At the Beginning, He Just Wanted to Run Away with a Bucket, but Was Forced to Save Manchester United.

Suggestions: cut open the book: After my hometown changed to Changzhou, I led Changzhou to win the championship, and the topic was full of topics

I skipped too much and watched it, the pace was very slow. Goldfinger is a mobile phone that can see the future, so when other people watch the video of the protagonist watching the future, is it a video of a young lady? The progress of the game is too slow. There is no problem in writing the rhythm of the game. I don't think it's good to have too many chapters between games.

Write more details about the club such as the management, uniform, medical team, salary structure, financial status, etc. It is easy to get tired just writing about the game. After all, I am the manager, not the coach, and the authority is different.

I really like the subject matter, but I don't know how the writing went. I'll comment after reading it.

It's okay to read what I wrote before. I'll talk about it later after reading it.

Come on brother

The writing is okay, but the season is too close. Come on.

😰Does the author have any misunderstanding about the Community Shield? Which team can win the Community Shield?

The pace is too slow. The emotional line has stopped. And the timeline of this kind of story is too close. Overall, the writing is okay, but there is clearly something wrong with the underlying structure of the book. It is recommended to re-open a book

Overall it's pretty good, but there are a lot of small inconsistencies that made me very confused. The main problem is that the characters of the protagonist and heroine are not done well. The protagonist's pre-game arrangements and midfield adjustments are very clear, but the author always emphasizes that he does not understand on-the-spot command, becomes confused when encountering problems, and always swings back and forth between understanding the ball and not understanding the ball. It's said that the protagonist wants to be a gangster, and he seems to be very enterprising. The female character feels very redundant, and her existence complicates the plot, or in other words, she makes the overall pleasure less enjoyable. There is no sexual tension between the two people, and the heroine's existence is a bit inexplicable. The writing of the competition is okay.

What are you writing about? Don't be so obscene, okay, what about the theme.

The total reading time for chapters 170-174 only takes 10 seconds. How long did the author take to write?