By Practicing Taoism and Cultivating Immortality, I Can Seek Good Fortune and Avoid Misfortune

This kind of theme is about seeking good luck and avoiding disaster. Only one of several options can be selected. I don't know why I list several options. It is just a waste of words. This kind of theme always looks awkward. Unless the author can balance the results of each option, otherwise it is a choice, but in fact it is a designation.

It's too slow, almost three hundred chapters are still in the early stages of Qi training. The golden elixir has to be worth about two thousand chapters. Updates are slow.

How many days have you been writing for an alchemy competition and you still haven't finished writing it? What are you doing? It's a waste of my points, but I still keep subscribing.

Are those opportunities of yours given to dogs? Why don't you write about them if you still have so many opportunities?

It's even more mortal than the mortal stream. At this speed, can I get a golden elixir in 500 chapters? Not to mention that the writing is not exciting and the plot is mediocre. How can the results be improved?

Have you ever practiced immortality? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted🙂🙂😁

What I wrote in the front is okay, but the rest is just water for the sake of water. There are more than 200 pictures, and it is still in the early stage of Qi Refining. What you wrote has so many resources, and it is completely useless. When reading traditional immortality novels, I would usually give up if I haven't established a foundation after 100 stories. I tolerate your peculiarity, but after more than 200 stories, you are still in the early stage of Qi training. With so many opportunities, you can become an immortal after eating it. Later on, I completely deviated from the topic. Did I forget what I was writing? Summary: It's just a waste of money later.

The writing is not concise enough and there are too many unnecessary explanations.

Not like Gou Daoliu at all, like ordinary people

It started out well, but then it became more and more like a monster-killing and upgrading flow! Moreover, this upgrade is too slow and the pressure is too harsh!

It's so verbose, I have to explain everything again

The protagonist's breakthrough is really slow. In addition, the beautiful commander is given the opportunity to break through. Other beautiful commanders have already achieved great breakthroughs. The protagonist, a low-level soldier, is still stuck in a realm and cannot break through. I don't know when he will catch up with the beautiful commander. It turns out that this is just a trick, excuse me.

Is the protagonist a little old man? After ten chapters, author, just count how many times the protagonist sighed, endlessly. The content is good, but the details should also be paid attention to.

But there are too many topics about this topic recently, and I don't know if you can continue to write about it in the future. The more people writing, the more competition there is. Watching too much will cause visual fatigue. Maybe some people don't like to watch this type of stuff. But I think this genre is okay, because I haven't read many books. I read novels now in the new book list. I can't say there are many in the same genre as you. I have read at least 6 or 8 books. There may be more that haven't made the list yet or I haven't seen them. Come on!

The author is lazy. A middle-grade magic weapon covers everything from fighting, practicing alchemy, and cultivating. If it is so powerful, it shouldn't be called a middle-grade magic weapon. Even if it breaks the sky, it is still a middle-grade magic weapon.

Using so much pen and ink to describe an enemy has already made me think of the plot behind it.

The fifth-grade elder absorbs some spiritual power, and the fourth-grade elder recruits disciples. The gap is too big.

The male protagonist has trained like a dog. I don't remember the time when he recruits disciples in each round. Anyway, the cultivation level of the newcomers in the next round surpassed the male protagonist. The male protagonist's first qi in the early stage of Qi refining was also the first qi when the new guy met. After the male protagonist gave him a chance, The newcomer becomes the second Qi. It took about 5 years for the male protagonist to reach the second Qi. During this period, the male protagonist continued to have various opportunities. It gave people the feeling that the opportunities were useless. The male protagonist also did not show how high his combat power was. It felt like this golden finger could not even build a foundation. Not comparable to this, this newcomer seems to be the legitimate son of the Foundation Building Family Summary: You can read it without thinking. This book also expands the realm of immortal cultivation, raises the standards to a very high level, and is very good at refining Qi. For example, auxiliary means: in the early stage of Qi refining, the male protagonist can directly promote the seeds in the soil, and then turn them into big cakes. Combat power: move mountains and fill seas Building foundations can open up blessed lands, like this, they are all the earthly immortals in some novels.

This kind of novel about chance seems to be quite boring, calm and without any sense of expectation. Everyone knows that you must choose the best one with the least risk. Even the route is arranged, so it is not interesting. If you add a setting, one progress will be accumulated every time the opportunity is measured, and 9 progresses will face a crisis. Then the upper resources and the lower resources are calculated separately. The progress of an upper opportunity is extra +1, and the progress of a lower opportunity is -1. Every time you take 9 upper resources, you will definitely fall into a deadlock. If you take 9 lower resources, you will definitely get a chance to change your life. This is more reasonable.

Why do I feel like I've been stuck in the past dozen or so chapters? What about the plot? Do you really want to gain enlightenment in the novel?

In front of the golden elixir and foundation building, you want to repair the magic weapon and speed up your practice like crazy. How can you still be so stubborn? Nonsense, how can the magic weapon not be discovered?

A house that must have sex, and a baby is born before the middle stage of Qi training

With the amount of updates you make, I'm worried about being a eunuch.

Mortal: Start from the game store

I just read Chapter 2. It is set to collect Qi and refine Qi to build the foundation. When building the foundation, you need to open up a small world and create a blessed land.

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