This Game Is Too Free

The writing is very connected. It is obviously set in the Western Free City, but almost all of it is about things in the East, and I feel a little dizzy when I read one thing after another.

Why does Dr. Zhang's wife wear a cheongsam in such a chaotic place?

Is the title of your novel related to the content of your novel? Also, are you writing about Cthulhu or the Fourth Scourge? Western background and Eastern plot. Don't you feel uncomfortable?

What is so baffling about chapters 45-46?

It looks fine from the front, but it's getting weirder and weirder from the back.

The author has practiced hard in this book and will come back to support me in the next book.

This player is not a player at all.

Dear author, hello, is that one without a heroine? Request reply

The writing was messed up, and the protagonist began to have no sense of existence.

I think among the address books with the same theme and type, yours is the most beautiful in form, at least it's not a black slave book!

The writing is good, but there are a lot of jokes. It's better to leave it alone.

Introduction: The protagonist's English name is suggested to be changed to lee ang. Have you forgotten everything you learned in English class?

Um, I feel like I'm trying to make up the word count lately. There's no need to detail the protagonist's dream. After a few days, I just skipped through the plot 😵

The author's writing is quite perverted, and there are a lot of bits of poison in it. The plot is quite good, unique and innovative.

The main body of the Fourth Disaster is the players. It is a group portrait article. Basically, all the ink is describing Li Ang.

The Tokyo Behind the Scenes Player is also written by you, right? It's so similar. I see that the comments have almost the same complaints 🙂

Is this the National Day holiday or is it a eunuch?