This Brave Team Is Extremely Abstract

I love this team so much. They insult each other and hold each other back. We are like real enemies.

Conclusion: Average, the plot is dragging When I read the introduction, I was very excited, especially the four-person abstract team from another world. This keyword reminded me of offering blessings for a beautiful world But actually I felt very disappointed after reading it. The pace of this kind of abstract comedy is very important, it must be fast. The first chapter should have a big explosion to show the extraordinaryness of the protagonist (for example, Su Qing's protagonist stayed up late and was scared to death by a tractor, met a goddess and then dragged her into the water) Secondly, abstract comedy needs someone to support it. At the beginning, the protagonist is summoned by the Kingdom Mage as a brave man, and it is found that the protagonist's talent is very weak. At this time, it is good to combine the introduction with the protagonist's eloquence. The rational plot should be that the mage dislikes the protagonist, and then the protagonist uses his eloquence to deceive the mage. The mage trusts the protagonist, and then gives a task that the protagonist cannot complete. The protagonist shouts that it is over But in fact, it is the mage who takes the initiative to comfort the protagonist. At this time, it is the protagonist who insists that it is okay. The program has no effect at all And then the teammates joining the plot are too bad and too slow. In abstract funny articles, either the protagonist cheats his teammates, or his teammates cheat the protagonist. At the same time, this is still on the voluntary basis of the protagonist/teammates But the plot of this book is too slow. The Kingdom Master gives the protagonist recruitment applications for three teammates, and then the protagonist meets one by one. After meeting, they have to talk the next day There is another poisonous point at this time. The protagonist does not believe in gods where there are gods. It stands to reason that when teammates meet, they create conflicts to create laughter. Um? If you, the author, say that this is the point of laughter you want, then I will really be convinced.

Demon King: How can I be attacked by these living fathers?

Nina's behavior of stealing supplies from friendly forces on the front line is very unpleasant. Although she maintains her greedy character, it is too despicable in terms of perception.

The protagonist's hang-up is actually his abstract mental state, right?

Atheism is not the reason why the protagonist is mentally retarded.

At present, it seems that the protagonist Goldfinger's abilities include: super high magic talent, and automatically refreshes back to an 18-year-old physical state at 24 o'clock

I really can't stand it anymore. Abstraction doesn't mean lunacy. Those oral habits are so annoying to watch. Isn't it cerebellar atrophy in the second grade?

The abilities shown by the protagonist 1. The state of being 18 years old forever, that is, the inner and outer effects will be refreshed in time and the best state after a certain period of time 2. The unique affinity for magic, that is, ignoring the influence of command elements, and having a strong perception of elements 3. Will appear harmless in the impression of others

The plot is too bad. It should be okay to change it to a manga and anime. The main characters seem to be very capable, but after going back and forth a few times in the first level, I lost the treasure and I still haven't figured out what the problem is, and then I finished the level in the next second? The characters are quite individual, but when put together, I don't see any passion and bonding. I just feel that the progress of the mission has been negative for half a day. After reading dozens of chapters, I have no desire to continue reading, and the specific abilities of the protagonist group are not clear. What moves are there?

Seeing the black dragon living in Bengbu, the protagonist originally felt like a bratty kid. Isn't the author just a teenage brat acting as a high character?

This golden finger is so featureless that it makes people feel nothing at first glance.

"The Bizarre Adventure of the Abstract Happy Heroes Team to Defeat the Demon King"

What an excellent matching mechanism! Praise the goddess!

When did the team's relationship heat up?

The biggest problem is that there seems to be no excitement, no sense of expectation, and no excitement at all.

Sure enough, it was a eunuch. I read every update in the beginning, but the more I read, the less interesting it became and I stopped subscribing. The author's writing has the flavor of a daily light novel. However, there are people reading this style, but not many. Of course, this is secondary, and the more important thing is that this book is not interesting. The protagonist is a time traveler, so everyone is automatically brought into the role of the protagonist. Not to mention that the protagonist is very small. He is only 18 years old, so I don't feel good about it. But what's even more fucked up is that the protagonist is suppressed by the supporting characters. The protagonist of the Brave Squad is suppressed by his team members, and there is no sense of satisfaction at all. Even in Su Qing's drama, Kazuma is the captain in most cases and the teammates will not hate the captain. Although the three teammates are cheating, all three teammates have a good impression of Kazuma. In this novel, the three teammates seem to be wholesale. All three teammates have no trust in others and believe that they have to rely on themselves to pass the level. This also brings about another mistake, that is, the protagonist has too few scenes. The author has divided more than half of the protagonist's scenes into three teammates. There are people who want to see the teammates, but most people bring in the protagonist, and they also want to see the protagonist turn the tide. Alas, but the solution has always been to use gags and coincidences. I can only say that this novel is not suitable for online writing. The writing method suitable for online writing must first and foremost make readers happy.

Thick and firm steaks, the team members are all a happy family, the happy brave mage and his three skill pendants. First of all, there is the scroll business lady of the super large backpack mods. The extra points are all in business. The backpack is full of spell scrolls filled with gold coins. The second one is our blood-locking and non-resistance guard, which is like a plot character with unlimited blood lock, but has no stun resistance. It can be used as a human shield and can use reaction actions when stun. The third place is a chaotic evil rogue beautiful girl, a sub-professional bard. She has a strong background but can only paddle and sing to encourage teammates on the battlefield. She is proficient in dusting miners and a full-level bucket number in the misery item. Our protagonist Li Ang is even more so. He has the ability to restore his body to an 18-year-old at 0:00 every day: it clears all negative effects and does not degrade any traces of training. It just restores the state to the peak growth stage (it is suspected that it can be activated after death to reverse the death state). The brave can learn any magic and is immune to the backlash of spell casting. Magic chanting can move without interruption and can cast spells in multiple threads. After the second skill magic book, you can now control the magic elements of the world and see the magic traces. It is suspected that there are hidden auxiliary magic skills.

An extremely good novel, even original, with the potential to be adapted into an animated comic

I have been reading it to the latest and voted for it monthly, but I have to say that this trial looks really boring. What I want to watch is a pleasant and nonsensical adventure, not this boring plot. There is no plot and no interest.

Brothers and sisters, hold it in until you die, don't listen to them, I will order other books to earn a monthly fee to support you, PS. They are all ordered

Well written, this must be a book adapted from a manga, it looks like an old anime

Hahahaha, I finished reading it in one go. Although there are many plots that are quite outrageous, such as where the black dragon suddenly goes crazy, which is a bit abstract, the plot does have something in terms of overall life.

13 Days ago, gone? ………………

Rated as "general online article"

By the way, looking at the current situation, the author wants to keep writing, so why don't you send some Easter egg stamps to earn some monthly votes?

Open a harem, write more emotional dramas, and have more sex

This is the most plain-spirited novel I have ever read. I hope the author can maintain this plain-spirited feel. Tragedies are easy to write, but comedies are hard to find.