Villain Boss? the Protagonist's Godfather!

I've read half of the current update, and I don't even know what the main character and the Duke of Windsor are fighting over and over again. Anyway, I don't know what it's about. There aren't many plots about raising a daughter that I want to see. I suggest the author learn how to tell stories in other people's novels. It's completely unclear.

Didn't the author read it himself when he wrote the book? "A Game Called ×××" is used to describe the game. And the sentence in the first chapter, "explaining it to the protagonist of the game who will later cause his own death", don't you think it's weird?

I've read Chapter 24 so far. Is this the first climax? But the look and feel is still a bit confusing First of all, from the beginning to here, the main line of the story is still unclear. The protagonist's identity as a villain does not trigger much plot, and the interaction with his adopted daughter is very limited, let alone any warm daily life. The only relatively clear long-term goal is to send the adopted daughter to become a saint, but a considerable part of the narrative focus falls on the struggle for power with the local nobles. The general framework is actually clear, but maybe the narrative is too fragmented and loose. It clearly creates an atmosphere of urgency but makes it difficult to empathize with what is pressing. Secondly, this is a game article - at least it is advertised as such, but the story frequently includes plots such as "developments that should not appear in the original plot" and "things that have never happened in the game". As a time traveler, the foresight is only reflected in some places with a thin sense of existence. It is inevitable that people feel that the author is sparing no effort to try to block this "information gap advantage". In this case, it would be okay to change to an aboriginal protagonist. In Kohaku-ryu novels, deviations between known information and current development usually happen in the middle and later stages, right? As for the advantages... The writing is bland and straightforward but surprisingly easy to read, without the bad phrasing habits, bad jokes or stiff dialogue of some novice novels. Anyway, let's read on a little further. I'll report back after I investigate further. (Screams for maximum poison resistance

The plot has no theme, and the male protagonist cannot sustain the entire book.

The last investment opportunity will be used on this. Please give me some help from the author.

Give it a try and turn your bicycle into a motorcycle! ! !

Come on, author! The plot arrangement is a bit messy. The recent plot could use some "farming" scenes, which might make it more enjoyable. Also, the author of Shawang should write more plots about the interaction between the protagonist and the "protagonist". The ambiguity is really sweet.

Come on, author, definitely come on

I have already written 80,000 words, hold on, I must hold on

And this has nearly a hundred monthly votes, so I have to write it down until it's put on the shelves to see how good it is.

The protagonist is the godfather of Saint Mary, come and invest, come!

I also give you a monthly pass, come on, author

I give you all the recommendation votes, cheers for the author

The plot is messy and has no center, and I don't know what the protagonist is doing. Looking very confused

When I saw the name of the protagonist, I had to think of it, Made in Heaven