Douluo: All the Vests I Made up Become Gods

Although the author regards Xiu as the main body, you can't make him too much stronger than other vests. Assuming that Xiu's strength is 1, the vest next to Xiu must also have at least 0.9. Su Ming, who is at the top, can hang up all the vests and hit them, which is not entertaining at all. Regarding the matter of whether the vest knows that he is a vest, the weak vests can be used as NPCs to lead the natives to upgrade. Those strong vests can know the facts, and they can cooperate with Xiuda to make the plot proceed smoothly according to the script. The first one is purely Su Ming's one-man show. So many vests have turned into tool men. He wants to bring a thug and fools Di Tian. It cannot be linked with the main body at all. Moreover, it steps on Bai Ningbing's face and lifts Su Ming. Readers know that it is a vest, and they are not happy at all. Weak vests lead the natives to upgrade without knowing the facts. Strong vests need to stir up the storm and provide help to the main body. Knowing the facts does not hinder them, which is more like a behind-the-scenes story.

I hope that the vests are all played by the protagonist's own consciousness, and I also hope that the vests will not all be Douluo's original characters. All abilities in One Piece, including Naruto, Demon Slayer, and Demon Slayer's Breathing Technique, can be installed on your own vest. The soul beast clan can also have a few vests. For example, the fish-fish fruit blue dragon form in One Piece can be given to the Sea Soul Beast vest. I hope that there will be a male version of Tushan Yaya's fox spirit beast in the Far North. In the middle, the protagonist uses his own character to fall in love with the original character. Anyway, whatever happens, I hope the characters and abilities will not be limited to those in Douluo. Okay, these are my personal thoughts.

The vests currently appearing include Xiu (the main vest), Su Ming (heir to the Hanhai Palace), the fifth prince (Tian Dou royal family), Dai Xuanyu (Prince Xing Luo), Ji Juechen (disciple of the Seven Treasures Glazed Sword Sword Douluo), Xiao Chen (disciple of the master, the future Golden Holy Dragon), Xiao Yan (the weakened version of Emperor Yan, a student of Tianhuo Academy) , Guardian Bird (Guardian of the Soul Palace), Rogue Rabbit (Visitor from Extraterrestrials), Morgans (King of Intelligence of the Pirate King, now responsible for the information dissemination of Douluo Continent), Blue Silver Queen (cannon fodder vest for Xiu to fabricate his origin) and Xu Sanshi (Seven Monsters 20,000 years later, now the young master of Xuanming Sect, studying at Canghui College).

The protagonist is really in trouble, as if he is an adult with a bunch of children. The protagonist is not an old hen, so why is he protecting them all the time? They should let other vests give them a hard blow. They live in a greenhouse all day long. Without pressure, they cannot become gods even with fairy grass. It's time for the chess pieces to be activated. There is no need to focus on the small fights at the soul level. It's time to overlook the layout of the entire continent.

Will Bo Qing appear? The founder of Gu's swordsmanship and the split soul of Netherworld felt very good to write. The sword split the five realms of Yaxianzun, and he was bound by love and blessed the common people. You can completely create two things here, Bo Qing and Ning Rongrong, childhood sweethearts and sweethearts. If you want to write about good people, you won't change. If you want to write about bad people, you'll end up cutting off the love thread with a wise sword. If you don't have a woman in your heart, you'll draw your sword and act like a god. Cut away the world of mortals and become a sword god. It is also possible to achieve dual god status. In the original work, Bo Qing is the clone that Ghost Soul cultivates most. The way of sword is also close to the way of killing. In the end, he can become the god of swords and then the god of killing, and prove the way through killing.

Dou Yi can be regarded as the era when Douluo Star becomes a god once every tens of thousands of years. It is a rare choice of gods in tens of thousands of years. It is a blowout in this era. The Tang family's third grandson, Bibi Dong's mother and daughter, and Oscar (the other five monsters all became gods because of Tang San's butterfly effect. Oscar can become a title without Tang San's influence. The God of Food does not choose him. In the next tens of thousands of years, no food-type soul master can surpass Oscar). The intervention of the protagonist only makes this era more glorious. These 500,000 words can be regarded as an introduction to several vests inserted in important places and forces. Comprehensive evaluation, T0 is Xiu (Super God King), T0.5 Is Rogue Rabbit, Po Shen, Xiao Yan, Ji Juechen and Dai Xuanyu (can create their own god or guarantee the bottom) Level 1 God, hopefully God King), T1 is Xue Xuan, Su Ming and Xiao Chen (definitely become gods), T2 is Xu Sanshi (extreme base or has hope of inheriting the divine throne), T3 is Bird Protector and Morgance (titled Douluo or has the talent to be titled). Among the indigenous characters, T0.5 Tang Chen (a genius who can create his own god, King Shura chases after him to give him the god), Tang San (the opportunity was taken away, but he is guaranteed to be a level 2 god) and Bibi Dong T1 (completed the god test on his own, and killed Tang San once with inferior equipment and divine power), Qiandaoliu, Bo Saixi, Oscar (suffered from the loss of martial arts, but if they are not food-based, Will not upgrade so slowly), Xiao Wu, Tang Hao and Qian Renxue are T2 (good talents, poor mentality, easy to be attacked), T3 Golden Generation of Wuhun Temple, Dai Mubai, Ma Hongjun and Ning Rongrong (suffered from Wuhun, talent alone is T2), Zhu Zhuqing is on the road (without fairy grass, this level, innate soul power is only level 7, it is difficult to practice Contra). Because no new gods have been born in Douluo Continent for tens of thousands of years, becoming a god at level 100 has become a legend. Unlike the soul beasts where there was a Silver Dragon King as an example, Tianmeng didn't know about the Silver Dragon King. It sensed that Tang San and the others had become gods, and then came up with the god-making plan. I think that instead of rambling on, it is better to create a big vest and let it become a god in Douluo Continent, and then let Morgans spread the news to the whole continent, and become a god under the witness of the mainland's top officials. This can inspire those powerful soul masters more than any genius blowout, and the small vest can also have more motivation to work hard. After all, the end does exist.

Tomatoes can be considered top quality, but this is the starting point

After dawdling through 500,000 words, I finally entered the golden age chapter. We are still in the Douyi era. The soul beast side has millions of years of accumulation and is at its peak. Not counting the shortcut divine soul method, the candidates who can break through just by practicing the demon clan skills based on their own accumulation include Di Tian, ​​the Deep Sea Demonic Whale King and his wife, Xie Yan, Xue Nu and Tian Meng. The Silver Dragon King has also become active due to the recent abnormality. It can be said that the soul beast only lacks the method of becoming a god. The protagonist can open the era of the soul beast becoming a god by giving it the method of becoming a god.

Nowadays, the mainstream is still the soul master system of the Tang Family Universe. The main armor cultivators are martial soul and Qi dual cultivators. Due to the restrictions of the divine world, the soul beasts have begun to major in spiritual soul. In the future, the data evolution of the digital world will be added.

It's pretty much the same as this routine. I have also read the previous author's book. In fact, I feel that the stall you set up is quite big. But there is a hammer on the left and a hammer on the right. These things are not integrated at all. Always draw the big picture. Advance very slowly. I feel that the author should make a big event and integrate all the plots of the clones in the early stage. For example, what secret realm is opened? The Immortal came to the world and the Sun and Moon Continent merged. It's not a pie with a hammer on the east and a hammer on the left. Introduce characters and so on. And the last book and the plot were too serious. What I'm looking at is the group portrait article. The plot is only an auxiliary, you can even do without the plot, completely breaking the plot. Then the shell of Douluo Continent is almost done. I saw that the author recently wrote about Contract Xiao Wu. It's really of no use, so what do you need that rabbit for? It's enough to give Tang San a cuckold. The protagonist already has the ability to make clones, so why not make one yourself? . Don't just follow the plot all the time. Boil-the-frog propulsion is no fun. Might as well open and close.

If you keep doing this, your subscription will be gone sooner or later. You have to say a sentence over and over again, and after you finish speaking, you have to write down some inner drama. You don't want to read it after you finish it. Don't you feel it's verbose after reading it? If you really can't guarantee the quality, just update it every week. Don't lick your face and want to have perfect attendance but don't have the ability. Post first and then revise every day. Sooner or later, you will be one-size-fits-all, and then repeat the vicious cycle of opening a vest and writing a new book. I have given you the monthly ticket, and I will support you with real money. I hope you will not end up dead like you did in the previous books, and don't turn your writing path into a roadside road.

If the previous book was too long-winded, you just don't know how to write this one. If you want to delay subscribing to others, who would be willing to delay subscribing?

It's a bit watery. The focus of this book should be the sublimation of civilization brought about by the collision of geniuses. There is no need to copy all the plots of the original work. Just save it if you can.

The idea is very good, but the writing is a bit long-winded. It goes back and forth in one sentence And when I have already written the vest, I quickly turn to the behind-the-scenes layout, watch various geniuses compete, show themselves in front of others, etc., And then change the world structure. There is no need to write in such detail about character upgrades. Things like willingness are already very buggy. The part about how to upgrade is no different from ordinary cheating fan fiction, and you are not the type of genius to upgrade. It is really speechless to write such a long original plot like "Sign Up for Shrek", and it is really torture to read those chapters. Once you click on the table of contents to jump to the plot, the continuity is gone and you have no desire to follow it.

This kind of writing is still written by Wang Gong Gong so well that other authors feel uncomfortable imitating it.

It's too watery, I keep saying the same thing over and over again, and there are few updates, so keep it up.

First of all, the author's approach is right. Behind the scenes, the inspiration is very good. The outline should be well written. If it is well written, it will definitely become popular. It is true that the writing style and rhythm are a bit flawed, and the writing is too naive. One sentence is told over and over again, the plot tension is insufficient, and the pace is a bit slow. Mainly because I am at Qidian. I probably won't read these in other places, such as 🍅 and so on. But at Qidian, the writing style does need to be improved. But the shortcomings do not hide the good points. Keep at it, make progress slowly, and read more other interesting articles that are slightly better, and you will always get better 😁

There is a turmoil behind the scenes, but it is of no use to collect the eggs of Xiao Wu, the contracted spirit beast, and the plot is scattered, there are too many drawings, and the world view is laid out in a big way from the beginning. In addition, the protagonist is an outsider with inherited memories. From God's perspective, readers know that they should rely on the original character's willpower, but in actual reading, they will feel that this person is very ignorant, and he seems to want to contract Xiao Wu, and constantly throws settings at her. Bait, lick her face. If Xiao Wu really doesn't agree, then she can only slap her to death or directly enslave her, but because of God's perspective, this may not happen at all. The plot is very strange, and many of the Douluo fanfics I have read in the past relied on this method to expose their identity and intimidate Xiao Wu, who is like a rabbit, into the harem. I hope there will be no so-called love plot 😠

Is there anyone like me who comes here for the Three Soul Gods?

A brief description of the forces in Douluo Continent: ①Human forces: One Hall (Martial Soul Hall). One Island (Poseidon Island). Two Kingdoms (Xingluo Empire and Tiandou Empire). Seven sects (the upper three sects: Haotian Sect, Blue Lightning Tyrant Dragon Sect, Qibao Glazed Sect; the lower four sects: Elephant Armor, Divine Wind, Red Fire, and Tianshui). Hidden world sects (Xingguan Sect of Tianxing Peak in Star Luo Empire, Peacock Forest of Five Color Valley in Tiandou Empire, Bubu Lu on Jiuxin Begonia Yaowang Mountain,...). ② Alien forces: Star Forest (Silver Dragon King Gu Yuena, Golden-Eyed Black Dragon King Ditian, Emerald Swan Brigitte, Demon-Eyed Demon Tree Ten Thousand Demon King, Dark-Gold Terrorclaw Bear Lord, Three-Headed Red Demon Mastiff Red King, Hell Demon Dragon King Zi Ji) The Far North (Ice Snow Queen Snow Emperor, Ice Jade Emperor Scorpion Ice Emperor, Titan Snow Demon King Artai, Ice Bear King Xiaobai) Douluo Sea (Deep Sea Demon Whale King and Deep Sea Demon Whale Queen, Ice Sea Mermaid)

In one sentence, I say it repeatedly, flood

Damn it, you've been doing this shit for a few days now. I'll close the subscription and let it gather dust on my bookshelf.

The subject matter is good, but with such a long-winded narrative style, will anyone really follow it?

So where is the new book? I can't find the name.

Change it quickly 😡

Quick update🙂