It's Great to Be Reborn

If Li Hui's plot was deleted and the harem was opened directly, the results of this book would be ten times better. I don't understand why the author is still here using love to generate electricity. If it's time to cut it, I'll cut it off.

Although it seems to be a cool novel, it doesn't look good at all: 1. The male protagonist is indecisive and sighs every day, without any decisiveness of the director; 2. What is the purpose of the female protagonist who is 8 years older? Is this the first time you write in this style to give yourself strength? 3. The male protagonist is passive and rejects women most of the time, and he does not get the pleasure; 4. Part of the plot is witty, but this inherits the characteristic of cool articles that cannot be read with brains;

Emotionally indecisive and has tried poison

Now that you're reborn, there's no need to worry too much about the woman in your previous life. It's a bit of a show to lie about your age and the like.

The writing and plot are both excellent. The male protagonist's emotional hesitation is not really a bad point. It should be a foreshadowing of the character. It will probably evolve into something that I want them all. 😋Good to watch, 8/10

It's all over again, not just for the sake of having fun. Angry

For a while, I really couldn't accept the fact that an old woman eight years older was the heroine.

If you delete this Sister Hui, your grades will be at least twice as good. It's so disgusting to watch.

The progression of the plot is a bit awkward. For example, the guitar part at the graduation party is very awkward and not natural at all. You can probably guess the content after seeing the beginning. The emotional description is not delicate enough, the characters are a bit facial, and the basics of the foreshadowing are relatively rough. The author seems to be a newcomer?

Is it updated once a day?😭

Well written Come on

The author's writing skills are really great, and the principles are explained in simple and profound terms. As a reborn person, you can often get what you don't want. The idea is novel and easy to read. It is one of the best martial arts novels I have seen in recent years.

What a pity for a good book. Just reading the first few dozen chapters should be considered a masterpiece. The protagonist is established, but the hesitation in the rest is in vain.

The writing is nice and I love reading it, but I don't understand why it is written about a heroine who is divorced and eight years older? ? ? ?

❶There are too many storylines for volunteering, and putting it at the beginning will even deduct points. Chapter 2, 4, 5, and 11 were all submitted, but I was directly persuaded to quit at that time You are not a great author, how dare you start like this ❷Either you make money and have fun, or you are a Shura field. It's not a piece of writing, it doesn't involve the previous generation. It's okay to portray the parents as lovable. The problem is that they are not lovable ❸Sister Hui was married before. Although the groom died that night, it is not certain whether there was any intimacy. The author needs to follow up to debunk the mine