1979 Entertainment: Starting from the King of the Daughter Kingdom

I hope it will be a single heroine. I jumped to see the part where the protagonist writes a story to save Gong Xue from being swept up in the scandal. The protagonist and Zhu Lin are already married, and still hope to treat the king well. Adding to my personal selfishness, I think Gong Xue looks a little bitter, so I don't like it very much. Of course, Gong Xue's beauty is undeniable, but everyone is attracted to each other.

This should be regarded as the most rebirth story that never forgets its origins. Others who started from xx ended up wishing to escape from their "original family" and work hard to climb up. Another biggest advantage is that it describes a family, people at the station, and all kinds of ordinary people encountered. Each one is flesh and blood, making it seem like you are really immersed in it. It doesn't feel out of place, especially the kid named Jin Jianjun you meet at the beginning. He is very good at using small characters in reality to reflect the changes of the social era. You must know that the writers of other eras wish that "there are great scholars in talking and laughing, and there are no white people in communication". They wish that everyone they meet is a famous big shot surrounding him, and ignores the common people at the bottom who built the past society that we really yearn for. And these stories are not abrupt, but have become the source of material for the protagonist's copy, which explains the source of inspiration very well (of course, the protagonist copied some works that are not very famous. This is a matter of opinion. I think it is good or bad. Others are bad and it is not bad to be fresh occasionally). 🙂🙂🙂

Obviously the heroine is Zhu Lin, but in the end it's Gong Xue every day these days. Why, after eight years, I still want more heroines. This emotional line of wanting and wanting is a bit annoying!

I have been reading the latest chapter, and it feels pretty good. It is the same as the protagonist Lin Weimin's, at least it is still at the fairy grass level.

I have read a lot of chronicle novels. If there are no character cards, Zhu Lin and Gong Xue can just use their original names. For example, the 1979 Golden Age and the Daughter Kingdom King at the beginning use the original names without character cards. Nowadays, the flow of chronicle novels is very good. I think the author's writing style is better than that of the Daughter Kingdom King. If the love line is Zhu Lin and Gong Xue, it can be used as a reference from 1983. The title of the book also needs to be changed. Maybe the heroine Gong Xue is very popular at the beginning and attracts a lot of traffic. But if you only write one and it's ambiguous, many readers probably won't buy it. Even if it's in vain, some people will criticize it under each chapter. I also hope that the author can handle the emotional line well. I read it well and it's not poisonous. I will subscribe if it is released. And I would like to suggest that the author should be more decisive if he wants to have Gong Xue and Zhu Lin in both roles, and be more decisive with the single female protagonist.

I've been watching both lately. I really like Zhu Lin's emotional line. But every time I see Gong Xue as the male protagonist, it's like he's a different person. It's like reading with a frown, which is very awkward. I really like what the author writes. It would be better if I could have some sense of boundary with Gong Xue 🙂

The angle of entry is relatively unique, unlike many period articles that are copied casually. This book is based on the protagonist's occupation of working on the railway. The copied articles are basically related to the railway, so it is much more credible. It's just that the previous plot with Little Fatty Jin was a bit nonsensical.

If you write about Zhu Lin well, don't write about Gong Xue. Nowadays, everyone in this society is longing for a beautiful marriage. It's annoying to read a novel and then eat from the bowl while looking at the pot. Don't you know? Just a single heroine

Your starting point is a bit sinister. The male protagonist went to the countryside at the age of 15. If the male protagonist hadn't traveled through time, he would have died in the end. In that era, a 15-year-old male protagonist should not have been allowed to go to the countryside.

There are too few heroines! He doesn't look like a cultural person at all, let alone a literary giant!

The various previous texts are very well written in line with the times and plot, as well as the author's personal understanding. But later, Agatha was changed to disappear in order to copy Murder on the Orient Train, which made people feel very alienated. There are obviously many works and many ways to bring your works to the world, so why choose the most unreasonable method of deus ex machina? The butterfly effect caused by a best-selling author is difficult to achieve. It is understandable that the author is here for plot needs and wants to promote the protagonist to enter the international literary world. However, for the overall health of the novel, I personally think it is best not to have this kind of deus ex machina. By the way, some book friends said that the pace is too slow. Personally speaking, the pace is okay, but the length of life can be slightly less, and the humanistic atmosphere of the times can be reflected in career.

The way you wrote about your pursuit of Zhu Lin in the first part was too touching. The ambiguous relationship with Gong Xue later was very awkward. Some people used Bai Bai's book as an example. I also found Chai Dai very awkward in the second part. It's better not to write something so touching. You can just open a harem and focus on your career.

I don't know why the authors who wrote about that era all wrote that Zhu Lin and Gong Xue were good-looking. In fact, they were very ordinary, and I really didn't think they were beautiful. There was a lack of nutrition in that era, and labor was required. They had all gone to the countryside, joined teams, and done farm work. Their skin was not very good, and they were really ordinary without makeup. Writing about their external beauty is not as good as writing about their inner beauty, and it is more convincing to write about their spiritual world.

It's finally over, and the taste of joining the art troupe has changed! A lot of plots in Dream of Red Mansions made me want to read until I died!

The relationship between Zhu Lin and Zhu Lin is very well drawn, and the novel she wrote is also very well chosen. It is always related to her career. It is a good novel, and there are no poisonous points at the moment. The small flaw is that the heroine is Zhu Lin, and Gong Xue appears too frequently.

The best chronicle I have read recently, worth spending money to read

. Time has caught up with you. Zhu Lin was about to get married in 1979. She starred in a movie in 1980. She probably got divorced again around 80. It seems that she was not supported as an actress.

The protagonist's relationship with Gong Xue is completely passive and unwilling to let go, and Gong Xue's feelings for the protagonist are inexplicable! She knows that the protagonist has a partner!

The writing is really good. The author has his own ideas. Although the novel written by the protagonist in the book is also stitched together, it has its own originality. It is not just a copy of the book! The kneading is very natural and not fragmented. Not only that, the overall writing is also very smooth and picturesque. The rhythm is slow and eloquent, making people sink into reading. This is great. If you want to give a perfect score of 10, you can score 7.5 Points so far. You could have scored 8 points. The 0.5 Points deducted are because there are signs of starting a harem (Zhu Lin Gong Xue)?

I originally thought it was good, but the plot of Orient Express was so confusing to me that I gave up on it. I hope your next game can be written better and not create such an imaginary world.

The author's writing is very delicate, the character dialogue and plot direction are good, and the several novels he copied are also very suitable. Most of them are described in the form of books. This is really well handled. My personal suggestion is to reduce the description of the movie, which is a bit different from the style of the whole book. I can tell it a little to explain. The main thing is the story itself, which has a sense of life and reality. The people in the novel are not like NPCs. Each supporting role has its own characteristics. I think this book is excellent.

Memories of a Generation

I just finished reading the chapter title: Hello, Tomorrow My only feeling is that if the author does not accept Gong Xue, I will no longer read entertainment articles! No matter how the author plans to deal with Zhu Lin and Gong Xue's problems, as long as they can be dealt with!

For those of us who lived in the so-called innocent era of the 1980s and 1990s, being simple and sincere is good enough. It's great to read a novel that makes you feel relaxed and comfortable, a livable job, a relationship to look forward to, and a sense of participation in the times. The warm and ordinary atmosphere of life and the upward pursuit of characters are the splendor of that era, plain but memorable.

Reading this book made me feel very calm. The protagonist was not in a rage or shocked at all times. I felt very comfortable while reading the book! When I reach middle age, my relationship changes and the economy goes down. I have always been impetuous during this period, but magically, this book calmed me down! The author is talented, I hope he can keep writing

I ordered it all in advance. I started reading the plot of Red Mansions intermittently. I have written more than a hundred chapters and am still writing Red Mansions. Just tell me where I don't write Red Mansions. I will just read which chapter. I will save some money.

I feel that Zhu Lin can be excluded from heroines who write chronicle stories in the future 😓

It is well written and truly reflects the times. Whether it is people's spiritual outlook or the characteristics of the times in various places, it is basically in line with the reality. The author's writing style is popular and smooth, and the main characters have distinct images. What is most commendable is the emotional description of the protagonist, which not only expresses his love for Zhu, but also expresses his sympathy for Gong. It is completely in line with the moral standards of that era, which is about being passionate but not polite. It is contrary to the stallion harem in other era novels, which is not in line with the social environment at that time. I would like to mention two shortcomings. First, the protagonist's works are a bit bland and have no real sensational effect, or the atmosphere is not enough, which means that the excitement is slightly insufficient; second, the business description is too superficial and does not conform to real business operations, especially the business performance of the cultural industry, which reduces the realism of reading. I hope the author will pay attention to it in his new book. Come on

After reading the first 80 chapters, I feel that the story is too bland, like a blank piece of paper. In fact, when each work is finished, you can add a little more peripheral description to make the production more enjoyable

I just finished reading the latest chapter and I like it very much. Come on, author!