I'm Not Just Human!

The subject matter is good, the writing is decent, and the story is well told, but the plot and worldview are not very good. It feels like a child of luck. The protagonist is always upgraded inexplicably, and he doesn't know why. Then when he encounters difficulties, he just happens to have outside help, which always saves the day. For example, when the Silver Throne appears for the first time in the plot, the emperor or the church will actually know who it is as long as he checks it, but everyone seems to have ignored it. At the same time, everyone is kind to him, not malicious, and seems to want to make friends with this genius instead of destroying him. This is very wrong. Many of the subsequent plots seem to be clever and coherent, but in fact it is like the protagonist is being pushed away. Inexplicably, he is in crisis, inexplicably gets benefits, and inexplicably learns something. If you have read novels such as Xuanjian Xianzu, you should understand what I mean, or it feels like the whole book has been arranged by 008. What a coincidence. Furthermore, there are flaws in the social system and currency system. Many families should have ancestors from outside gods, rather than simply an internal game in the main world. There will also be games between the righteous gods and entities and outer gods. It is not just for a cleanser, and the protagonist's talent is constantly improving, but the resources must be provided by himself. Logically speaking, there will be no shortage of money from the first exposure of the Silver Throne. In recent chapters, the righteous gods will first throw away a few tons of sacred metal regardless of whether it is true or not. Speaking of the true gods, you can't tell the true from the false. Everyone talks about their own things, so how can you pray? Pray that if the opposite is fake and swallow you up, won't you explode? How do I feel about it? The protagonist lacks awe of mystery and relies on his background to wander around. [Doesn't take his own life seriously] This The biggest problem is that the protagonist is not like a person, but "regards himself as the protagonist", that is, he seems to know that he is the protagonist, and puts himself in the position of the "protagonist" to live his life, instead of treating himself as a time-traveler with a golden finger. This is very important. I wonder if you can understand it. In general, it is good, and can be rated as above average, but it is too thin and lacks complexity. Good people are good and bad people are bad. The protagonist also has a clear distinction between good and evil and hates evil. All characters lack complexity and the social structure is also very thin. The pretense routine is the same every time, and the mentality is childish, more like an 18-year-old boy. He is respectful to everyone he meets, and speaks of his seniors. When he meets bad people, he thinks about it. It is difficult for me to describe this feeling. In short, it is not like a mature person. Everyone is too clear-cut about good and evil.

This is a book written in the wrong era, an ambitious book that needs to be savored carefully. The world view built in just a few dozen pictures is extremely huge and very exciting. But it is indeed only the first work of a new author, which makes people suspect that the author is a veteran who dare not publish under an old account for fear that he will not be able to continue writing, and his reputation will be ruined. Chinese characters are used as sacred text, and Western fantasy is added with mystery. Author, your ideas can support the writing of thousands of chapters! !

It's very unsettling. Although I was able to nest the dolls in the end, I still stopped with my conscience. The writing is quite stylish and the writing style is also very good. The content and foreshadowing are very clear. I hope the author will continue his work in the next book.

Quick writing

I gave all my monthly passes, nine yesterday and three today

Have you exercised? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Do you want to exercise? Writing hastily and rashly is also conjecture.

The protagonist of the King's Invincible style is similar to a combination of Saitama and King. He is the son of destiny. The blame can never be placed on him, and all incidents can be solved easily. Setting: 8 Plot: 8 Writing: 7 Appraisal: Liangcao+ Evaluation: Very pure flavor, it feels like I used to read Wangdao comics. The author has done a lot of sewing, and I can see the setting of One Punch, the world view of Cthulhu, the secret contract, not to mention the soul ring of Douluo. But the sewing is quite fun and worth a look tips: The author seems to be a very smart newcomer, and his writing style and worldview system are obviously different from those reincarnations of old TJs. I have always been tolerant of new authors. The author can add some ink to the behind-the-scenes or the front-facing cupping (the reaction of the supporting character contrasts the protagonist's forced cupping), which is essentially similar to the behind-the-scenes person who looks more holy in front of the person. As for taking risks, there is currently no sense of crisis and no sense of exhilaration in making a comeback. Regarding the money system and level system, it is recommended to refer to the master's work again next time, or simply omit it. According to the current daily update volume of tens of thousands and the writing method of slowly exploring and improving, the master can be expected.

The writing is good, it does not overemphasize the strength of the protagonist, there is no poisonous point, the world view is large and exciting, and the mystery is well written. The strength level in the book can keep up with the destructive power. This is a good comment. I'm afraid that the kind of strength is god-level. You punch me and I kick you to fight with mortals. The destructive power is still floor-level. The protagonist must not deliberately be defeated or deliberately abuse the protagonist. Just follow the pretense and cross-pushing feeling mentioned above. Don't be a literary youth or abuse the protagonist. I have been a bookworm for more than 20 years. It is too difficult to find a book that suits my appetite. Keep writing at this pace. Book it all! Come on author, don't be a eunuch! 🤓

In order to cope with the physical test, I once improved my long-distance running time by 1 minute in one week. It's a pity that I didn't stick with it after taking the exam, otherwise I would have exceeded the speed of light in one month. Next month we will break through the negative numbers and reverse time and space.

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Have you ever been a god? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

I have read more than 400 chapters, let me share some personal insights. It just feels like the protagonist's status has been greatly improved. After turning from an extraordinary person to a god, it feels like the map has been changed and the description method of the other supporting characters has been changed. The sense of déjà vu is particularly strong. Even before I became a god, the descriptions of gods other than gods were somewhat mysterious. Now, the descriptions of other gods are too anthropomorphic.

Can the author turn off the anti-theft function?

How should I put it? The title of the book is a piece of cake, and I was attracted by the introduction 🙂, and then I read it in one go. Can you please do more 🙂, and also change the title of your book that is almost a rip-off 🙂

Have you ever been a god? Some things are written randomly, and I take it for granted!

Have you ever been a god? Just write

After reading the introduction, it sounds like an invincible flow. There is only one question. Can the protagonist realize that he is strong? After all, Saitama knows how strong he is.

Nowadays, the rules of the book review area are corrupt and traitors are everywhere. This is due to the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates 10,000 words every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun. I heard that calves born in sheep pens will not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are in Qidian. You use your computer keyboard frequently, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? Qidian is strong because it has inherited the etiquette and skills of its ancestors. Stop breaking the news, the pressure has nowhere to release, and you become tired. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If it goes on like this, great disaster will definitely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can have tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say! Poujie cannot get royalties, and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference. There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, the words used to express opinions are often so intense that they are almost slanderous. Author, you should think carefully about whether this is right or wrong. Those authors who updated less, delayed updates, or missed updates had no time to feel sad about themselves, so they were drowned in the mighty torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them: later authors felt sad and did not learn from it, and future authors felt sad about it!

Which husband has left the palace again😋

Have you ever been a god? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Benice

It's the most detailed book I've ever read. I've filled in almost everything I thought of and forgotten.

Please ignore the ribs and fruit, this one is spicy

The setting is interesting, relaxed and refreshing, with a fairy tale feel. It's just that the puzzles are too confusing and the characters aren't distinct enough. Overall it's pretty good.

I haven't read it yet. I don't know if it's good or not. The subject matter is my favorite type. I'll order all the current ones first and see how it goes. If the author doesn't reply to me, I'll put it on the bookshelf to gather dust and never read it again (Funny face. JPG

The cover feels like:

Not bad, you can take a look, there is nothing poisonous or anything like that.

Looks great, all ordered😋😋😋

Finished spreading flowers! Also looking forward to the author's new book! Open a new book soon!