Cicada Fairy!

It's a bit of a template, and the protagonist didn't pay the money first when he took the boat. He used the fish sent by Yasha to pay off the debt. What if there was no Yasha? Another thing I watched was that the protagonist had a deep friendship with the fisherman and was kind to the fisherman. When Bai Li asked the protagonist for advice and gave him fish, the protagonist felt as if he was being greatly favored. The essence was an exchange of interests. If the protagonist was really an immortal, then the protagonist would still be at a loss. There is also a protagonist who doesn't know how to pretend to understand, but is obviously a mere mortal and insists on pretending. Moreover, when the protagonist sees the snake man, he immediately thinks that he is a descendant of Nuwa, and he doesn't even act, and he is really a descendant of Nuwa.

Please change the name. I can't figure out who invented the idea of ​​adding an exclamation mark after the title of a book. It's really annoying.

Shi, his writing is so bad, he still needs to write about immortality.

The author probably doesn't read the comments. The Nuwa in Chapter 5 was embarrassed by a bunch of book friends and gave him advice, but the author didn't change it.

I've seen something similar, but it seems that the first one can only be kept for one day.

The writing style needs to be improved. This kind of subject matter is typically similar to Lan Ke Qiyuan, which has to have a bit of fairy spirit. The part where I was visiting my friend's wife was really bad. I always called people slanderous, but how many people could be like that? The main character was too vulgar.

The setting is good, but it doesn't create the feeling of being isolated from the world.

Author, could you carefully consider your sentences when writing? There were a lot of bad sentences, I kind of deliberately ignored them, but in the end I still encountered some that were more difficult to read.

Monkey Fairy! Pig Fairy Sheep Fairy Dog Fairy Chicken Fairy Rabbit Fairy

It made my skin crawl.

The reincarnation of a true immortal begins as a mortal and ascends in a hundred days!

The more you sew, the more rubbish you get. If you can't sew it, don't sew it.

Reminds me of Spring and Autumn Cicada. This book is well written. I hope it will be updated more often.

It's a bit like the character template of historical or mythological missions. Isn't it Yue Fei who sends six imperial edicts in succession, as well as Nuwa, and the blue bird beside him. A hodgepodge?

It can be seen that the author has worked very hard and needs more experience. I suggest writing more underlying narratives.

Doesn't the author find it awkward for someone who claims to be a walking practitioner?

No updates for a week, what's going on?

Is that Immortal Candle your new book?

But I still want to say that the author's book is actually a good one The story line is not confusing from now on, and the story is very clear In the first few chapters, it is said that the protagonist lacks a little bit of humanity, so the results of his seeing things are direct. He will not think about other people's reasons and concerns, and will not refute others or forcefully change other people's wishes. Like a self-aware Tiandao, as the name says, he is a real immortal, Cicada Immortal! If we say that ordinary people are 5 points rational and 5 points emotional! Then the protagonist has at least 7 to 9 points of sanity, and the remaining 1 point is personal feelings! Compared with humans, they are more like immortals. Immortals from heaven are not immortals on earth. The author felt it was awkward because it was too condescending, and the content was about interesting things that happened in the mortal world, which made it feel a bit disconnected.

It doesn't matter if you're writing about immortality. The settings are all the same. They all appear for a period of time over many years. The only difference is that the other one can only appear for one day at the beginning. After practicing, the time becomes longer. It's all about finding a way to stay in the human world. The plot routine of the end of the story is also familiar. Don't think it's a studio novel.