Tokyo Onmyoji, Draw the Blue Hing Lantern at the Beginning

If Suzuki Ruri doesn't die, this book is destined to fail. The goal when he debuts is to become the protagonist and get the protagonist's soul piece. If he doesn't break up with her, how can he be a human being? It feels so frustrating to write an online article. I really thought that if I wrote a Japanese name and a Japanese background, the protagonist would have to be a male protagonist like a Japanese light novel🐢male? 😅

He was invincible, and he was beaten up and even said that he was going to kill the protagonist. But what happened?

Otherwise, author, just move the game system over. Otherwise, don't take such high steps. Start with S level and then describe fighting against the president for a while. Then he was killed by an aunt who appeared out of nowhere. So what's the use of your S-class? Waste recycling?

Writing a Japanese protagonist is really a Japanese male protagonist who has nothing but gentleness. If someone slaps you in the face, you are afraid that she will feel uncomfortable and you will kneel down and slap her, right? It's so aggrieved. It's so aggrieved.

From my personal point of view, it's a very ordinary development (most Tokyo Monster novels are written like this) (Of course, this doesn't mean it's not good to write like this, it's just that there's no sense of expectation.) You can check it out In addition, I personally don't have a good impression of Suzuki Ruri as a person (this is because she has a high probability of becoming the heroine, so I say this, of course it's possible It's a stereotype, after all, if she were him, she would most likely be a minor villain, one way or the other) Of course this is because her father's death is biased against spiritual masters, but it hurts me, so people who beat up my spiritual master teammates (can't say gods, after all, there are many such female protagonists in novels) make people look bad. The follow-up is probably that the protagonist rescued her (or in a big event, the protagonist's demonic power was out of control, but he suppressed it with his willpower and vibrated her), and then said that you don't need to save her, but in his heart he began to correct his prejudice against the spiritual master. This kind of plot. Of course, it would be better if the author could come up with new ideas. After all, I just read the novel and a good plot makes me happy 😜 But with the current development of the plot, there is less sense of expectation.

I won't watch this girl if she doesn't write it to death. The main character is like a man. If she writes it to death, she'll kick me.

He was beaten violently from the beginning, and he was still beaten violently in Chapter 30. This kind of abuse is really unbearable.

Which green turtles voted for this book?

The Demon Sword Girl is bigger than the lamp, what happened to the lamp? Isn't it just that the legs are longer than life? ! ! ! !

A summoned object is extremely poisonous according to the summoner.

Give me a cheat, the summoner cannot control the summoned objects, but a human being can break your seal and crush you, and still feel aggrieved, 😒

As a result, write 👻🐢content, 👍🏻

Dude, you have to suppress your fighting power, right? With such a turtle, isn't this little girl keeping it to eat the rice bowl? Not to mention the demonic power has been sealed. Why do you write desire to suppress first as desire to suppress first? What is the role of the Qingxing Lantern?

He is indeed a 🐢man, this is no longer an ordinary 🐢

This novel is so disgusting. Listen to me and leave quickly.

A classic and ordinary ending, not too logical. The plot is a bit cliched. Of course, the cliché of the plot is not a shortcoming. Although it is solid, it still needs to be tested on the writing. However, the writing generally seems dry and flowy.

Record the journey of the street boy. The author also figured out the first story of this book. In these 100,000 words, I wanted to try to write a multi-line rhythm, and I also wanted to try to write a story that first suppresses and then strengthens, but during the writing process, I found that there was a lack of character creation process. The character's personality was constantly being pulled by me on the edge of collapse. The same is true for the rhythm of the main plot. It is not easy to effectively control. For example, one chapter wrote a whole setting, and some chapters were not like branch plots, 💩💩. So I deliberately avoided this in the rhythm of the next 20 chapters. Another aspect is the choice of strength. It was very difficult to write the SSR at the beginning. I only figured out the direction after writing about 26 chapters. The invincible article was too difficult. On the one hand, I wanted to suppress my strength, and on the other hand, I wanted to write the character of the Qingxingdeng game, so I became the tortoise man who was criticized by everyone. In addition, there are also the problems of sentence fragmentation and writing style mentioned by readers, which I am also avoiding. This can only be developed instinctively through extensive practice and reading. Cut the book or rush to the street. In the next 100,000 words, I try to write the main line clearly, and the character structure does not collapse. I first suppress and then strengthen the protagonist without making the protagonist a turtle. Readers' negative comments will not be blocked. I also liked all the reasonable negative comments and crawled under the scolding. One hundred thousand words of wisdom: "What is the use of S-class? Waste recycling?"

A stereotypical Japanese high school student plus a two-dimensional otaku best friend

What kind of author writes what kind of male protagonist?

After reading the first 5 chapters, I realized that it was 2025, and it was written this way. I thought it was still before 2014? Let's talk about the hang up first. Onmyoji is a game that is so suppressed that it can only summon other characters without any insurance. When Qing Xing Lan comes out, he captures the protagonist, calls out his name and tightens the demon power, and tells his sister to relax 😰 Damn, it's been a long time since I saw this kind of writing. Has the author been disconnected from the Internet for a few years? I haven't read any novels in recent years, so I wrote this. There is also the pressure behind it, and he was slapped. Don't say that he was reincarnated by a Chinese. Chinese people are not so 🐢. It's really disgusting.

No one complained. I could only say it myself. Can we just kill people more quickly? If we don't kill them quickly, we should give them some water. Don't let them go in the end. Finally, there is Qing Xingdeng's rank and the knowledge he has after living for so long. It's like pretending that a new thing appears and has to be suppressed.

It seems that we didn't make it through after all, and it stopped on October 31st, which is sad and deplorable.