MC Player's Travel Diary

Didn't you notice? It's getting boring from now on.

It feels rare that in this era there is such a gentle protagonist who looks like an early cute person. Instead of collecting a harem or plundering, he tries to make up for the regrets of the original work. It reminds me of reading travel stories when I was a child.

The protagonist is like a patriarch in a patriarchal society. He thinks he is arranging the lives of his children without considering his own wishes. If others want to interfere, he will feel that his power is threatened and will use force to subjugate him and make the world run according to his own ideas. Even if he is an outsider, everyone is a puppet under his control.

Why was it charged after it was put on the shelves? Bad review

Liuliu 😥😥😥 becomes a nanny article

Does the author want to write a quick travel story? Then you have to at least increase the amount of updates before you can write a fast travel article well, otherwise basically no one will follow it with your simple writing method 😥

What was your purpose in writing this novel? Is it for the sake of reading and making money, or is it just to write out the ideas in your mind for fun? If it's the former, then you have to keep it updated and never be a eunuch, which is very difficult; if it's the latter, then you can write it yourself and be happy with it, without having to worry about the life and death of the readers, which is easy. It all depends on you as the author. You should make up your mind before writing a novel. Do you want to stick to writing a book or do you want to be a three-minute sensation? Author, you have to answer this question from readers so that readers can decide whether it is necessary to read your book.

The idea is quite good, but the writing is too brief. It's all mentioned in one stroke, and there's not much to see.

It's not good. The original novel is just like a joke. Why is it that when it comes to MC, he is just a fun person? I'm so stupid.

The first part is okay, but the further you go, the harder it becomes. Some worlds are a bit cloudy or can't keep up with new content deconstructions. What does it mean when a bright sword world suddenly pops up in your world view of a bunch of Japanese and American comics? Bushgomen? It can be seen that the author's subsequent content is more self-interested, and he writes whatever he dreams about. And the further it goes, the less interesting it becomes, and it's a bit boring to tell the truth.

If you don't want to accept it, just write normally and have to collect CP.

If you don't accept her, don't take the initiative to contact her. Doesn't it mean you are giving away your daughter if you write like this?

Being able to write a running account of 1.15 Million words is too powerful.

I feel like Fulian's storyline is enough for now. If you don't change the original cp and still watch it, it's better to read the original work. It's not interesting to follow the protagonist group after changing Nan Yong's fate without changing anything. It's better to write more words to describe the protagonist's influence on the entire world, or change the map. (I read this novel just to see the protagonist change the world and the heroine rewrite the imperfect ending.)

Another book in which I don't know whether the protagonist is crazy or the author is crazy. It's a mess.

Boring, I don't want to watch it for free

I came in to read it for the MC. The protagonist has an MC template, and then travels to different worlds through portals to take adventures or make up for the regrets of the original work. This kind of similar idea is what I like better, but... After reading a few chapters, I feel that the details are missing and very dry. The content jumps between chapters are also too abrupt. It may be that the plot is pushed too fast. It should be better if you slow down and write slowly. I read an MC+ inner room novel on Yang Persimmon before, and I thought it was okay. Of course, the ending part was a bit bad at the end, but overall it was pretty good.

The shortcomings of this book are still very obvious I read about ten chapters I only saw one person Except for this person, it can be said to be empty.

I've just read a few chapters, is it too dry? The kind that can lower the water level by several centimeters even if you put this book into the ocean. Author, give me some water, the desert is not as dry as you.

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I don't even have to read a single world in Chapter 20, I already know what kind of novel it is.

First of all, I would like to thank the author for writing MC stories. I am a reader who likes to read MC Goldfinger. At least one book spreads the world view, even if it is very immature and trivial. But fan fiction has room to let oneself go... Then I started to talk about my opinions. The main line of this book is not clear enough, and there is no fixed center. As the creator of the MC world, Wang Xiang has no problem being a powerful traveler who travels around. After all, no matter how powerful the mod is, he can create a dimensional demon, but the protagonist's state of mind is not worthy of this golden finger, and he is not the gangster next door. Why doesn't the author open his mind to the route that Chao Lezi plays to make people laugh hard? It's okay to save people and punish evil and promote good. The problem is that the rhythm is too loose and the characters are too casual. The influence and intensity exerted by the protagonist are wasted. For example, Emiya Shirou's training. You can have him form a group with the protagonists of other series to find a world with moderate intensity to open up wasteland. Many people have been drawn into the MC world. The characters finally settled down and came to this place to enjoy themselves. Even if they were not brought in, they were at least on good terms with each other. However, they disappeared without writing much, and there was no room for them to appear (including but not limited to Gou Zi in JOJO, Saber and Jin Shining in Xingyue, Xiao Xiami in the martial arts world, Monkey Brother in the mythical world, and the protagonist group in the Pirates world). Of course the author can feel that this is not the same world. There is no need to mix people together for fear of ruining the writing, but it is a pity to waste these characters who already have a fixed impression by only mentioning them hastily, because this proves that the author's attitude in writing this book is that except for the protagonist group, the rest are all NPCs, so it will not leave a deep impression on the readers. Then why do you need to write this copy? The purpose of writing a copy is to see the changes in these characters... Isn't the point of fan fiction just to let these familiar characters find their own path while playing tricks? By the middle stage, it was obvious that the author realized this problem. The MC protagonist is already very strong. It's so strong and too fast, so I can't write many chapters in one dungeon, so I thought about being the protagonist of the dungeon, the grandpa or the master. But with so many apprentices, both the protagonist and Celiai just take them and throw them away. It's like there was no such person before. It's like opening a chocolate 🍫 only to find that there's only a dime left, wasting the previous laying... Whether it's farming and development, whether it's a character joke, or whether it's a relationship with the protagonist group, there must be one is the main factor. If the rhythm is not good, it is easy to catch everything but not catch anything... To be honest, I really think that if this book grasps the center and spreads things out, slows down the pace and slowly describes the changes in the characters, there will be a lot of potential to be tapped. For example, the copy has characters and original comics or animations from other worlds. Wouldn't this be able to create a lot of jokes? For example, the martial arts world may have the belief of the Great Sage, and Xiao Xiami is a costumer. The Yuezhe is familiar with Brother Monkey, so why can't they join in to make fun of each other, "Great Sage, it turns out that you are really in love with the White Bone Demon..." "Hey, you are such a young boy, how can you make fun of me!" This is a picture that you can get when you think about it... Also, for example, there is a One Piece comic in the world of Juju, how will Gojo Satoru react to the Straw Hats... Fans, fans, in addition to respecting the characters of the original characters, creating copies is to make connections. Moved, what would happen if Shirou Emiya got the Ultraman Transformation Device, what would it be like for Naruto to practice True Senjutsu, what would it be like for Little Xiami to follow Brother Monkey on a pilgrimage to the Flower and Fruit Mountain, what would it be like if an unlicensed knight practiced the Fist of the North Star and really met Kenjiro and Rao... The possibilities are endless, and the protagonist Wang Xiang is the anchor point in the center that gives the character possibilities, but this book has not fully developed the potential of MC Goldfinger, which is really a pity...

I used the audiobook function until chapter 27 but got tired of it. It was a typical nanny's running account.

I can't stand it even if it's limited to free. It's super invincible and has a short story. It's all about being cool and mindless. You can change the world faster than I can change my pants.

No, brother, you are gone.

It's limited time and free again, what's the first time?

The nanny story seemed fresh at first, but then it became boring and all kinds of nonsense.

The sword drawn is obviously very strong, why should it be weakened?

I haven't read why it's over 600 chapters. Most of the people who commented are interns. Those who said it was good early on are also interns.

Seeing that DC didn't look back, I flipped through the catalog and found that 70% of them were Japanese comics.