Back to Xiaoling Village in 1985

If the writing is too detailed, it will be too boring. There is no need to get up and down, but it is just like writing a novel and describing everything. Anyway, the readers are not very happy.

Picture 1: General plan (if you can't see clearly, there are detailed pictures below) Picture 2: Details of the main building, front building, small patio, and backyard vegetable patch Picture 3: Details of the front yard Approval, review, proofreading, project leader, designer, and draftsman: Qingshi Maiyu. Drawing date: 2025.4.29. Date of drawing: 2025.4.29 (10:27), In Qingxiu District, Nanning.

I want to talk about this book and give some advice to the author. I have read Chapter 346 now. One thing I feel is very strange. Of course, the book extends from the perspective of snakes to the cultivation of traditional Chinese medicine. It is actually good, but when describing the dialogue between father and daughter, it always makes me feel like I am not talking to a three-year-old. The dialogue between children seems to be for the readers. For example, the paragraph at the end of Chapter 345 is really awkward. Another point is that although sometimes children and adults will inadvertently omit a little bit when speaking in real life, like: Mom, don't, ah (hit him), they are very good. This kind of description actually feels that the first-person perspective scene is not as comfortable to read as the third-person perspective writing, "Xingshi screamed loudly and shouted to Grandma, don't hit them, they are very good." Because of this kind of daily writing, we often do other things and listen to the novel, or sometimes read it very quickly, and it is easy to not understand the meaning. I hope the author can see my suggestion, please come on 😁

Children need to be cute and silly to be realistic. Too sensible is not fun.

The results of this book are better than my first book on farming. Is it estimated to be on the shelves for RMB 200,000? I feel like I can get it in the second round (not this week), I don't want 300,000 words to be on the shelves, please!

It's too detailed and the plot is slow. It's easy to get tired watching.

The junction of Guangxi, Guangdong and Hunan is Hezhou, Guangxi 🙂. Just past Hezhou is Zhaoqing, Guangdong, and a little further up is Yongzhou, Hunan.

The protagonist's eldest brother is a bastard, he didn't give me enough money, but he didn't pay for the protagonist's mother when she was sick?

How many chapters are planned for us to see Sanqi become a reality?

It seems that four readers have seen it. I'm so lucky. In fact, I think it's quite normal. Maybe it's too long? It's more than 800 words, but it's very reserved… I won't dare to write it next time.