Temple of Bones

First of all, there is a problem with the career system constructed by the author. Whether you can get new skills depends on your luck when upgrading. Whether skills improve quickly or not also depends on whether they are compatible. This is not known before the integration. In other words, it also depends on luck. At these 2 points, I no longer want to read it. After all, the undead and wizards are basically for explosive troops and research. (I am anyway) My personal suggestion is to change the settings. Skills can only be obtained when upgrading. This is really idiotic. This means that there is only a gap between good schools and poor schools in terms of resources, but there is no difference in teaching. What's more, I've already gone to school and haven't learned any skills yet. How should I put it, it makes people feel weird just looking at it. Even if you want to limit the acquisition of skills, you can change it to the level where you can't practice it. You can directly change the probability of acquiring it when you break through. It feels very strange. Let me give you an example. This is equivalent to a blacksmith. He can make farm tools, but can he learn to make combat weapons? No, he wants to obtain this skill with probability. Does the author think it's too far off? And the way of upgrading skills really makes me feel speechless. The proficiency level is upgraded, and you can naturally improve it if you use it more. Anyway, in my opinion, wizards or mages are obviously industries that play on intelligence. It is a bit outrageous for you to use proficiency to upgrade skills. Self-improvement is better than this setting. After all, if the protagonist has become a god in the future, it would be a bit unreasonable if you tell me that after he gets the first-level skill, he has to practice it for 10 days and a half to reach full proficiency. The second thing is the golden finger. If there is no thunder behind this golden finger, it will still be like the situation where no big thunder explodes. I can conclude that this book will not be able to reach the position of food and grass. Such an obvious artifact was explained by the protagonist with a golden finger. It's okay, but it depends on how the author comes back later. If the circle does not come back, the logic of this book will be greatly deducted. Regarding this point, I suggest that it is better to change it directly to talents and mutate due to the influence of time travel, so that there will be no unfilled hole in the future. If you even want to expand some additional plots in this regard, you can also expand it by saying that the protagonist's time travel is a conspiracy. After talking about the shortcomings, let's talk about the advantages. There are no big problems with the plot logic, and the character creation is also up to standard. At least there are no poisonous points so far. However, the logical problems in the worldview structure, especially the professional structure, make this novel can only satisfy my hunger in my eyes. Finally, come on, the author, and wish you a great success.

I would like to give you some advice, but the author doesn't want to listen to it. The early stage was too bland and not exciting enough. The character of the protagonist is also too calm and doesn't look like a teenager. I know your first two novels were like this, but they really need to be changed. At present, there is nothing or anyone that can threaten the protagonist, and the mini-boss has not appeared. It cannot stimulate the reader's adrenaline, so the reader will not buy it. Reading the novel is just for fun. The novel has written more than 20 chapters, and it is time to usher in the first small climax. I can't see you laying the groundwork at the moment. If it continues like this Go on, you can't get into the high-quality novels. I know you don't like to hear it. Generally speaking, in those high-quality novels, each small chapter has a small climax. From the beginning of the small chapter, the climax is paved and foreshadowed, so as to attract readers. This is the case with the best-selling novels I have read so far, including the great novels. This is just my humble opinion. My knowledge is not high. If anything is wrong, please forgive me.

Come on, let's share some bones

Corpse Girl

Have you ever been an undead person? You just write, some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

The setting is pretty good, but the writing is really not very good 😐 Even if the undead spell is restrained by light, it is also restrained by fire and thunder. It is not a Chinese fantasy. Where does the restraint come from? Isn't what this fire thunder can do to the undead just cause explosive damage? Which attribute can't be exploded if I change it? At the beginning, it is said that the protagonist's father is a seed at level 3, and the governor is only at level 3 or 4. Then the protagonist bursts into a 700,000-word speedrun and forgets it. The sister he met in the orphanage can also explode at speed. Does that mean that both Tianzhong and those higher than Tianzhong have a chance to upgrade at the speed of light? The protagonist's father is just an ordinary person who died on the way. So far, it's okay. Maybe it's because of poor grades, so it's speeding up. What this corpse girl wrote is simply based on the defense 😅 Others don't talk about summons. Bao*meng just doesn't get into the elf ball. I've never heard of using a trainer as food. You want to eat the trainer and teammates when you have nothing to do. Not to mention that you are a summoner. To put it bluntly, you are the master of the summoned object. The servant wants to eat the master and the master's teammates every day. Handling, this kind of thing can actually be solved in 700,000 words 🤔 Did the author play *m, but m fought back, and then he became m? 🙄 The book written by the opening academy was okay, but after inexplicably fighting the boss, I felt that the book collapsed

All I can say is that the best thing about the entire novel is the introduction!

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This is my first time trying a theme with the undead as the main theme. Any suggestions/opinions/reviews about this book can be left here and the author will read it. We will find ways to adopt the useful parts. If it involves hamstrings or parts that were originally considered in the plan, nothing can be done for the time being and can only be licked off as an experience package. The author welcomes communication and would like to thank every reader who leaves a review, especially a long review. Regardless of whether you like this work or not, you have all contributed to the creation of the book "The Court of Bones". Thank you from the bottom of my heart. However, the author will delete any comments involving personal attacks or dirty words as soon as possible. There are no negative comments posted on the suggested floors. For the sake of old readers and new readers, after a period of publicity, the author will take a screenshot and reserve it as an opinion, and then delete it. Thank you all again and wish you all a happy life!

Like the title says, is it so difficult for the protagonist to even stand in front of this Sister Yun? The undead have been conquered by heaven? Don't I think they should be mutually reinforcing each other? Even if the protagonist is defeated, how can you play with the undead? You are born inferior to others. Even if you become a god in the later stage, won't you still be inferior to others?

After reading 6 chapters, I really can't stand the levels created by the author. It's not like the author is a master and has a reader base, and the created levels have no logical beauty. They increase the difficulty of reading, comprehension and memory out of thin air. It's true SB

I've finished reading it. It's good enough for now. The writing is smooth and there are no conflicts in settings. The flaws are that the characters are not full enough and there are not enough reasons for conflicts. By the way, the author's AI picture is really ugly and interrupts the immersion of reading. It is recommended not to use it or use it sparingly.

It's a bit ridiculous. The classic writing style is sometimes creative. If the writing style is good, you can deal with it casually or seek stability.

Last time I saw something summoned by the protagonist, it was summoned from another territory, as if it was stolen. Can you tell me how the author is doing it now? Is it a struggle for authority? Or what? The last time I saw this, I didn't want to read it. How high-end did you think your profession was? The result is that it was stolen from other territories.

Author's introduction The first few professions are interesting, but after the protagonist's profession is revealed, there is no desire to read 🤭

Call your classmates Brother Li, Brother Wang, what the hell?

My favorite type, but a little afraid of eunuchs

Looking at it now, I always feel that this character is particularly disgusting. Killing rather than abusing living beings, his behavior has already entered the devil's way. No wonder people in the past particularly hated evil devils and heretics, because of the existence of such people. Eating meat is the instinct of living things, but if you eat living people like a bear with a human face, then your species deserves to be exterminated! If you think this behavior is right, if it happens to you, please don't scream! Please don't yell or curse in pain!

The plot and settings are good, but there are too few. It depends on whether you can grasp the writing skills. Look forward to it.

I read Chapter 45 and it was as bland as a child playing house.

The plot setting and characters are more to my liking. I would like a comment to encourage you.

Great progress, I like the bond very much

Beat the old dragon and this bee to death

This kind of world doesn't have a good combat platform. It doesn't use map cannons and it doesn't open up your field of vision. If you're blind, you're still a time traveler.

I can't say that the writing is bad, but I really can't watch it. I can't evaluate the character of the male protagonist. Since he doesn't follow the route of a hot-blooded young man, he should be stable and stubborn. But at the beginning, he overestimated his abilities and did dangerous things that were beyond his ability. He almost died. Then he continued to play. He could obviously take a break and continue to use skills, but for the sake of small profits, he had to squeeze himself beyond the limit. People still use skills when they are not awake, without considering whether it will damage the foundation and affect the potential. I don't understand why you are so anxious?

Come on, I watched it for free before, but this time it is officially supported. But now I don't feel that the author has made any progress.

I just saw the first 4 pictures. The first three golden chapters really have no desire to read. Even if it is just a normal beginning of the story, it is so messy. I am convinced.

Shouldn't the mummy be the pharaoh?

I ruined the book myself. The characterization at the beginning was quite good, but suddenly the ending was what I wanted to do.

How did the Great Supreme come up with the idea to save people, become invincible under the myth and then be destroyed?