A Kind Black Magician Does Not Dream of a Yandere Princess

Great book! ! ! High-quality food-level western fantasy! ! !

1. The writing style is rather gorgeous, which I don't like very much. The advantage is that the design is more clever. The disadvantage is that the atmospheric, non-core setting text is mixed with key information and plot advancement. If you read it too fast, you will not understand it. 2. In the emotional drama, the initial favorability is high. The better aspect is that the main wife is strong and the male protagonist is more resistant. This has room for improvement. The assistant teacher and the little princess were almost given away before they were released, which is a bit weak. It would be interesting if a female protagonist could be introduced to form a confrontation with the eldest princess 3. The battle scenes lack some refreshing slashing and have more fake battles. It is recommended that there be more pure battles and fights without stacking settings. 4. The protagonist, the protagonist still has strength, rises quickly, and has a unique and powerful route. Facing the female lead, she is a bit weak (psychologically active but behaviorally passive), and hits hard at other times. It is recommended to make more "active choices" so that we can see what is special about him 5. Compared with the royal setting, you can see that the gorgeous voice, whether it agrees with the taste or not, will always represent the author's intention

Reading this book requires brains, but I probably lost this thing ten years ago.

In the new book period, I hope all readers will support me, follow more updates, and comment more. Of course, it would be better if I can reward you with a few tickets (fly rubs hands) The daily number will be stable at 4,000 words before it is put on the shelves, and it will be increased to 6,000 after it is put on the shelves. It will not be unfinished! You can discuss more about the plot and characters. Your feedback is very important and is my motivation to continue writing!

Where is Shennong

I just read a few chapters. The writing is really good. I also like the character of the protagonist. It's so awesome. Come on.

The Chinese name in the introduction is a little weird, why don't we use Seravi's name in the back?

The writing is very good and the prose is gorgeous, but it is so gorgeous that you need to use your brain to read it. In this day and age, such books are rare. Read it and cherish it.

In the faint flicker of fluorescent light, her eyes will be as absent-minded as the current Kimberby Mine

Do you know black magic? Something scrawled! Take it for granted!

I feel like the character of the protagonist is not to my taste. I prefer to watch the protagonist with an indifferent character now, but the rest is okay.

It's okay. The monthly ticket is gone at the end of the month. I'll give it to you next month.

The text is a bit too heavy-handed and there are too many words, which makes the impression not so good, but there is nothing wrong with the rest.

The vocabulary is too packed, too gorgeous, and very tiring to read. One paragraph may not provide much useful information, and the narrative is a bit messy in some places. The gorgeous sentences are not a shortcoming in themselves, but overuse will make the impression worse. The rest is actually fine so far.

As far as I have read Chapter 5, there are a lot of doubts: 1. The protagonist's predecessor should be a teacher, why is the level so low? 2. Why does he only have this kind of black magic and not others? 3. Why is the mana level so low and can only be used once? (Powerful magic costs a lot of mana, I can understand it) 4. Why do you only think about black magic when it comes to combat literacy, not fireballs and the like? 5. I can understand that I swear to be a good person, but not to the point where others are kicking their noses and thinking about other things. Wait for me to continue reading.

The emotional scene with the little princess is so sweet. I have never seen such a well-written emotional scene in the fantasy genre.

Are you really a newbie? It really suits my taste

Too many names appeared in a short period of time. I didn't have a deep impression on these people because I didn't have any background knowledge. I remember I was a little dizzy😵‍💫Others were okay

I hope to describe the story between the little princess and the protagonist in the past, such as the academy, such as the first meeting, to enrich the emotional experience of the two people. Now it is easy to be monotonous in the follow-up. Of course, the protagonist is wearing a costume, and there are conflicts between the present and past protagonists.

It's a pity, it's rare to find an author who can write emotional dramas that suit my taste😐

Wow, aren't you the one who won't mess up?😭

I added it to my bookshelf, but I just think the cover looks nice. How is the content? Please tell me the general plot up to now.