Mortal: Starting from the Demonic Young Master

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The cheater is also a loser. He doesn't have the temperament of the protagonist at all. He still feels like a poor loser before time travel. He doesn't even want the Golden Thunder Bamboo when it comes to his door. He can't use it, and he can't let such a powerful weapon wander around. There is definitely a pitfall!

Mrs. Wen is the number one cauldron in Luan Xinghai. He must have a special constitution. Incredibly delicious. Must taste. Just give Liudao a hat. Mrs. Wen might even be a virgin. It is the cauldron prepared by the Six Paths to break through to become a god. It's just that people's calculations are not as good as God's calculations. In the original work, the two saints of the Six Paths Nachi will self-destruct and drag him on his way. Even if he didn't die. His vitality was also severely damaged. I had no choice but to seize Wan Tianming's body. But he immediately returned to the Yuan Dynasty. Mrs. Wen Yuanying was also imprisoned by him. So it is very likely that he took advantage of Mrs. Wen. This is how to recover so quickly. So whether it is to relieve qi. Or improve your cultivation. Mrs. Wen's Yuan Yin should be obtained by the protagonist. It doesn't matter if you're not a virgin. We have to let the Six Paths suffer this humiliation🪖

The protagonist is like a money-splitting boy who has no business brains at all. He has a lot of resources, but he has to help the Miaoyin Sect kill people in order to exchange a large amount of spiritual stones. Miaoyinmen is not a big chamber of commerce. There are not only tens of thousands but also thousands of people who can replace Miaoyinmen. The protagonist can solve the problem by just controlling a few, and the protagonist is still working hard. Don't say that the Miaoyin Sect will not betray, the Miaoyin Sect was almost wiped out by traitors, which shows that the sect leader's management ability is average, and there are countless traitors below. The protagonist thought that by telling the Miaoyin Sect's leader, his identity would not be exposed, but in fact, he may be exposed at any time.

I really don't understand why many readers like to embarrass Han Li. Don't accept the protagonist, so what's wrong with giving Han Li women and resources? He's going to embarrass Han Li all day long. This is a fan fiction, so what's Han Li reading if you don't make good friends with him? The author writes some friendships, but objects to each one. The author doesn't ask you to lick it, just skip the relevant chapters if you don't like it. I really find it incomprehensible.

The protagonist feels like a bad guy. I can't think of a way to knock something out of the model worker. Free message. I even had to offer him something in exchange for it. It is only reasonable to give money to model workers. And the more you treat model workers without asking for anything in return. The more you please him. Instead, he thinks you have ulterior motives. You blackmail him hard with the information and items he just needs. Although he will feel pain. Will appear annoyed. But he will be more willing to deal with you. I don't think you are coveting him. He has ulterior motives for him. Although the writing in this book is okay. But I hope the author will stop being so licky in the future. Xutian Palace is not mentioned here. Can a model worker make a huge profit from just that piece of Thunder Bamboo? As long as the model workers can produce it. He will definitely change

Author, I have a lot of doubts. Is there something wrong with your mentality? Your protagonist is a demonic monk, and Han Li has the Golden Thunder Bamboo, so isn't your protagonist being suppressed? Doesn't this mean that you are leaving your wealth and life to Han Li? Isn't it just a matter of thought how others treat him? The protagonist takes many of Han Li's things, especially things that are very restrained for your protagonist. Have you considered Han Li and your protagonist? Han Li doesn't have many things. He can take his time. Your behavior is even more excessive than licking. If you want to write about good friendship, why not write about Zhang Tie and Li Feiyu? It is difficult to write about the friendship between opposite characters. There are only two or three books that have achieved success. If your characters are opposites, it will be inconsistent when you write them. This is the impression brought by the original novel and animation. It is difficult for you, a young author, to change.

If the quality is not as good as the real little green bottle, then compare the quantity and make ten or hundreds of copies. What kind of little green bottle? One roadside 🤣

Author. Don't treat your woman like a vase. Especially resources. How could you give them so many cultivation resources at once? Don't be afraid of favors and enemies. You can protect them. Let them learn to make talismans. Weapon refining and other arts. Earn practice resources. It can also help you collect elixirs and spiritual materials and sell resources. How nice that is. Plus your reward. As long as they don't have inferior qualifications. The pace of practice is not slow. You can also get exercise. If they only rely on you to feed them. Can't get exercise. This inner demon calamity of forming a baby is a big hurdle. Not to mention the inner demon tribulation after becoming a god. If your character is not strong. It's very difficult🔨🔨

Novels about cultivating immortals have their advantages, but they are extremely poisonous to me. Does the Golden Thunder Bamboo obviously have the opportunity to monopolize it? Doesn't a zerg with such great potential like the Gold-Eating Insect try to blackmail Han Li? The same goes for the Dayan Jue, and it doesn't pursue such a heaven-defying technique? It is obvious that there can be mutual benefit with the Miaoyin Sect, but you have to work for nothing to help kill people. You are Party A

The author writes well, and the writing and sentences are smooth. Don't listen to those idiots who talk about licking Han Li or talking about the green-haired turtle protagonist. In fact, this is very good. If you follow this trend and put it on the shelf, you will definitely order it.

You have already defected, so you are no longer considered the young master.

Overall it's pretty good, but there are a lot of things that are hard to figure out. The skills Wen Tianren learned are top-notch magic skills that are famous in the Luan Xinghai. Level 6 True Demonic Skill As long as the Level 6 True Demonic Bow is used, anyone with a bit of swordsmanship or some sect background can see it. The protagonist is a disciple of He Zongmen. What's the result? Level 6 Demon Suppressing Bow 5 demons have appeared. First, he fought with the red fire old monster in front of Ji Yin. After fighting for a long time, he destroyed Ji Yin's clone and also rescued Ji Yin's junior brother. The funny result is that Ji Yin, including his junior brother, did not recognize that this was a level 6 true magic skill. Brainless and careless, he has no other skills to hide his identity in battle, and he is still staying in the Chaotic Star Sea. This is asking for death Level 6 True Demon Skill is famous, and all the monks with some discernment know it. Once the identity is revealed, it will be over. Don't even think about staying in Chaos Xinghai. My own problems are only related to resources. What should I say, come on, your monthly ticket is indeed a bit low. The low price is not unreasonable. The monthly tickets for Crossing Xiaojue next door have been stable at 2,100 per month and are still growing. The quality is really high. And its biggest advantage is to listen to the comments and make up for the shortcomings and settings. Including the next door soul wearer Wen Tianren also has a monthly ticket of 300. Write more carefully! I have also said that once your identity is exposed, your master will definitely try his best to capture you first. Wen Tianren's body is very important to his future achievement of becoming a god. He will unite all Yuanying to capture you at any cost. There is no place for you in the chaotic star sea, except Guizai Xingguan. Just suggestions, not mandatory instructions

That's it! 😅

Can you take in Mrs. Wen too? I want to see the protagonist take in Mrs. Wen 😏

Sword Qingyu

Zi Ling, the most beautiful woman in the Chaotic Star Sea

Can't you change it to continuing to use the Holy Wool of the Six Paths on the Holy Demon Island?

The Wen family seems to be a large clan of immortal cultivators in Chaos Xinghai. Wen Qing and Liu Dao both came from this family. Besides. In fact, it is better for the protagonist to remove the restrictions and run away when the protagonist is in the later stage of pill formation. Because you can eat six courses this way. Use six channels. There are also people under his command. Anyway, the Six Paths will not take action before the baby is born. He will only place restrictions to prevent you from getting out of control. After all, the external incarnation of the unborn child is to him. Not even tasteless. At least it has to be at the beginning of the Yuan Dynasty. After all, the figure is in the hands of Empress Yuan. Not to Nascent Soul. It might as well be that he just hit it casually. Even the Qingyang Old Demon's Green Fire Thunder was inferior. How could he like it? And he seems to need six Nascent Soul stage figures to serve as the carrier of the Six Ultimate Demon. It's also a figure with a special physique 🙂

Let's not talk about whether Han Li is carrying it with him or not. You don't have to worry about it being noticed if you take away the blood jade spider silk. I have an idea about replicating vials. Why do we need replicas? Look at Journey to the West. Our ancestors have long known to use genuine ones. Give the copied one to Han Li, why not get the original one yourself? Conservative descendants. As for whether they are considered conservative colleagues, who knows, I don't think so. Our ancestors dared to fight against the world and write metaphors, but now those who write novels dare not steal a bottle. ——The above represents my personal opinion. Don't ask where the flying flowers will go. It will be cold if they stay, and they will be hurt if they fall. Injured in the whereabouts.

Why don't you hide in the open sea? While hunting monsters, you can also find Biling Island. In addition to the best mineral veins in Biling Island. There is also pure spiritual energy that has been sealed for tens of thousands of years. If someone with good talent can practice using the spirit-binding formation inside. Not worse than taking drugs. And there should be multiple spiritual eye objects inside. Even the tree of spiritual eyes. Not to mention that you can also hold high-grade spiritual stones to assist in your practice. A monk below Nascent Soul. As long as it's not a false spiritual root. Better than taking drugs. Because the spiritual energy concentration is high. The bottleneck is also small🔨🔨🔨

Is the writing okay? Why did it suddenly cut off just like that Zi Lun? Say nothing?

Very well written! Why did I just cut 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭, I'm still waiting for more updates! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Read 10 chapters. Alas, the protagonist has been busy copying and refining weapons. I didn't see any practice. Polish your own cultivation. Feel the charm of Taoism. Hone your character. It's much like a vendor selling something without knowing what he is selling. I cannot appreciate the artistic conception of cultivating immortality and cultivating truth in this work. Very common and mundane.

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Thanks to the author, I got 509 points for my new book investment. Although I couldn't finish writing this book, I still want to thank the author.

Jiangjiang is coming, oooh~

I watched a video today, saying that the inner demon is Pin Xixi's chop with a knife 😜

6666 It's okay to send the outline.

It probably won't be on the shelves and the editor won't sign it. Just the eunuch. You just copied the entire plot of the anime, and if the editor can give it to you, it's crazy. You're really treating the starting point like a cash machine.