult at the end, which made recording very painful for me. So this idea came up. I didn't expect that when I wrote it, it was completely different from what I thought at the time. It was difficult to put many of my ideas into practice. 6. Now that I know this shortcoming, this situation will not happen. Those who like the plot and story can rest assured to follow it, and the quality and quantity will be guaranteed. 7. It is not easy to create, so please give me your support and support, so that I can have the motivation to persevere. Don't leave me alone. The above is from the bottom of my heart, I hope you won't laugh.

I finally found a Western novel that I can read. I voted for all my monthly votes. Good luck to the author.

I thought it was a rare realistic western novel, so I started reading it with great joy. However, it turned out to be a fantasy. Sometimes the old man with a pocket watch taught Baji Quan, sometimes Tarot card divination, and sometimes Chen Jiu, a fantasy world. What a pity.

I feel like Lin is not simple... This fighting scene is too detailed...

Thanks to my favorite book friends for their votes and rewards, I will now report on the progress. I have a lot of manuscripts saved and 200,000 words have been published. What do you think of the plot and method behind it? I hope you can give your opinions and I hope that I can bring you better content in the future. Although the reading is not high, I can still feel the love of some friends. If you have any suggestions or ideas, you can put forward it. It is very difficult to make changes after saving too many manuscripts. Basically, the plot is linked to each other, just like building a house. At present, I think Lin's approval rate is much higher than other female supporting roles, so I will try to arrange more scenes for her in the future. This book is still in the early stages, and the backgrounds of the characters are gradually unfolding according to the development of the plot.

The title is a question. I've never received any positive reviews from book friends. I've only commented on it in articles, so I'd like to ask by the way. The book is quite good. Based on games and history, it shows us the turmoil of the era of our old friend Arthur Morgan, which is very immersive. Author, please remember that people will die if they deserve it, and no one can die. You are writing about a turbulent social environment. The protagonist may die on the journey to realize his dream, but there will be followers who will continue to move forward according to the protagonist's dream. Don't listen to what others say. Once you see it's not a serious mistake, there's no need to correct it. Come on, this American and Spanish language is very niche, come on.

The writing is really good, the writing style is well-conceived and very attentive. Three monthly passes will be given next month.

The plot is okay, but the problem is that it is always startling. Sometimes you have to watch it several times to know who is speaking or recalling it. During the dialogue, if you watch it too fast, you will not know who said which sentence.

The description is very immersive 👏

I have a question, do you want to see more hardcore reality or more fantasy? I will adjust the following content according to your preferences. If you are interested, we can communicate more. Or whoever you like as the heroine, and what kind of character you want to arrange, you can adjust it at any time. If you find something toxic, you can also spray it.

Each character will gradually be filled with avatars. If you like it, please like it. Some large pictures will be gradually inserted into the text.

The story is really good. I have always liked Western novels. Most of the others are Red Dead fanfics. This one really stood out to me.

I feel like I have read so many years in vain and cannot understand...😅

Your writing style is awesome. It's just that the subject matter is too niche. Either take your time, or write on a different subject.

In the era of pistols, Bajiquan was only for fitness.

Thrall died, died on the battlefield, just as the man wanted

Angela is resurrected, and it will take time to recover, because 20 chapters have been written according to the original plot line, which affects the whole body. Angela's death in the original plot is actually a necessary event because it involves another main character Maria in the follow-up. However, after Angela's resurrection, Maria cannot appear. Maria's appearance has already been foreshadowed in the beginning. You can't have your cake and eat it too It is difficult to change the plot line. You need to change the existing one and ensure the smooth progress of the follow-up. This will inevitably lead to flaws. If there are any problems, you can point them out and I will refine them when I have time. There is a reason why these people headed by Thrall came together. If no one died, it would be a bit distorted. It is better for some people to die than to be marginalized and disappear gradually. Whether you criticize Angela's death or not, even if you think it's poisonous and abandon the book, in my opinion, this is recognition of my character creation. In this story, some people may die, but her or his story is not over yet, and death is not necessarily a bad thing. Beauty with flaws is more impressive than not knowing who the person is after reading it. I am just accumulating experience in this book, because it is the first time I write it, and I always hope to tell a good story. Finally, I want to say, bosses, who do you like the most or who do not want to die can be told in advance here. Arranging the plot line in advance is much better than yesterday's unexpected incident. This is also the first time I have seen resurrection coins... But I hope the plot can be smoother.

Would it be better to explain it in detail instead?