Fate: the Martial Arts Master Is in Fuyuki

Not bad, but the update is a bit slow

It's a really good Xingyue fanfic, and it's not a brainless cheat. The battle descriptions are really thoughtful, but the updates are really slow. I watched it for a month and finished it in one go.

Come on, I'm optimistic about you, but the second world should be as close to the Xingyue world view as possible. The heroine should be Medea. The main thing is that the protagonist's ability must be improved as soon as possible, otherwise it will not be able to keep up with each event later.

The previous writing is really good, and the angle of entry is also good. If the choice of the material is not too unpopular, even if it is just an infinite flow skin, the heat will not be so low But about chapter 70, it starts from the time when Shinji kidnaps Sakura. The first point Sakura's use of command spells is too broad, and it is impossible to achieve it. The binding force If he is not strong, Rider will not just watch Shinji holding a knife and gesticulating on Sakura's neck Second point Emiya Shirou will not agree to Shinji's request to let Saber kill the protagonist, because he will never regard other people's lives as bets Third point Saber's magic power is A, if you want to use a command spell, just It is impossible to control her in a short period of time. She can hold on for several hours without any problem. This can be reflected in both animation and games And during this time, Caster can use the Noble Phantasm to convert Saber into a servant. Even if Assassin comes, it will still be 3 vs. 2 Servants. If you are afraid of the magic power consumption problem, solve the problem after Shen Er There is plenty of time to think about it Fourth point The author wants to express the changes in the relationship between several people through some details. He specifically said in the narration that Emiya Shirou and Tohsaka Rin call each other by their first names, but in fact they call each other by their last names instead of their first names Another point is that Tohsaka Rin basically calls people by their first names. When he is serious or teasing, it will change. Being able to pronounce her last name and add honorifics is also part of her character There are also some other questions. Why can Shirou Emiya climb the stairs as fast as Tohsaka Rin when he jumps from the building? Saber has no reason to release the Noble Phantasm... In general, this plot is completely written to write about several servants collectively releasing the Noble Phantasm, and finally created it The atmosphere is not "big" but "chaotic", completely ignoring the plot development and character image The author also said in a single chapter that "the characters are like real people, and the plot development is not under their control", but judging from this plot, they are still the author's puppets, but I think this is a good thing. If you can't control the characters, then let them Written by AI Of course, I am definitely not just mocking you when I write so much. There are too few people who write this at Qidian This book has good potential, the overall writing is smooth, and it does not have the greasy feeling of condescendingly commenting on the original characters that often appears in fan works. It can be regarded as a good source of food in fan works Non-fundamentalists can read it Everyone has their own understanding of this book and fan works. Fate's worldview is quite complex. Some small problems are normal, so I don't recommend it to fundamentalists. Finally, I hope that the author will not affect his mentality because of my words. At worst, I just pretend that I haven't seen it. I hope to continue writing. I also hope that this plot can be changed or transitioned to the next section as soon as possible.

Come on author, this book is really well written and the author has the potential to become a great writer

The commemorative album finally arrived. The quality is so high. I like it.

The linkage between Bengtie and Fate is finally coming, and this linkage is one of the reasons that inspired me to write this book.

Recently I changed some content and sorted out the plot by the way I'm really a bit slow in coding, I hope you'll forgive me

It's rare to see the same article as Xingyue, and it's pretty well written.

The Type Moon fanfic is pretty good, do you have any recommendations? I hope the author can write it faster

Has the rare fsn novel author ever played the original game?

It's great that production has increased recently 🤭