Black Calamity Era: the Road to Secret Martial Arts Starting from Adding Points

After reading Chapter 30, I felt really frustrated. I didn't read any more. I watched the extra stream just for fun. I couldn't stand it anymore because it was so frustrating. What's the use of being dark and backtracking?

It's a pity. I really like secret martial arts novels, but the protagonist in the author's novel does not make readers excited or have a strong sense of expectation, but instead makes readers feel aggrieved and angry.

The author's writing philosophy of piling up words in detail is not suitable for the setting of Miwu, nor is it suitable for other styles of Go away. No matter Miwu or Ji Dao, they all pay attention to fists and fists, clean and refreshing Your protagonist is not a clean and tidy character in the first place, and sometimes he will have very inappropriate and stupid ideas I know you want to show his psychological changes, but you need to solve this process outside the climax. Certain phenomena at tense moments will only make the reader feel that the protagonist is incompetent The other is the mastery of rhythm. You want to write delicately but the score is clear and detailed. Is it appropriate for your protagonist to be in a confused and passive state in the first ten chapters? I looked at such a long chapter and didn't even finish it. To put it bluntly, everyone felt that the text in this book was so stinky and long that they were too lazy to read on. Or, like me, they looked at how you wrote the secret martial arts, so they just scratched through large sections of text and found that it didn't delay the main plot. And the author didn't understand the degree of tension in the plot. You can't always write about the protagonist's battles in succession. Especially when your protagonist's character is extremely average and has no strong temperament at all. He usually has a break from playing games. You have not given the protagonist a rest period at all. All his thoughts are in the battle, and the usual base life training is completely skipped. However, your battle is too word-for-word and makes people less enthusiastic. So how much patience can readers have with the blessing of the secret weapon? Especially if you procrastinate and write a few paragraphs of description in one move If the author has figured it out, taking this book as an example, your first two battles should be finished in at least ten chapters. Regardless of whether it is enough for you to lay out the details, but the reader cannot read so many words, your plot The progress of the plot is only a little bit The personal life and rest of the protagonist also need to be specially described. It does not mean that the battle is tense and it is just fighting. There is no sense of reality and interest, and it will only make people feel tired That's all for now

How many chapters can the author hold on to? There are really very few people who write secret weapon settings.

Although I don't know how the context is achieved, it seems that a large number of AI-generated texts are used, and then manually modified? What a strong human-machine feeling🙂